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Emily Clark

2nd Grade Informational Writing Module

https://clark-infowritingmodule.weebly.com/
1. Instructional Objectives:

Given nonfiction texts in a school setting, students will select a topic of interest, research that

topic, organize their gathered information, draft an informational writing piece, revise their

writing, edit their writing, and publish their writing.

Given nonfiction texts at appropriate levels for research in a school setting, students will write an

informative text in which they introduce a topic, use facts and definitions to develop points, and

provide a concluding statement or section.

2. Assessment Descriptions:

The assessments consist of two quizzes and a final summative assessment of the students’

completed informational writing pieces using a rubric.

The two quizzes are a Research Quiz and a Revising and Editing Quiz. The Research

Quiz was made in Quizziz and assesses the students’ ability to use nonfiction text features in

order to research a topic. The Revising and Editing Quiz tests how well students are able to

group information together, as well as their command of various grade-appropriate grammar

skills.

The on-grade level rubric for the students’ informational writing addresses four areas:

ideas, organization, style, and conventions. I also have a modified rubric for my English

Language Learners that instead focuses on linguistic complexity, vocabulary, language control,

and conventions. For this rubric, linguistic complexity counts twice.


3. Assessment Data:

Research Quiz Results

Question 1 Question 2 Question 3 Question 4 Question 5


Student Score
Responses Responses Responses Responses Responses
Student A C A A C A 100
Student B C A A C C 80
Student C C A B C C 60
Student D C B C C A 60

Revising and Editing Quiz Results

Question 1 Question 2 Question 3 Question 4 Question 5


Student Score
Responses Responses Responses Responses Responses
Student A B A C C A 100
Student B B A C A A 80
Student C B A A C A 80
Student D B A A A A 60

Informational Writing Rubric Results

Student Category 1 Category 2 Category 3 Category 4 Grade


Student A 4/4 4/4 4/4 3.5/4 98
Student B 4/4 4/4 4/4 4/4 100
Student C 4/4 4/4 4/4 3/4 83
Student D 4/4 4/4 4/4 3.5/4 98

4. Assessment Data Analysis:

For the Research Quiz, there is a mean of 75, maximum of 100, and minimum of 60. For

the Revising and Editing Quiz, there is a mean of 80, maximum of 100, and minimum of 60.

After reviewing the questions of both quizzes, the questions seem to be worded clearly, but this

data is in line with what I’ve seen throughout the year. The students are slightly stronger with

mechanics than with researching information and using text features. There are many nonfiction
text features that students are responsible for mastering in second grade, while grammar and

punctuation is more focused, concentrating on capitalization, punctuating the ends of sentences,

and using commas correctly.

For the writing piece, there is a mean of 94.75, maximum of 100, and minimum of 83.

Most of the points that were taken off were for Category 4, which is Conventions. While this

may seem contrary to the quiz data, seventy-five percent of my class are English Language

Learners, so many of them sometimes struggle with spelling and subject-verb agreement. If this

interferes with the meaning of their writing, points have to be taken off, according to the rubric.

5. Field Notes:

3/24/20

 One student couldn’t find where to post on Edmodo. I asked if he put in the class code. I

also adjusted the wording slightly in the directions under the “Plan” tab. It turns out I

need to “Accept” students into my class.

 Another asked where he could find the topic, so I told him he could pick the topic.

3/25/20

 One student had trouble playing the Digital Citizenship video, but it was working. It told

him maybe it was just slow and to make sure he has Flash player turned on. If not, I told

him to skip and come back to it later.

3/27/20
 Two students turned in a picture of handwritten writing rather than using digital tools.

 Students seem confused as to how to turn in their writing using Assignment dropbox.

 Only one student has used the Edmodo discussions and done the quiz so far. I hope to

see more by the end of the week.

4/6/20

 I extended the due date since many students are still not finished.

 A student struggling but did not clarify why. She only asked if she could pick the topic.

