Unit 3: Example Paragraphs Page 66

Writing Task Peer Editing a First Draft

Date: 2/1/2022

Writer: Ngô Thị Thanh Thảo

Peer Editor: Phạm Thị Nhung

Title: A Famous Person

1. What is your favorite part of the paragraph?

My favorite part of the passage is the part where she describes the celebrity's appearance.

2. Write down the topic sentence. Who is the paragraph about?

My favourite celebrity is Lisa whose full name is Lalisa Manoban.

Paragraph about singer Lisa Manoban.

3. What details does the writer give to tell why the person is special?

- She is famous for her great dancing ability and beautiful appearance.

- She was voted by Candler as the most beautiful person in the world.

- She is called the dancing machine Lisa.

4. Describe the subject’s talents.

Her ability to manage expressions on stage is impeccable. Every step of her dance is extremely powerful

and decisive.

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 5. What questions do you have for the writer?

No questions

6. Suggest a place where the writer should add more examples.

Should add: - Supporting sentence (how is her singing talent?)

- Concluding sentence ( state your main idea)