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Essay "Effects of smart phones on human life


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NGUYEN VAN QUANG (FGW HCM) 18 THÁNG MƯỜI, 2021 07:45 It is a fact, THAT  smartphone technology makes people’s lives easier and has brought many
Quang (Frosty) benefits. Smartphones are small, and everybody can carry  PUT them in their pocket. people
are now using smartphones for their payments, financial transactions, navigating, calling,
World is ever changing and advancing in the sience and technology. These days it seems hard
face-to-face communication, texting, emailing, and scheduling their routines. Nowadays,
to escape the presence of technology. Technology is evoling at a very fast rate, and what most
people use wireless technology, especially smartphones, to watch movies, tv shows, and listen
people did not even think could be real a few years ago is now becoming a reality. Among
to music. In fact, smartphones have made life happier. As a result, people save money and time
them is the smartphone, one of the inventions that has changed humanity. We will discuss the
by using smartphones. 
benefits that smartphones have brought us, from my personal point of view.

Despite the benefits, excessive smartphone use may cause addiction among individuals, which
might negatively impact human well-being. Furthermore, smartphone addiction can lead to
The first positive effect of smartphones is to help people get closer to the world and connect
depression, stress, anxiety, and lack of social interaction in different people. Besides, extreme
to a more developed society. Another advantage is that it is a smart device that can provide
use of the smartphone can waste time. For instance, most smartphone owners spend many
the necessary information for learning and research. One the one hand, this is also a device
hours on social media and playing different games. 
that can cause information disturbances and cause a lot of bad information like tabloids for
In conclusion, smartphone usage has changed the world rapidly and make it more developed
example. On the other hand, this is a device that not only provides information but also helps
and progressive. Smartphones have become more beneficial to communities and have created
people complete other tasks and can store information depending on the number amount of
a more comfortable life for people worldwide. 
gigabites of the machine.

In summary, smartphones are things that help people quite a lot. I think it will be something CO Y LAP LAI GIUA INTRO VA BODY--> NEN DUNG TU DONG NGHIA VA DOI CAU TRUC
to help people grow more in life and bring more research for people to be able to grow in life.

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VÔ DANH 18 THÁNG MƯỜI, 2021 11:40 Technology is growing day by day. It makes human life more convenient than before. But you
Yen Nhi know what. HOWEVER, Technological development does not only have advantages but also
has bad sides. It attaches a lot of problems relate to social relationships. Nowadays, one
Nowadays, smartphones WHICH have developed in the last three decades that make technological development is smartphones.

communication faster and easier than before.  In contrast, the significant negative impact of At first, we spend time too much for surfing the Internet. We are social distancing. You have
using smartphones is addiction. Therefore, getting more habitS OF for using those devices can many time free.  It's easy while you touch the screen of smartphones which is large
lead to severe depression, anxiety, and loneliness in individuals. information. You can be tempted by a lot of programs to entertain. You think you can be you
can control yourself. But when you realized, you was wasted a lot of time on many things
useless things . It reduces your chances of communication. The second, it damages your To begin with, Phones can ENABLE let you TO meet and chat with people who are far apart
health. UV can make your eyes weaken. That is the cause of nearsightedNESS. The third, the through your phone. It can let you look up domestic and international information. And not
hacker can steal your information through smartphones.
only that, you can download games or music to entertain yourself.

However, Our life may be hard if we were without smartphones. You can do everything with

smartphones. Working, studying, making money, etc.


In addition, there are many harms HARMFUL EFFECTSwhen using smartphones. S+ Takes up
Although there are many bad sides, we cannot deny the importance of smartphones. It has a unnecessary time, affects brain health and memory. Many people are too busy and gradually
lot of problems. That is why we have to learn to limit it and have a life more science. lose their self-reflection and depend on their smartphones.

In short, the phone always has 2 sides to it, so we must know how to use it in the most useful
VÔ DANH 18 THÁNG MƯỜI, 2021 07:48 and effective way.

Mai Âm

THERE ARE TWO SIDES TO EVERYTHING


One of the areas of technology that is developing most quickly is smartphone. Smartphones

can now help a lot of people.

This essay will discuss the benefits of the phone.From my perspective effects of smartphone

in human life is positive.

THERE ARE A FEW Harmful effects of using smartphones. Firstly, health effects because

smartphones are addictive. For example, when using smartphones all day, the body is ACHING

AND EYES ARE tired. Then we are lazy exercise, WHICH causes many diseases. Secondly,

smartphones make people less and less communicating with each other, leading to a loss of
social relationships. For example, when going out with a group of friends, sometimes you will
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feel annoyed when your story is interrupted by other people who are staring at the phone
screen instead of listening.