4/10/20

 Students were confused about how to submit their final writing pieces.

4/14/20

 Some students are trying to turn their writing into the discussion board. I am closing the

discussion board.

6. Evaluation Rubric from Peer

Content Module Review for Emily Clark


Peer Reviewer: Lauren Caslen Review Date:
Unacceptable (1 Point) Acceptable (2 Points) Target (3 Points) Points
Content curation tool is linked to the 1. Content curation tool is Must have all of these criteria:
online course. OR embedded (not linked) in the online 1. Content curation is embedded (not
Curated ResourcesModule 4

 Content curation tool selected course. AND linked) in the online course.
from the article “17 of the Best 2. Content curation tool selected 2. Content curation tool selected from
Content Curation Tools” and from the article “17 of the Best the article “17 of the Best Content
links to a minimum of 4 unique Content Curation Tools” and links to Curation Tools” and links to a
web resources. OR a minimum of 6 unique web minimum of 8 unique web resources
 Many duplicate web sites resources. (do not select more than one from a
included. OR BUT Also… single domain name.)
 One duplicate web site included. 3. Resources match the instructional
 Tool selected was not from the
content curation list. OR OR objectives, are high-quality and age 2
 Resources do not match the Resources do not exactly appropriate.
instructional objectives. OR match the instructional 4. ALL links are active.
 Most resources are not age- objectives. OR 5. Annotations are descriptive and
appropriate. OR  Some resources are not age- qualitative.
 More than one link is not appropriate. OR 6. Annotations are age-appropriate to
active. OR  One of the links is not active. guide learners to use of the
 Annotations are OR resources.
missing/incomplete.  Annotations are complete but
some simply provide a content
summary.

Online Module does not include any 1.Online Module contains at least Must have all of these criteria:
social media. OR two different social media apps. 1.Online Module contains 2 or
Module 6– Social Media and DiscussionsModule 5

 Social media is not effectively AND more different social media apps.


integrated. OR 2. All links to social media are 2.All links to social media are active.
 Social media links are not active. AND 3.Social media is effectively integrated
active. OR 3. Social media is integrated into the into the course content in a
 Course does not contain course content in a meaningful way. meaningful way.


sufficient discussions. OR
Discussions do not match
AND
4. Course contains at least two
4. Course contains multiple (>2)
discussions. 3
course objectives. discussions. AND 5. Clear match between the
5. Discussions match content. AND discussion question and the
6. At least one discussion post is instructional objectives.
created using a social media format. 6. Discussion focuses on higher level
thinking.
7. At least two discussions are posted
using a social media format (ie.
Facebook, Pinterest, Twitter, etc).
Course rubric does not 1.Course rubrics contain Must have all of these criteria:
contain sufficient levels. OR levels that are well defined. AND 1.Course rubric contains
Communication

 Course rubric does not contain 2.Course rubric contains levels that are well defined and fit the
criteria that align with content. at least two levels of student learning target.
OR performance. AND 2. Course rubric contains 3
Assessment – Rubrics and Quizzes

 Quiz does not measure the 3.Rubric criterion align or more levels to distinguish between
stated objectives. OR with overall content. AND student performance.
 Quiz contains grammatical
and/or spelling errors. OR
4.Quiz questions match
instructional objectives. AND
3. Rubric criteria directly
align with the activity it is intended to 3
 Quiz is not created using an 5.Quizzes are assess.
online tool (ie. Quizlet or grammatically correct and do not 4. Quiz questions match
Google Forms). contain any misspellings. AND instructional objectives.
6.Quiz is created using an online 5. All multiple choice
tool such as Quizlet or Google questions have at least 3-4 response
Forms. options; No True/False questions.
6. Quizzes are
grammatically correct and do not
contain any misspellings.
7.Quizzes are created using an online
tool such as Quizlet or Google Forms.
1.Online Module does not show 1.Online Module utilizes 3+ Must have all of these criteria:
Diversity and AccessibilityModule 8

