Essay 1 FInal Draft

by Cynthia Moreno

Submission date: 20-Feb-2022 07:27PM (UTC-0600)

Submission ID: 1767004053
File name: essay_1_final_draft.pdf (82.46K)
Word count: 1520
Character count: 7264
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Clear
understanding
of research
genre. Good
Work on
avoiding
personal
pronouns.
Remember to
read the
requirements for
next essay. (2
outside sources
required)
Overall, keep it
up.

Missing ","
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P/V

ArticleWrong
Error Article

S/V Article Error

Wrong Article

S/V Article Error

Article Error

Article Error

Article Error
 Article Error

Wrong Article

Wrong Article

Prep.

Prep.
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ORIGINALITY REPORT

7 %
SIMILARITY INDEX
5%
INTERNET SOURCES
3%
PUBLICATIONS
6%
STUDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

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Submitted to Aquinas College
Student Paper 3%
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Submitted to Cornell University
Student Paper 1%
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academic.oup.com
Internet Source 1%
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www.setravi.df.gob.mx
Internet Source 1%
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Submitted to Heriot-Watt University
Student Paper 1%
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Leslie B. Cohen. "Our developing knowledge
of infant perception and cognition.", American
<1 %
Psychologist, 1979
Publication

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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

95
Instructor

/100
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Text Comment. Clear understanding of research genre. Good Work on avoiding personal
pronouns. Remember to read the requirements for next essay. (2 outside sources required)
Overall, keep it up.

Missing "," Review the rules for using punctuation marks.

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P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. You may want to revise it using the
active voice.

Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article
the.

Wrong Article You may have used the wrong article or pronoun. Proofread the sentence
to make sure that the article or pronoun agrees with the word it describes.

S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject
agrees with the verb.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

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Wrong Article You may have used the wrong article or pronoun. Proofread the sentence
to make sure that the article or pronoun agrees with the word it describes.
 S/V This subject and verb may not agree. Proofread the sentence to make sure the subject
agrees with the verb.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Article Error You may need to remove this article.

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Article Error You may need to remove this article.

Wrong Article You may have used the wrong article or pronoun. Proofread the sentence
to make sure that the article or pronoun agrees with the word it describes.

Wrong Article You may have used the wrong article or pronoun. Proofread the sentence
to make sure that the article or pronoun agrees with the word it describes.

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

Prep. You may be using the wrong preposition.

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