Name: _________________ Teacher: Mrs. Hancock Date: August 8, 2009 Class: English 7 Description: This rubric will help you know exactly what I am expecting to find in an essay. 5 / 4 / VERY 2 / NEEDS 1 / 3 / AVERAGE EXCELLENT GOOD IMPROVEMENT UNACCEPTABLE This paper is This paper is The writer is Topic is not well- As yet, the paper has clear and mostly focused, beginning to defined and/or no clear sense of focused. It holds and has some define the topic, there are too many purpose or central the reader's good details and even though topics. theme. To extract Ideas attention. quotes. development is meaning from the Relevant details still basic or text, the reader must and quotes general. make inferences enrich the based on sketchy or central theme. missing details. The organization Paper (and The Sentences within The writing lacks a enhances and paragraphs) are organizational paragraphs make clear sense of showcases the mostly structure is sense, but the order direction. Ideas, central idea or organized, in strong enough to of paragraphs does details, or events theme. The order, and move the reader not. seem strung together Organization order, structure makes sense to through the text in a loose or random of information is the reader. without too fashion; there is no compelling and much confusion. identifiable internal moves the structure. reader through the text. Sentence The writing has The writing The text hums The text seems The reader has to Fluency an easy flow, mostly flows, along with a choppy and is not practice quite a bit in rhythm, and and usually steady beat, but easy to read orally. order to give this cadence. invites oral tends to be more paper a fair Sentences are reading. businesslike interpretive reading. well built, with than musical, strong and more varied structure mechanical than that invites fluid. expressive oral reading. The writer The write The writer The writer seems to Errors in spelling, demonstrates a understands shows have made little punctuation, good grasp of good writing reasonable effort to use capitalization, usage, standard writing conventions and control over a conventions: and grammar and/or conventions usually uses limited range of spelling, paragraphing (e.g., spelling, them correctly. standard writing punctuation, repeatedly distract the punctuation, Paper is easily conventions. capitalization, reader and make the capitalization, read and errors Conventions are usage, grammar text difficult to read. Conventions grammar, are rare; minor sometimes and/or usage, touch-ups would handled well and paragraphing have paragraphing) get this piece enhance multiple errors. and uses ready to publish. readability; at conventions other times, effectively to errors are enhance distracting and readability. impair readability. Presentation The form and The format only The writer's The writer's The reader receives a presentation of has a few message is message is only garbled message due the text mistakes and is understandable understandable to problems relating to enhances the generally easy in this format. occasionally, and the presentation of ability for the to read and paper is messily the text, and is not reader to pleasing to the written. typed. understand and eye. connect with the message. It is pleasing to the eye.