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1. Brainstorm Topics
First, you must identify suitable cause and effect paragraph topics. Some things to consider as
potential subjects are cultural movements, natural phenomena, or the development of certain
concepts or ideas. The key tip for choosing a topic is ensuring that it enables you to observe
and analyze its causal relationship.
4. Write a Draft
Using the thesis and the ideas for body paragraphs you already have, write a draft of your
cause/effect essay. In your draft, create a logical flow of ideas using transitions, topic
sentences, and linking all your paragraphs back to your thesis. And, keep in mind the purpose
of your essay.
People are always excited to get a notification about a new like, comment, or message. Why is
it so? There is an actual biochemical reason for it: the human brain releases dopamine.
According to Ahmad (2018), this makes people feel happy. It is attributed to the fact that “likes”
give people the impression of social validation. Thus, they feel accepted by the group of their
peers and get a sense of belonging. In the long term, the pleasure and excitement from virtual
interactions become addictive and make people spend a great deal of their time online,
rejecting to do other tasks and duties.
Another reason for social media addiction is poor awareness of the problem among the public.
Compared to other forms of addiction, checking the Facebook feed does not seem that harmful.
However, as Ahmad (2018) reveals, it requires more effort to resist social media accounts than
alcohol or smoking. As people have a very low degree of awareness regarding the long-term
effects of constant social media use, they do not acknowledge the seriousness of the problem.
As a result, more and more users live their life in smartphones and disregard real-life
interactions, which has its consequences.
Explanation: The last sentence of the previous paragraph includes a transition to the effects of
the discussed addiction. Thus, we follow the same paragraph structure to introduce and
develop our claims. This entails using a specific topic sentence, several pieces of evidence that
support the idea, comments regarding it, and a concluding sentence.
The negative effects of such addiction are numerous, but mental health is a top concern.
Zagorski (2017) states that social media provoke anxiety disorder, a sense of isolation, and
depression. People are likely to develop insecurity, poor self-esteem, and distorted body image,
comparing their appearance to unrealistic and photoshopped photos. If people do not get the
desired appreciation and recognition from others on social media, it lowers their sense of self-
value. Therefore, people become vulnerable to mental health issues.
Social media becomes an unwanted distraction from work, education, and home shores.
Notification from apps can easily interrupt your life and lead to procrastination. It impedes
progress and makes people less effective. Humans are likely to lose focus and spend their
productive hours in vain. Therefore, if people use messengers or other apps all the time, they
get distracted from important assignments.
Explanation: After the discussion part is done, we need to summarize our ideas in a concluding
paragraph. We restate our thesis statement and mention our most important findings.
To conclude, because of poor public awareness regarding the impact of social media on
psychological wellbeing, people are vulnerable to psychological problems. What is more, the
excitement of virtual interactions makes people addictive. In the long term, people become less
productive and less motivated to reach their goals.
Explanation: Writing a concluding paragraph may seem like a final step, but there is also a need
to format the reference page. Follow the requirements of your teacher and use one of the
styles. We use APA for this particular sample paper.
References
Ahmad, I. (2018, July 27). Why are we addicted to social media? [Infographic]. Social Media
Week. https://socialmediaweek.org/blog/2018/07/why-are-we-addicted-to-social-media-
infographic/
Mohsin, M. (2020, February 7). 10 social media statistics you need to know in 2020
[Infographic]. Oberlo. https://www.oberlo.com/blog/social-media-marketing-statistics
Zagorski, N. (2017, January 17). Using many social media platforms linked with depression,
anxiety risk. Psychiatric News. https://doi.org/10.1176/appi.pn.2017.1b16