EXPANDING & ELABORATING THE CONTENT POINTS

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CONTENT SAMPLE SENTENCE CONTENT SAMPLE SENTENCE DETAIL

POINT POINT (How? Why?)
COMPLAINT SUGGESTIONS

Outdated books Some books are outdated and the Purchase new Old books should be replaced It is important to encourage
and in poor pages were in poor conditions. books and other by purchasing the new one and reading habit among the
conditions reading materials. add in other reading materials students by providing
such as latest magazines interesting materials for
issues. them.
School library is Old furniture and not enough 1) Get sponsorship Try to discuss with NGOs and They provide supports and
underfund …………… proved that the school foundations to get sponsorship. outreach programme for
library is underfund. school’s students.

2) There are insufficient spaces to 3) ...... Add new chairs Thus, the library need to add 6) The library was built at a
and 4) ……… since the number of more new chairs and tables to time when the 6) …………
chairs and tables are not enough. 5) …………………. the ……………… was less than
increasing number of students. one thousand students.
7) Sadly, less electronic resources in the Purchase more Since there is only one Computers are much
library makes it very inconvenient for computers computer available in the library, needed at this time and age
the students to carry out projects and more computer should be where 10) …………….
8) ………………… purchased by the 9) ………….. …………… is project based.
11) At the same time, students were Extend the library It is important to extend the Students can make use of
unable to make use the limited hours library hours especially after the the time to 14) ………….
number of computer’s library since the 13) ……….. ………… and do revisions after
library hours 12) ……….. too short. school.
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