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    KENNETH A.

    OLIVA STEM 11 – EULER


    READING AND WRITING
    MODULE 6

    PRACTICE TASK 3: Levelling up!


    ORIGINAL TEXT CORRECTIONS
    1. Do you no Ryan did last weekend. He went to Do you know what Ryan did last weekend? He
    the beach with his family. First, Ryan builded a went to the beach with his family. First, Ryan
    huge sand castle. Then, he collect seashells and built a huge sand castle. Then, he collected
    rocks After that, he goed swimming with his seashells and rocks. After that, he went
    brother. Ryan has a wonderful time at swimming with his brother. Ryan had a
    the beach. wonderful time at the beach.
    2. On sunday, Anthony went over to Nicks On Sunday, Anthony went over to Nick’s house
    house to play basketball. They played a gam of to play basketball. They played a game of one-
    one-on-one. Anthony made six baskets, bute on-one. Anthony made six baskets, but Nick
    nick made eight Nick was the winner. After the made eight. Nick was the winner. After the
    game, both boys whent in side to have game, both boys went inside to have some
    some snack’s and watch television. snacks and watch television.

    LEARNING CHALLENGES
    ORIGINAL TEXT:

    Sunday is my favorite day - because I spend the day watching football with my dad.on Sunday,
    unlike the other days of the week when he works my dad spends the whole day with me watching
    football on TV. We even eat lunch together while watching. The highlight of, the day is watching the
    Dolphins game. Dad and I get so excited, we yell and cheer together. On Sundays, I get to combine
    watching my favorite sport and spending time with my favorite person—what a great day?

    REVISED PARAGRAPH:

    Sunday is my favorite day because I spend the day watching football with my dad. On Sunday,
    unlike the other days of the week when he works, my dad spends the whole day with me watching
    football on TV. We even eat lunch together while watching. The highlight of the day is watching the
    Dolphins game. Dad and I get so excited, we yell and cheer together. On Sundays, I get to combine
    watching my favorite sport and spending time with my favorite person—what a great day!

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