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On the other hand, smartphones also have many benefits. Firstly, it helps people to easily
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communicate with each other when they are far away. For example, when going to school
away from home, children can still contact their parents every day. Second, it helps us to    Nowadays, the uninterrupted progress of technological industrial. Many cutting-edge
know a lot of information through social networks.
productions in that filed are designed to satisfy the progressive demand of people. That also
engender many contraries opinion about their side-effect that causes the interpersonal
In conclusion i would like to say, smartphones bring many benefits to people. Serving the separation. Personally, I think effects of smart phones on human life which is is still very
needs of studying and working anytime and anywhere. beneficial

    First, the smart phone was crafted with increasingly intelligent technology. So, people can
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of where they are even from overseaS. My mother has found her overseaS old friends on
facebook VIET HOArecently and she talks to them by merely small phones to derive much
VÔ DANH 18 THÁNG MƯỜI, 2021 11:46 valuable memory. So that is a subtle distinction between separation and connection.

phạm hiếu        The smart phone also connects the completely stranger together. For example, that in the
small chat box on YouTube. Many ones from many countries and cultures have the same
One of the areas of technology that is developing most quickly is smartphones. Smartphones
interest in something. That proves that people can take advantage of mobile phones to
are already a tool to help people a lot in work and entertainment. This essay will discuss the
interact with many individuals around them.

advantages and disadvantages of phones.

        Many ones criticize THAT smart phones lead to the phenomenon that fewer individuals
talk with each other directly. But I think the way we exchange merely vary to another mode
and expand the area.

In short, I think we should be considered the time about using the phone properly to avoid
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their harmful effects. From there, we can improve the quality of life easily.

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VÔ DANH 18 THÁNG MƯỜI, 2021 11:41 PHAN HO HUYNH UYEN (FGW HCM) 18 THÁNG MƯỜI, 2021 08:35

Hoàng Huỳnh Uyên


Nowadays, when technology is developing more and more, smartphone is one of the The world has witnessed a significant growth of mobile phones in recent years, which
important things in life. This essay will discuss the influence of smartphones on people's lives changed the way  people make communication WHICH MAKES THE WAY PP COMMUNICATE
from my perspective faster and easier than before. However, there has been much debate about the positive and
  negative impacts of mobile phones on users. For me, mobile has influenced a lot of people's
The first positive effect is that it helps us relax after stressful working hours. In addition, it lives and this essay will give us the opportunity to discuss this issue in detail.

also helps a lot of people to make money by selling online. However, besides that, the negative

effect is that it makes us increasingly dependent on it and it is difficult to be happy without On the one hand, Effects of smartphones may bring about a number of positive effects. First of
smartphones. all, smartphone technology in The Fourth Industrial Revolution makes people's lives easier and
  has brought many positives for many people in the world. This is because, There are many
In conclusion, as smart people, we cannot deny the positive influence of smartphones in our applications created to help people keep in touch with their relatives and friends at a great
lives, but we must know how to limit its negative effects. distance such as facebook, zalo, viber,...which allows people to chat or video call together
without meeting face to face. Second of all, smartphones have become an entertainment
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and THEIR its applications provide users with many apps of entertainment such as, gaming,
surfing the Internet, along with listening to music. and this helps people relax after hard work
VÔ DANH 18 THÁNG MƯỜI, 2021 11:46 and make fun for people .

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On the other hand, It has some bad effects on users. smartphone addiction can lead to
Technology is progressing rapidly, especially smartphones. The smartphone is a part of life. It
depression, stress and lack of social interaction in different people. Besides, extreme use of
can help us with a lot of things. Some people see it as AN thing inseparable.thing. We can
the smartphone can waste time. For instance, most smartphone owners spend many hours on
clearly see the benefits of smartphones, however, it also has bad sides that we need to VERB?
social media and playing different games. 

carefully.

In conclusion, smartphones always have positives as well as negatives, so let's be a smart user
Nowadays, smartphones are getting more and more modern. So the positive effect of them is
and use them with good intentions
they can have access fast internet, connect everyone each together. We can use them for

entertainment like playING games, fooling around social network websites, or watchING a

movie. Another advantage is they also can be used for learning anything we want. We can send
an instant message or call a video chat with family and friends. It can be used as an alarm
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clock, take notes, play music,...

