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    The documents contain 3 passages describing activities with families. The first is about a boy named Ryan spending time at the beach building sandcastles, collecting seashells, and swimming. The second is about going camping, fishing, swimming, and having campfires. The third is about 3 girls visiting a candy shop, buying various treats like fudge and jellybeans, and eating their candy at the park.

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    The documents contain 3 passages describing activities with families. The first is about a boy named Ryan spending time at the beach building sandcastles, collecting seashells, and swimming. The second is about going camping, fishing, swimming, and having campfires. The third is about 3 girls visiting a candy shop, buying various treats like fudge and jellybeans, and eating their candy at the park.

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    Editing Exercises

    Uploaded by

    Vincent Delos Santos
    The documents contain 3 passages describing activities with families. The first is about a boy named Ryan spending time at the beach building sandcastles, collecting seashells, and swimming. The second is about going camping, fishing, swimming, and having campfires. The third is about 3 girls visiting a candy shop, buying various treats like fudge and jellybeans, and eating their candy at the park.

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    1. Editing: How many mistakes can you find?

    The Beach

    Do you no Ryan did last weekend. He went to the beach with his family. First, Ryan builded a huge sand
    castle. Then, he collect seashells and rocks After that, he goed swimming with his brother. Ryan has a
    wonderful time at the beach.

    2. Editing: How many mistakes can you find?

    Camping

    i went camping with my family. We whent fishing and I caught a big fish. I also whent Swimming with my
    brother. We hade a camp fire every night. The camping trip was lots of fun

    3. Editing: How many mistakes can you find!

    Candy Shop

    Jennifer Megan and Sarah whent to the candy shop. Jennifer bought a small bocks of fudge. Sarah paid
    fifty sents for a bag of jellybeans. Megan bought sum Twizzlers. The grls all walked to the park where
    they eated their candy.
    1. Do you know what Ryan did last weekend? He went to the beach with his family. First, Ryan
    built a huge sand castle. Then, he collected seashells and rocks. After that, he went swimming
    with his brother. Ryan had a wonderful time at the beach.

    2. I went camping with my family. We went fishing and I caught a big fish. I also went swimming
    with my brother. We had a campfire every night. The camping trip was lots of fun!

    3. Jennifer, Megan, and Sarah went to the candy shop. Jennifer bought a small box of fudge. Sarah
    paid fifty cents for a bag of jellybeans. Megan bought some Twizzlers. The girls all walked to the
    park where they ate their candy.

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