Introduction

1. The bar chart illustrates the proportion of young people

from four countries, namely Great Britain, the US, Geermany,
and France, who use different means of transport / travel by
different means of transport.
2. The bar chart compares the popularity of three different
means of transport among young people in the US, the UK,
Germany, and France.

Overview (MAIN FEATURES + NO DATA)
Overall, the car is the most popular vehicle in all countries,
except in Germany in which the bicycle is the most widely
used one. It is also readily apparent that the motorcycle is
not favored by young people in almost all surveyed
countries.

3 CÁCH DIỄN ĐẠT SỐ % CHO CÙNG MỘT THÔNG TIN
1. Dùng những động từ mang nghĩa ‘chiếm’ (account for /
make up / represemt/ occupy / constitute / comprise)
The percentage of young people in Great Britain who drive a
car account for 60%.
à Young people in Great Britain who drive a car account for
60%.
2. Đặt số liệu % đầu câu
à 60% of young people in Great Britain drive a car.
3. Biến số % thành phân số
60% à More than half of young people… / Nearly two thirds
of young people …

Body paragraph 1 (CAR – BICYCLE)
With reagrd to cars, about three fourths of young people in
France / young French people drive a car. This proportion/
figure is almost double … this means. By comparison, … is
exactlythe same / equal / on par, at 60%. As for bicycles, this
mode of transport … most common / preferred by young
people…, while … in the US, WITH the figures BEING about
45% for the former and 10% for the latter. The bicycle is
more popular in Great Britain than in France, CHOSEN by …
and …

Body paragraph 2 (MOTORCYCLE)
… range from … to, MAKING it the least common means of
transport. Ranking second among the three given means of
transport, the motorcycle …

ROOM 101
With regard to cars, about three fourths of young French
people drive a car à travel by this means. This proportion is
almost double the figure of à for young German using this
means à Germany. By comparison, the figure of transport
preferences among à the percentage of young people in
Great Britain and the USA drving a car is on par, at 60%. As
for bicycles, this mode of transport is the most common one
by à among young people in Germany, while it is the least
preferd vehicle in the USA, with the figures being about 45%
for the former and 10% for the latter. The bicyle is more
popular in Great Britain than in France, chosen by 30% of
young British and 15% of young French.

Young people using motorbicyles in Great Britain, Germany,
and France range from 10% to 15%, making it the least
common means of transport. Ranking second among the
three given options, the motorbicycle is travelled by 30% in
the US.
ROOM 201
In term of cars, three quarters of young French people
commute by car à this means . This figure is almost double
that of Germany. By comparison, the percentage of young
drivers in the UK and the US is excatly the same at 60%.
With regard to bicyles, this means of transport is the most
used by the young in Germany, while in the US, it is the least
preferred one, with the figures being about 45% for the
former and 10% for the latter. Meanwhile, the bicyles gains
more popularity in the UK compared to in French, chosen by
30% and nearly 15% respectively.

Furthermore à As for the motorcycle, it is the least used
mode of transport, with its popularity in the UK, Germany,
and France ranging from 10% to 15%. Ranking second
among the three given modes of transport, the motorcycle is
commuted by 30% of young American people.