Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Quarter 1
Module No. 3.2
Week 3
In This Module:
In the
previous chapter, you were taught to be a critical reader. It was emphasized that critical reading is a
requirement in order to become a critical writer. Reading gives you more knowledge about the world and
makes you aware of the different issues happening around you, helps you explore and discover new things,
etc. Reading, in this sense, can enrich your writing.
III. PROCEDURES
INTRODUCTION
What materials were you able to get from your research? How will you use them to write your essay?
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Before you start the actual process of writing, you need to make sure that the assumptions that you
have about your topic can be supported by evidence. This can be done by making sure that you have enough
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resources on that topic. Being able to find a lot of reading materials—books, articles, journals—that relate to
your topic will confirm that your topic is important since prior studies were done about it; it will also
suggest that you contribute something new to the existing studies
DEVELOPMENT
ACTIVITY 1
Researching in the library or surfing the internet to look for sources for the paper may seem easy for
some students. What to do with those sources is a different matter, though.
Suppose you found an article in the library and there was one paragraph that you think you could use
in your paper. How would you incorporate it in your paper? Would you copy the entire paragraph? Would
you lift some important ideas? Or would you copy the structure of the paragraph and substitute some words
with their synonyms?
What would you do with this paragraph so that you can use it in your paper?
As I have noted earlier, the interviews were partly responsible for some differences between the
two interviewees. For instance, the opening signal in Mike’s interview presupposes that Mike is
good in other sports too aside from basketball, and the interviewer just asked what sport he is
lousiest at. In Gretchen’s interview, however, the opening signal is presupposing that karate is a
man’s game so the first question was how she got into this man’s game. She was also asked if she
has ever used her charm to win against guys; again, presupposing that women use their charm to
get what they want from men.
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You are right to say that you cannot just copy the paragraph and incorporate it in your paper; doing
so would be considered plagiarism. Plagiarism has become a buzzword not only in the academe but also in
other fields like literature, photography, and fine arts. Perhaps, you have heard news about people who were
stripped off their diploma, license, or award because they were found to have plagiarized other people’s
work.
What is plagiarism? When can you be accused of plagiarizing pother people’s works? Plagiarism
could be any of the following:
Deliberate copying of somebody else’s work and claiming that work to be his/her own;
Using somebody else’s work or ideas without proper acknowledgement or citation; and
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Copying the text without paraphrasing it.
Paraphrasing is one of the ways to avoid plagiarism. Kit is rendering the essential ideas in a text
(sentence or paragraph) using your own words. Paraphrased materials are usually shorter than the original
text. it is more detailed than a summary. When you paraphrase, it is advised that you first understand what
the text is about then write your rendition of the text without referring to it as you write. The tendency when
you have the text in front of you is to copy the structure of the text and just change some of the words, which
still qualify as plagiarism.
Strategies for
Paraphrasing
Paraphrasing is taking the words of another and making it your own by using different words and
sentence structures than the original.
It still counts as plagiarism if you keep the original sentence structure while switching the author’s
words with synonyms. For example:
Original Text: Plagiarized Text: Paraphrased Text:
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NOTE: Whenever you paraphrase, always keep in mind that your primary goal is to capture the essence of
your selected passage regardless of the words you used in order to use it to build up your main argument.
ENGAGEMENT
1. Repeatedly read the passage to be paraphrased until you have completely understood what it says.
Doing so will help you arrive at an accurate understanding of the text at hand and prevent yourself
from misquoting a passage.
ACTIVITY 2
Below is a sample passage from an academic essay. Examine it carefully, and underscore the important
points it communicates. You may use marginal notes to help you organize thoughts.
2. Do not look at the passage while you are writing your paraphrase. Doing so might influence your
choice of words in your paraphrase. If it does, then your paraphrase may bear a lot of resemblance
with the original passage, and this constitutes plagiarism, or using another person’s ideas without
proper attribution. Below are the common types of plagiarism:
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To avoid such an offensive, go over your work many times before submitting it to your
instructor; make sure that your claims are original, and that the works you used to support them
are properly cited.
ACTIVITY 3
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3. After
writing your paraphrase, read the original passage once again to check if you were able to accurately
capture its meaning. By doing this, you will avoid misquoting your source.
4. Check whether your paraphrase has errors in grammar or mechanics: Always assume that your
academic paper will be read by an international audience, and as such, your paraphrases should more or less
be free of errors in grammar and mechanics so that your readers will not have a hard time deciphering your
ideas.
ACTIVITY 4
Edited Draft
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5.Always cite your sources: this may vary depending on the nature of the paper you are working on. If you
are working on an academic paper, then use a citation style recognized by academics. These include citation
formats such as APA (American Psychological Association, for Natural and Social Sciences), MLA
(Modern Language Association, for the Humanities), and Turabian. If you are simply working on a
magazine article or a manual, merely mentioning where you got your ideas will do.
ACTIVITY 5
Directions: Write the final version of the paraphrase you came up with in the box below:
Edited Draft
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Directions: Paraphrase the following excerpts from textbooks.
MYCENAEAN CIVILIZATION
The Mycenaeans were natives of
the area around the Caspian Sea.
In 1990 B.C.E., they migrated to
Greece where they established
their own cities. In 1400 B.C.E.,
they invaded Knossos and the
other cities in Crete and ended
the dominance of the Minoan
civilization in the Aegean Sea.
Because of their control of the
Aegean Sea, Homer called them
Achaeans.
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The teacher will post a PDF copy of “Documenting Sources in MLA Style” on your Google Drive or
Messenger. This contains everything you need to know about the Modern Language Association (MLA)
formatting and style guide, which is often used in the arts and humanities. Make sure to read the document
and familiarize yourselves with the format in citing sources.
ASSESSMENT
Directions: For each item, shade the letter of the correct answer.
1. It is the practice of taking someone else's work or ideas and passing them off as one's own.
o Plagiarism
o Paraphrasing
o Quoting
o Citing
2. This is also known as cut-and-paste plagiarism.
3. It properly makes it easier for readers to navigate and comprehend a text by providing familiar cues when referring
to sources and borrowed information.
o Paraphrasing
o Plagiarism
o Citing
o Writing
5. Change from _____________ to indirect
o Direct speech
o Quoted speech
o Clause
o Indirect
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