evidence or has limited evidence of elements of Universal Design for


meeting the needs of diverse Learning. AND 1. Online Module clearly utilizes
learners. Universal Design for Learning
2. Online Module offers some (6+ checkpoints).
evidence of Differentiated
Instruction. AND
2. Online Module utilizes
Differentiated Instruction as
3
evidenced by differentiated
3. Online Module shows evidence of assignments.
some accessibility adaptations. AND 3. Online Module includes specific
accessibility and/or assistive
4. Links to (2+) assistive technology technology resources.
resources provided. 4. Multiple (4+) assistive technology
resources are linked to.
Content and 1. Much of the instructional 1. Most of the instructional Must have all of these criteria:
Organization content I needed to complete content I needed to complete
the content module was the content module was 1. All of the instructional content I
missing. OR present. AND needed to complete the content
2. I couldn’t access the site on 2. I could access the site on the module was present.
the first try. OR first try. I had to request access 2. I could access the site and all
3. I had to request access on 3 or on no more than 2 embedded embedded content and links on
more embedded content content and/or links. AND the first try.
and/or links. OR 3. It was easy for work through 3. It was easy to work through the
4. Navigating through the course the course most of the time. course. I knew what to do next.
was confusing OR it was hard AND 4. There is no extraneous or
to find things OR there is a lot 4. There is some extraneous placeholder content on the site. 2
of extraneous content on the content on the site, but it 5. The site is well designed and
site. OR wasn’t distracting or confusing. visually appealing. All text is
5. The text on the site is hard to AND legible.
read. OR 5. The site is well designed and 6. There were no grammatical,
6. There are multiple visually appealing. All text is punctuation or spelling errors.
grammatical, punctuation or legible. AND
spelling errors. 6. There are one or two
grammatical, punctuation or
spelling errors.
Total Score
13
Peer Reviewer Comments:
Emily, I thought your list of resources were great and perfect for your lesson. While your annotations were also perfect for explaining a
summary of the resource, I think they could have possibly been a little more “kid-friendly” for your second graders. Other than that, great job
with pulling together these resources. I think the ones you gathered will really help your students.
-I love the way you put together your discussions for your students. I thought everything flowed really well and it was really easy to follow. I was
not able to access the PebbleGo page (as you said I probably wouldn’t be able to), however, the Edmodo discussion questions and the
organization of this page was great!
-The quiz you created in Edmodo was perfect for your objectives (even though I got one wrong…simple mistake. LOL). The rubric you created
also tied everything in together and aligned everything to the students’ performance and what they were expected to complete. Great job on this
module!
-I like the fact that you gave your students several ways to write (Microsoft Word, Class Blog, Google Classroom). On this same page, you
included the Informational Writing Checklist in English and Spanish which is wonderful for our ESOL students. I love the “talk typer” and the
read aloud resource. Perhaps my favorite thing on this page, however, is the reminder to keep it friendly when giving feedback – “2 stars and 1
wish” – this is so neat!
-All in all, this was a great online content module. There were a couple of grammatical mistakes (i.e. the video on the first page “different” –
“difference”). I enjoyed working my way through the pages as it was very easy to do and I believe a second grader could find his or her way
around the site as needed. I think you did a great job finding resources that aligned with your objectives and your quizzes, discussion
questions, and overall appeal of your modules were very well put together. Great job!

7. Additional Information

After making corrections and finalizing the Informational Writing Module, it was

implemented during Digital Learning Days due to COVID-19. I was not able to observe the

students while they were working and had to rely on question and comment posts through means

of a discussion board and parent communications. Students were allowed to work through the

module at their own pace, although I did provide a suggested pacing schedule for the week.

