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2. Language analysis. Focusing on the handsome In this question, it is important to award the full range of marks, with the (12)
man, name the techniques and explain the third mark in each part of the answer as a reward for extended, excellent
effects of the following quotations: answers.
(a) ‘His ridged cheekbones, arched eyebrows a) ‘ridged’, ‘arched’ and ‘pointed’: adjectives (1 mark) and / or the fact that all
and pointed beard gave him a determinedly of the adjectives are to do with sharp angles, suggesting a ‘sharp’ character,
devilish aspect that Ellen found rather either acutely intelligent or evil or both.
appealing.’ (3 marks) Accept alliteration (1 mark) in ‘determinedly devilish’: adds to the sense
(b) ‘…his eyes – the kind of eyes that seemed to that this is a not just an ‘evil’ character but a seductive, handsome one,
be all pupil, cold, black forest pools.’ (3 ‘devilish’ having the connotation of ‘naughty’ or ‘tricksy’ more than plain
marks) horrid.
(c) ‘His voice sounded like a hammer striking ‘rather appealing’: the language indicates that she likes him – reward any
an anvil.’ (3 marks) candidate who spots the discomfiting quality of this (easier to hate him if
he is ugly etc.). Reward any candidate who picks up on the odd contrast of
this, or the way it complicates our attitude to the handsome man (1 mark).
b) All pupil – one mark for hyperbole / exaggeration – one mark for giving a sense
of his hypnotic power
Black forest pools – one mark for metaphor. Two for: indicating their
depth and mystery, and temperature
c) Like a Hammer striking an anvil – simile (one mark). Two marks for: it rings
out, cold and clear, possibly metallic as in hard, and, importantly, loud.
d) The overall impression is obviously of an authoritative, but dark and cruel man
who is used to wielding power over others. The shock is that he is good-
looking to Ellen. Candidates can gain marks for linking his appearance (vast
ruff, hat with huge feathers) to his authority.
1 mark: limited, straightforward answer. May say that he is ‘like the devil’
2 marks: confident answer: lists two adjectives and tries to explain them,
linking his appearance to his dark and troubling nature
3 marks: sophisticated answer: may give contrasting adjectives, and bring
out the contrasts between his handsome face and dark clothing, and even
darker eyes etc. Some may hint at his mildly absurd outfit.
3. 3 (a) ‘His smugness showed so plainly on his face, Ellen thought for a (6)
moment he might take a bow.’
Marks for -
Explaining ‘smug’ (self-satisfied etc. Award approximations).
The handsome man comes across as sanctimonious and self-satisfied,
especially as he has just given a supposed witty riposte to her simple plea
that she weaves, and then replies that she is weaving a ‘web of lies and
deceit’.
‘take a bow’ would indicate that he is so happy with his own words that he
might get applause for it, which indicates that he thinks highly of himself
and his own wit.
(b) ‘His eyes roamed greedily over her, as though searching for
something.’
4. Based on the meaning in the passage, what is a) Absurd = ridiculous / silly. Accept ‘illogical’. NOT ‘stupid’. (5)
the meaning of the following words? b) Covenant = agreement, pact, deal
a) Absurd c) Afflicted = hurt / put upon / attacked
b) Covenant d) Diverse = varied, different
c) Afflicted e) Subdued = quiet, dimmed, muted
d) Diverse
e) Subdued Do accept approximations to the above (i.e. give credit to an intelligently worked-
out answer)
5. In lines 20-21, there is a ‘taller, thinner 4 (a) correct quotation: ‘In one hand he was clutching a Bible. In the other a (4)
companion’ with the handsome man. Using noose.’ (1 mark)
quotation to support your view, what do you He is a hangman. (1 mark)
think his job is?
Give a further mark for correct explanation that indicates that a biblical passage
would be read out at her execution or for what a noose is. (1 mark)
- the focus on the two key objects, the bible and the noose, make him menacing
(also because he is given very little to indicate his humanity). The only two
adjectives, ‘tall’ and ‘thin’ add to the sense of his menace, with a feeling that he is
devoid of any other warmer qualities.
20 marks will be given for your ability to use sensory language as well as similes, metaphor and personification. An expressive vocabulary, varied
sentence types and clear paragraphing will also be rewarded.
10 marks are for accuracy, so please make sure that your spelling, punctuation and grammar are as good as you can make them.
Begin after the following sentence: ‘Hidden beneath the floorboards, the little girl could just make out the….’