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time without considering the rest, we can be tired. It is possible to lose weight, insomnia,
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headache, or myopia. It can cause depression and anxiety, and worst of all it can be addictive.

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ANOTHER NEW ONE it. Smartphones are spreading worldwide and as a result of this; our life
styles have started to change. Now, people are living with their smartphones, they are taking
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selfies, organizing their accounts, playing games and communicating to everyone. In my
opinion, they always both have good and bad side.
K.Trí
    The first possitive effect of using smartphones is global connection, no matter where you
Nowadays, with the advancement of science and technology, the phone has become the smart
are, you can make friend with anyone has A smartphone. In addition, diversity is something
friend of everyone. It is no denial of the benefits that the phone brings because of the
that can not be ignored when talking about smartphoneS. Basically, we would like to see new
following reasons.

things everyday so they can reponDse us: read news inA  free and convenient way; vivid
First, the basic benefit of the phone is that it makes communication easier than ever.
pictureS; quality sound; etc.

Previously, to communicate with another, one had to write a hand letter, which was very
     However, we must tell about the bad side. Using too much smartphoneS FOR LONG TIME
troublesome, and sometimes the letter could be misplaced. Now, despite being halfway
without control will increase the levels of mental illness as well as health. Typically, teenagers
around Earth, we can still interact, AND hear the voice of the other. This way is more
will easLYier to have social phobia if parrents don't intervene in time. That's quite sad.

economical and extremely convenient for everyone to use. 

In conclusion, the most important things is using smartphone in smart wayS. Follow my
Also, with a phone, we can take photographs and save great moments, not much different
experience, you are the one who controlS your smartphone and your life, do not let them
from a camera. In our free time, we can take a look to relax, it is interesting. 

control you.

Furthermore, the phone has many other great applications such as clock alarming, notes,
calculator, voice recorder, etc. A hand-held phone that has so many useful functions
integrated into it. Each of these functions serves us a lot in our lives. As a result, the phone
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itself has become a close friend of each of us, inseparable.

In conclusion, regarded as one of the revolutionary inventions in people's history, mobile


VÔ DANH 16 THÁNG MƯỜI, 2021 07:34 phones have proved their indispensable role currently as well as in the advanced technology
future.
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     INTRO: IT NHAT 2 CAU BAN// VIET 1 CAU DAN VO TOPIC+ There are a lot of effects of CONCLUSION CO GANG VIET HONW 2-3 CAU NHE: SUMMARY + YOUR FINAL THOUGHT
smart phones on human life.

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      The first effect of smart phones is a internet in social life of us. [MEAN?] Every where you
go, everything you do, all connected keep-touch with smart phones. You do not need go out
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to learn something you want. If you want to cook ,you could access the internet and learn
everything about it. MOREOVERAnother one, WHEN you want to buy something, you can Duc Tin
search it on the internet and take some reviewer before you buy. That is aN effective way.
One of those advances in science and technology is the smartphone. Nowadays, Smartphone
       On the other hand, the second effect of smart phones is so important in our life and is no longer strange to people, BECAUSE it is a necessary device and has many useful effects.
especially WITH the younger generation. Someone can be effected by game and action films, Have WITH a smartphone , people's lives seem easier and it helps little in the development of
horror films. That is a terrible problems. Nowadays, some kids in secondary school have bad society.

gestured and bad words because of the internet. If their parent do not take measures to XUONG DONG CHO DE PHAN BIET INTRO VA BODY

manage them, they would be one of reasons for the school violence and bullying another kids.
Having a smartphone is like having a new opportunity in hand. You can find a job, change your
         Therefore, technological developments will make smart phones more and more daily life, acquire new knowledge,... with just a smartphone and THE internet . The primary
important in the normal people life. So we must be careful and take care of our self to protect use of a phone is to make and receive calls, but smartphones are much more than that. Now
we from some bad things on smart phones.
you can call without seeing each other and call multiple people at the same time . Not only
           Finally, I [KHI VIET KHONG DIUNG want to say] is a I THINK smart phones can make us that, when you are tired of working, your smartphone is also something to helpS you entertain
better but it also can make us worse. So do not rely too much on it.
and relax.