On the first day, many students seemed confused about how to use the discussion board

and the majority of class commented on what they learned from the Digital Citizenship and

Writing Process videos, since this is what they were used to doing for other online assignments. I

posted yet more directions to clarify. However, it soon became apparent that the directions were

not being read thoroughly, something that commonly takes place with this group of second

graders.
On the second day, two students’ parents inquired if the students were supposed to pick a

topic, which was stated in the module. One student had trouble finding where to post on

Edmodo. I adjusted the wording in the module directions, and I also discovered that sometimes I

needed to “Accept” them even if they used the class access code. I went ahead and accepted the

ones that had sent a request, but it seems like that would be the point of a class access code.

On the third day, one student had trouble playing the Digital Citizenship video. It was

working, but I suggested it may either just be slow to load, or to make sure that Flash Player was

being used. I suggested that he try the video again later. Students were skipping the discussions

and quizzes, so I had to send out reminders for them to make sure they did these tasks.

By the end of the week, submissions of final writing pieces started coming in. Two

students did not use the digital tools to publish their writing, but rather took a picture of

handwritten writing. Three students were confused on how to turn in their assignments using the

Assignment Dropbox, so I also allowed them to turn it in through Google Drive/G Suite. Two of

the three eventually were able to share their writing with me this way. Some tried to write about

informational books on the discussion board, which I had to close to prevent confusion. Apart

from these, I did end up getting some well-written, digitally-published writing pieces.

8. Evaluation Rubric for Peer

Content Module Review for Rachel McTier


Peer Reviewer: Emily Clark Review Date: April 8, 2020
Unacceptable (1 Point) Acceptable (2 Points) Target (3 Points) Points
Content curation tool is linked to the 1. Content curation tool is Must have all of these criteria:
online course. OR embedded (not linked) in the online 1. Content curation is embedded (not 3
Curated ResourcesModule 4

 Content curation tool selected course. AND linked) in the online course.
from the article “17 of the Best 2. Content curation tool selected 2. Content curation tool selected from
Content Curation Tools” and from the article “17 of the Best the article “17 of the Best Content
links to a minimum of 4 unique Content Curation Tools” and links to Curation Tools” and links to a
web resources. OR a minimum of 6 unique web minimum of 8 unique web resources
 Many duplicate web sites resources. (do not select more than one from a
included. OR BUT Also… single domain name.)
 Tool selected was not from the  One duplicate web site included. 3. Resources match the instructional
content curation list. OR OR objectives, are high-quality and age
 Resources do not match the Resources do not exactly appropriate.
instructional objectives. OR match the instructional 4. ALL links are active.
 Most resources are not age- objectives. OR 5. Annotations are descriptive and
appropriate. OR  Some resources are not age- qualitative.
 More than one link is not appropriate. OR 6. Annotations are age-appropriate to
active. OR  One of the links is not active. guide learners to use of the
 Annotations are OR resources.
missing/incomplete.  Annotations are complete but
some simply provide a content
summary.

Online Module does not include any 1.Online Module contains at least Must have all of these criteria:
social media. OR two different social media apps. 1.Online Module contains 2 or
Module 6– Social Media and DiscussionsModule 5

 Social media is not effectively AND more different social media apps.


integrated. OR 2. All links to social media are 2.All links to social media are active.
 Social media links are not active. AND 3.Social media is effectively integrated
active. OR 3. Social media is integrated into the into the course content in a
 Course does not contain course content in a meaningful way. meaningful way.
sufficient discussions. OR AND 4. Course contains multiple (>2)
 Discussions do not match 4. Course contains at least two
discussions. AND
discussions.
5. Clear match between the
3
course objectives.
5. Discussions match content. AND discussion question and the
6. At least one discussion post is instructional objectives.
created using a social media format. 6. Discussion focuses on higher level
thinking.
7. At least two discussions are posted
using a social media format (ie.
Facebook, Pinterest, Twitter, etc).
Course rubric does not 1.Course rubrics contain Must have all of these criteria:
contain sufficient levels. OR levels that are well defined. AND 1.Course rubric contains
Communication

