You are on page 1of 2

TEAM PARTNER;

MAIZATUL AKMA

AKALILY SOFIENA
1. Introduction
Paragraph 1

 Overview of the article

As demonstrated in the article, vaccination should be made mandatory for a multitude of


reasons. The author is assured and be of the opinion that vaccination is one of the most
successful public health strategies for saving lives.

2. Evaluation of the article


Paragraph 2

…. – main point
…. – supporting details
…. – strong evidence

Paragraph 2

First and foremost, vaccination protect someone from getting affected from any diseases that
can be serious and can lead someone to death. Our Ministry of Health (MOH) recommends us to
get vaccination since it has a lot of benefits. It may not be able to works 100% to protect us from
getting that diseases but it can help to prevent from getting into stage 4.

Paragraph 3

Moreover, vaccines also can help the disease from speed rapidly. Exemption rates have risen in
recent years, and studies have revealed that vaccination exemptions tend to cluster
geographically, putting some regions at a higher risk of disease outbreaks. This implies that those
who get the vaccination will be able to lower the likelihood of infection spreading to others.

Paragraph 4

Other than that, with vaccines, parents should not worry about their children anymore. A
pandemic that we are going through right now are enough for making a lot of people lose sleep
thinking how their children survive to go school and doing any activity outsides. As we all know
children are more likely to get contagious diseases since they are low in immune system. That is
why vaccination should be mandatory for younger age so that chance to get infected are lower.

Your personal opinion about the article

I partially agree with the author say that mandating vaccination isn't the only approach to boost
immunisation rates. However, we all know that as vaccination rates fall, infectious illnesses
begin to resurface. As a result, vaccines are only necessary as an antidote to reduce the risk of an
impending disease.

Conclusion

In conclusion, I feel that vaccination will not do harm to our bodies. Vaccination protects not
only you, but also people in your community who are unable to get vaccinated.

You might also like