On the other hand, smartphones also have disadvantages. Smartphones are not cheap, there
will be people who can't afford TO BUY ONE it. Too much dependence on smartphones also
makes us lose a lot of time about INreal life. Sometimes smartphones are not really safe TRUOC] makes it convenient for anyone to use it anywhere. Smartphones have many benefits
because today's technology is so advanced, you can get hacked and steal personal information that go hand in hand with many disadvantages. That's why there are so many people ARE
MAY BE STOLEN right on your phone.
addicted to smartphones, that WHICH makeS them lose their original purpose.

In short, smartphones are essential to human life, helping us with many things. However, it is

sometimes a double-edged sword, so be careful when using it.


In conclusion, the smartphone is doing its job very well, and hopefully, it will grow more in the
future. Provided that people know how to use it properly and not abuse it. I think
smartphones will be a good tool for our work.

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NGUYEN HO MINH HIEU (FGW HCM) 16 THÁNG MƯỜI, 2021 07:27
Nowadays smartphones are more and more closeR AND CLOSER [MORE AND MORE + LONG
ADJ ] to our lives but they have   advantages and disadvantages of it.

Ng Hieu
Phones make it possible for us to connect people around the world through the Internet. It is Nowadays, smart phone is so popular that EVERYONE has AT LEAST ONE// HOWEVER,
possible to shop through online stores without going out, watch entertainment with movies THERE ARE two sides of a coin. It bringS a lot of benefits AS WELL AS SOME DISADVANATGES
and entertainment shows. In addition, the phone also helps us stay on the right path thanks to for TO people.

the map application. MoreOver, we can use smartphones because they are cheap, ... But

smartphones also bring harms such as [+ V-ING ]can waste users' time such as affecting the First of all, smart phones is a tool that allows quick search of information. It bringS any kind of
health of people. user. eyes, causing insomnia and anxiety, ... Using the phone for too long can information from local to international news.Besides, we can send an instant message. In
lead to obesity, fatigue, ...KHONG DUNG DAU BA CHAM 
other wordS, we can chat with someone online in real time by tying messageS anywhere.Also,
Finally, we should use smartphones sensibly to avoid these problems. bad effects from it isn't difficult to download anything. For example, we can download music, or ducumentSAI
smartphones CHINH TA and anything if you want.

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THÁI YÊN HÀ Although smart phone[s is CO S THI ARE/ KHONG S THI PHAI CO 'A SMARTPHONE'] a very
useful tool, it also has a negative effect. To begin with, hackers may steal our personal
information. Illegal or inappropriate materials can be found in smart phones, so we have to
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choose the most relevant information. In addition, the excessive use of smart phone may lead
Lê Thanh to poor relationships with others people in our life. In particular, it greatly affects children,
FOR EXAMPLE, it makes children less active than before, over time it causes children's
Smartphones greatly influence the lives of modern people today. It brings many benefits to
emotions to change in a negative direction.

people, but the bad effects of smartphones are just as much. What are those effects? We will

discuss this more in this essay. From my perspective, we are too dependent on the phone, and
Smart phones is both a tool that motivateS human development and a tool that can destroy
even overusing it causes bad effects at a time when society is very developed. UA PHAN BODY
people, so we should use the internet in the most intelligent and effective way.
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The first positive is smartphones helped people contact easier and faster without complex
impact. Smartphones make us happy with available entertainment functions such as watching
movies, games...
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Another advantage is that it is highly portable, which[PHAY TRUOC WHICH DE THAY CA CAU
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on human life.This essay will discuss an effect of smartphones on our life. 

 To begin with the benefit of mobile phone.  You can join social networking sites to make yes tc ―
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friends or to fool around the internet. Another advantage, which you can contact with the
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others whenever you want or wherever you are. For example, in the past people sent a
writting letters when they wanted to communicate, but now they can call to their friends
immediately.
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 On the other hand, It has some bad effect to user. Firstly, they always notice to their phone
everytime, so they can not know the situation around them. Smartphone which make us waste
SOME USEFUL EXPRESSIONS
time, and some time it has some bad habit. Which is why mothers have never allowed their 1/ Introduction:

child to spend all time at smartphone.


- These days/ Nowadays, [technology] is developing rapidly.

In counclusion, smartphone is a good technical equip. It makes better your life. I think it will - This essay will discuss .....
not become bad if people uses it reasonably. - From my perspective, SV

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co: There is a lot of euipment [khong co so nhiu nhe] ―


THÁI YÊN HÀ - The first [negative/positive] effect of [smartphones] is ...

- Another [advanatge] is

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+ One the one hand, (khi minh nua dong y nua khong dong y voi de) SV

+ On the other hand, SV

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3/ Conclusion:

-In conclusion, / In summary

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