 Course rubric does not contain 2.Course rubric contains levels that are well defined and fit the
criteria that align with content. at least two levels of student learning target.
OR performance. AND 2. Course rubric contains 3
Assessment – Rubrics and Quizzes

 Quiz does not measure the 3.Rubric criterion align or more levels to distinguish between
stated objectives. OR with overall content. AND student performance.
 Quiz contains grammatical 4.Quiz questions match 3. Rubric criteria directly
and/or spelling errors. OR instructional objectives. AND align with the activity it is intended to
 assess.
Quiz is not created using an
online tool (ie. Quizlet or
5.Quizzes are
grammatically correct and do not 4. Quiz questions match 1
Google Forms). contain any misspellings. AND instructional objectives.
6.Quiz is created using an online 5. All multiple choice
tool such as Quizlet or Google questions have at least 3-4 response
Forms. options; No True/False questions.
6. Quizzes are
grammatically correct and do not
contain any misspellings.
7.Quizzes are created using an online
tool such as Quizlet or Google Forms.
1.Online Module does not show 1.Online Module utilizes 3+ Must have all of these criteria:
Diversity and AccessibilityModule 8

evidence or has limited evidence of elements of Universal Design for


meeting the needs of diverse Learning. AND 5. Online Module clearly utilizes
learners. Universal Design for Learning
2. Online Module offers some (6+ checkpoints).
evidence of Differentiated 6. Online Module utilizes
Instruction. AND Differentiated Instruction as

3. Online Module shows evidence of


evidenced by differentiated
assignments.
3
some accessibility adaptations. AND 7. Online Module includes specific
accessibility and/or assistive
4. Links to (2+) assistive technology technology resources.
resources provided. 8. Multiple (4+) assistive
technology resources are linked
to.
Content and 7. Much of the instructional 7. Most of the instructional Must have all of these criteria:
Organization content I needed to complete content I needed to complete 2
the content module was the content module was 7. All of the instructional content I
missing. OR present. AND needed to complete the content
8. I couldn’t access the site on 8. I could access the site on the module was present.
the first try. OR first try. I had to request access 8. I could access the site and all
9. I had to request access on 3 or on no more than 2 embedded embedded content and links on
more embedded content content and/or links. AND the first try.
and/or links. OR 9. It was easy for work through 9. It was easy to work through the
10. Navigating through the course the course most of the time. course. I knew what to do next.
was confusing OR it was hard AND 10. There is no extraneous or
to find things OR there is a lot 10. There is some extraneous placeholder content on the site.
of extraneous content on the content on the site, but it 11. The site is well designed and
site. OR wasn’t distracting or confusing. visually appealing. All text is
11. The text on the site is hard to AND legible.
read. OR 11. The site is well designed and 12. There were no grammatical,
12. There are multiple visually appealing. All text is punctuation or spelling errors.
grammatical, punctuation or legible. AND
spelling errors. 12. There are one or two
grammatical, punctuation or
spelling errors.
Total Score 12/15
Peer Reviewer Comments:
 Your module was very well-organized, descriptive, and student-friendly! Your introduction video was helpful in explaining the steps to get
started. You numbered everything so it’s easy to know the order to complete each task. The activities were engaging, and they gradually
built on one another to help students become successful at typing.
 The content curation was great! There were lots of engaging activities to help students with different aspects of typing.
 The accessibility features throughout were helpful. You used a variety of videos, pictures, and audio to make your content accessible to
everyone.

Here are just a couple of things you may want to fix:


 Assessments: I wasn’t able to see the rubrics. It looked like there was a place for them, but they didn’t come up. There was a very minor
grammatical error in one of the quizzes: (Good posture isn’t important, how we sit doesn’t bother use too much.)
 Broken Links: There was a Curation Resources link on the Student Center page, but I got an error message when I tried it. The page itself
pulled up fine though. There was also an embedded video for the pre-tests wouldn’t play. It said the creator wouldn’t allow playing from
other websites.

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