Professional Documents
Culture Documents
The Flow
CPIT-221
01 Structuring Sentences
How do I relate my writings word by word / sentence by sentence?
03 Improving My Writing
I am practicing more…
Objectives
After successful completion of this material, I should
be able to:
Technical Communication
CPIT-221
Structuring Sentences
How do I relate my writing words/sentences?
Structuring Sentences
How do I relate my writings in words/sentences?
The reader’s motivation and knowledge of the topic; the purpose of the
communication; and the conventions of the application you are using.
Structuring Sentences
How do I relate my writing in words/sentences?
▪ Being concise.
Choosing Right Words & Phrases
How to be clear & direct by using straightforward words/phrases?
▪ INFORMAL The Acorn 560 is a real screamer. With 5.5 GHz of pure computing power,
it slashes through even the thickest spreadsheets before you can say 2 + 2 = 4.
▪ MODERATELY FORMAL With its 5.5-GHz microprocessor, the Acorn 560 can handle
even the most complicated spreadsheets quickly.
▪ HIGHLY FORMAL With a 5.5-GHz microprocessor, the Acorn 560 is a high-speed
personal computer appropriate for computation-intensive applications such as large,
complex spreadsheets.
o To determine the appropriate level and tone, think about your audience, your
subject, and your purpose.
Choosing Right Words & Phrases
How to be clear & direct by using straightforward words/phrases?
o Avoid ambiguity
▪ AMBIGUOUS: After stirring by hand for 10 seconds, add three drops of the iodine mixture to
the solution.
▪ CLEAR: Stir the iodine mixture by hand for 10 seconds. Then add three drops to the solution.
▪ CLEAR: Stir the solution by hand for 10 seconds. Then add three drops of the iodine mixture.
Choosing Right Words & Phrases
How to be clear & direct by using straightforward words/phrases?
3. Be concise
o The following five principles can help you write concise technical
documents:
▪ Avoid obvious statements.
▪ Avoid filler.
▪ Avoid unnecessary prepositional phrase.
▪ Avoid wordy phrases.
▪ Avoid fancy words.
Choosing Right Words & Phrases
How to be clear & direct by using straightforward words/phrases?