Team <WE MEAN GREEN> Jaeyoon Olivia

Be kind To me, it was great to feel her I appreciate her clear

what went well (but honest…) confidence while I was listening
her presentation about proposal.
She said the words smoothly
without any stop such as “Umm”.
Be Specific She added extra explanations and
those explanations helped me to
understand their proposal in
detail. I could perceive their
purpose clearly.
Be helpful To be helpful, I would like Jaeyoon
to add some accent in her speech,
because her lines are seem like
emotionless.
pronunciation, and I could felt her
confidence about her idea and
she also conveyed her messages
to audiences successfully about
their party and proposals.
Their statement was very clear
and purposes of their party were
demonstrated in their
presentation.
I think that Olivia can improve
speaking words more naturally,
since I felt like she was reading
her words from somewhere.

Paragraph for Jaeyoon:

Jaeyoon, it was great how you organized your idea in your speech. I clearly could understand your purposes in
your presentation, and also you said your lines smoothly without any stop or mistake. I think this was the
reason how could you convey your message and purposes successfully. You added extra explanations and those
thing helped me to understand your proposal in detail and your addition proved that you are confident with
your proposal. But perhaps next time you could add some accent in your words, since it would be hard to
express your sincerity if your words are emotionless. Overall, your presentation was great and I can see your
progress in presentation skills compared to your first time!

Paragraph for Olivia:

Olivia, all of your proposals were supported by your excellent explanations! You didn’t just read over your
proposal, but you provided your detailed explanations. Also, I was impressed with your confidence while you
were speaking in presentation. To be more specific, your explanations were great, but I’m not sure if the
proposals had some detailed example. This will help audience to understand proposal easily. To improve, I want
you to reduce some stops and mistake in your lines, and also I’m not sure that your lines were all you own word
or written script. But if they are script and you were reading over it in presentation, you should practice with
your own words because in real life, you should not look at any script or keep eyes on screen in order to have
eye contact with audiences.

Self reflection: