PYAAR YA PAREEKSHA?

PROLOGUE (1 min)

LOCATION: MADH – SUV Car: Morning: Car driving through a road

Priyanka seated in the passenger seat and her jiju Amar driving. Priyanka looks back at her
back seat and sees 2 huge bags, she is sad but thinking. Suddenly she smiles, an almost evil
smile for a second and then makes a sad face … Her left hand lands on Amar’s knee and Amar
reacts with a jolt. He tries to push her hand away, but she pushes his hand away.

Priyanka slowly runs her hand up from his knee to his thighs as she speaks

Priyanka “Jiju mujhe gaon wapas nahi jaana hai jab tak meri M.A. khatam na ho jai.”

Amar (Squirms as he feels Priyankas hand running all over his thighs) “Priyanka ye kya
kar rahi ho. Tumhe maloom hai tumhaari didi iss maamle mei, meri ek nahi
sunegi.”

Priyanka (her hand slowly unbuckling Amar’s belt) “Jiju ghar mei mard aap ho ya didi.
Kuch bhi karo, aap didi ko mana lo.

(She looks up and meets his eyes – she is firm and cold blooded)

“Agar ye gaadi station pahunch gayi, toh jaan lena wahaan se pehla call mai
didi ko karungi aur hum dono ke bare sab kuch bol dungi”

The car brakes with a jolt (Shot of foot on clutch and brake, hand shifting gear to neutral,
tyres squealing as they stop, Amar and Priyanka both jerk and then Amar meets Priyanka’s
look.

He is angry, very angry.

FADE OUT

ANCHOR LINK 01 (1 min)

Ye kya hua abhi. Kya sach mooch Priyanka apni Jija, Amar ko blackmail kar rahi thhi.

Jaise wo Amar ko chcho rahi thhi use ye lag raha thha ki unke beech koi abaidh sambandh hai,
ya thha. Kya yehi wajah hai ki uski didi ne use ghar se nikaal diya thha ya koi aur hi kahani
hai.

Aur Amar kya karega ? Kya wo ye blackmail se darr jayega, aur agar wo Priyanka ki baat ko
maan bhi gaya toh wo apni patni, yaani Priyanka ki didi ko manayega kaise? Bahut saare
sawaal aur ye sab shuru huyi thhi aaj se dedh saal pehle, jab Priyanka apne MA ki padhai
karne apne jija aur didi ke saath, sheher mei rehne aayi.
 SCENE 01 (2 minutes)

LOCATION : Manisha Poolside

SUPER 1 and ½ saal pehle……

Priyanka is in the pool in a swimming costume when Rohini walks in. Priyanka looks up at her,
both smile.

Rohini “Kaisa laga tujhe ghar, pasand aaya?”

Priyanka “Pasand aaya (She twirls around in the pool)… Didi ye Ghar nahi Jannat hai,
Jiju ka style kamaal hai”

Rohini “Aate hi dal badlu ho gayi, ek baar ye khayal nahi aaya, ki miane banwaya
hoga, ye sab?”

Priyanka (looks at her as if seriously thinking, then bursts into a giggle) Tu ne banwaya
ye sab? Naah … Mujhe tere choices yaad hai … poora college, wo bhi humare
chhote shaher mei tujhe Behenji bolta thha.

Rohini looks embarrassed and then retorts

Rohini “Aur tu (Pauses). Tere kapde toh itne chhote hote thhe ki mujhe sharam aati
thhi”

Priyanka “Iss liye toh saare boyfriends mai le jaati thhi (laughs). Kaash jiju mujhe tere
pehle dikh jaate, mai unhe bhi pata leti. Phir ye ghar mera hota (She laughs,
Rohini also laughs)

Rohini (breaking off the hug) Ye ghar tera hi hai baba aur chal jaldi se pool se bahaar
aa aur taiyaar ho jaa. Kal college ka pehle din hai aur tere jiju tujhe shopping
karne le jaa rahe hai. Dinner bhi bahar karenge”

Priyanka Waise di, tu hot lag rahi hai, ye kapde jiju ke choice honge (She laughs and
slowly gets out of the swimming pool and does a twirl) Mai phir bhi hottest
hoon.

Rohini (Giving her a towel)Chal abhi aapne aap ko dhakh le. Tere jiju kya sochenge?

Priyanka (laughs and makes a flying kiss pose) Kya sochenge? Meri saali kitni hot hai,
yehi sochenge… (Comes close to Rohini and whispers in her ears) Tu kyun darr
rahi hai, tujhe jiju pe bhadosa nahi hai kya?

Rohini (playfully pushes her away and walks back towards the house) Tujhse baat
karke koi fayda nahi. Jaldi se taiyaar hoke neeche aa ja, hum late ho rahe hai.

As Rohini leaves Priyanka starts towelling herself dry and pouts and then sings “Jiju ko saali se
pyaar ho gaya” and winks naughtily.
 SCENE 02 (3 minutes)

LOCATION : SILENT HILL RESTAURANT

Amar (looking handsome in jeans and a single breasted jacket), Rohini in a jeans and tee shirt
and Priyanka (in a very short black dress and high heels) reach the main door.

Suddenly Priyanka walks from Rohini’s right side, behind her and Amar and comes on Amar’s
right side. She slips her elbow into Amar’s arm and asks Rohini to do the same.

Rohini “Kya drama hai ye, Priyanka”

Priyanka “Di, yaar, chal na, style se entry maarte hai (looks at Amar and smiles).. aur
waise bhi kam se kam, jiju aur mai to star dikj rahi hai. (looks at Rohini up and
down and smiles) Tub hi supporting cast mei aa jayegi (Laughs)

Rohini and Amar also link arms and they all laugh as they walk inside the restaurant. People
turn to look at them.

They look good as they get a table and the waiter comes for orders.

They all order food, Priyanka is hiding her face behind the menu and signalling to Rohini as to
how expensive the food is .. Rohini is embarrassed, trying to get her to shut up.

Priyanka (Whispering from behind the menu) Di, ye kitni mehengi jageh hai, paneer 700
ka, dal 550 … I mean daal … kya daala hoga usmei, Sona … aur chicken biryani
1100 .. Mummy ka hafte ka budget hai ye ek biryani ?

Rohini (picks up her menu and from behind it whispers) Relax, Amar ko ye jageh
pasand hai and he can afford it. Uske liye service aur quality maine rakhti,
paisa nahi.

Amar orders a whisky for himself and looks at Rohini…

Amar Aap dono ka menu ke peeche chhup kar baat karna khatam huya to batayenge,
drink mei kya lenge…. Mai Scotch le raha hoon

Rohini (Embarrased as she puts down the menu) Mai ek mocktail loongi, Virgin
Pinacolada, tu bhi try karke dekh le Priyanka, achcha hai ..

Priyanka (looks at Amar) Ye virgin pinacolada kyu hai, I mean virgin insaan samajh mei
aata hai, lekin virgin drink?

Rohini is embarrassed but Amar laughs

Amar Kyunki issme alcohol, yaani ki madira nahi hai (turns to Rohini) aaj wine try kar
lo, waise bhi wo grape juice hi hai, ek tarah se

Rohini Nahi Amar, tumhei pata hai mai peeti nahi

Priyanka Didi doctors bhi kehte hai ki ek do drink achcha hota hai (she leans in close to
Rohini & whispers) waise bhi shaadi ke baad virgin shabd suit nahi hota hai

Rohini’s face is in shock for a moment and Priyanka notices that

Priyanka (Still whispering) Maine kuch galat keh diya kya di? Tera aur Amar ka sharereek
sambandh theek toh hai na?

Rohini (Smiling again) Ha baba aur tu aapne kaam se matlab rakh (Turns to Amar) ..
Chalo aaj red wine hi peete hai

Amar smiles and orders

Small montage of the 3 drinking and eating and having fun and suddenly Rohini gets
queasy …

She seems a little drunk and Priyanka has to take her to the washroom.

Amar is sitting and finishing his drink when the girls return, Rohini looks unwell.

Amar Ghar chale, waise bhi dinner toh ho gaya?

Rohini (fake smile) Nahi mai theek hoon (pointing to the half full wine bottle) waise
bhi aap logo ka drink baaki hai, mere wajah se kharab mat karo.

Priyanka Nahi di, waise bhi jiju aur hum hall mei baith ke bhi drink khatam kar sakte
hai. Lekin tujhe bistaar pe lait ke aaram karne ki zaroorat hai.

Amar nods and they ask for the wine and scotch bottles to be packed and they leave …

FADE OUT

(1st BREAK - 7 MINUTES)

 SCENE 03 (5 minutes)

LOCATION : MANISHA LIVING ROOM (Setup differently)

Amar walks into the hall and starts making a drink for both of them. Handing her the wine
glass he says…

Amar Sorry thoda waqt lag gaya, Rohini ko change kar ke sula ke aaya…. Cheers (they
both clink glasses) waise tumne change nahi kiya?

Priyanka Change kar ke kya pehenti?

Amar Nightclothes, I mean jo bhi pehen ke soti ho.

Priyanka (leans forward and whispers) Jiju mai kuch bhi nahi pehen ke soti hoon, aa jaun
waise?

Amar laughs, thinking its a joke but Priyanka is serious …

Priyanka Seriously jiju, mai bina kapdo ke hi soti hoon

Amar is embarrassed but Priyanka slides in closer to him on the sofa, her short dress slides up
even more and she whispers, her lips almost touching Amar’s ears

Priyanka Jiju, sharma kyu rahe ho, mai adult hoon (Pause) aur waise bhi (Speaking softly
and seductively) Saali aadhi gharwaali hoti hai … Mujhse kyu sharma rahe aap?

Amar (uncomfortable but we can see in his expression that he is turned on especially
since Priyanka’s lips are still close to his ears and her hand is almost
accidentally on his thigh) Priyanka, ye sab bolne waali baat hai, aisa thodi hota
hai

Priyanka (her lips brushing his ear as she whispers) Jiju ek personal sa baat poochun?

Amar (Mumbling) Haan

Priyanka Didi jab 15 saal ki thhi tab school mei long jump karte huye ek chot aayi thhi.
Abhi kaisa hai wo chot, kyunki doctors ne kaha thha ki who kabhi poori tarah
theek nahi hoga

Amar Chot, kahan chot, kaisa chot?

Priyanka (pretending to be embarrassed, gets up to refill both glasses) Rehne dijiye,

agar di ne nahi bataya toh theek ho gaya hoga. (Handing Amar his glass) waise
bhi humara chhote shaher ke doctors ko kya pata…

Amar (taking a sip, Priyanka is standing inches infront of him) Nahi nahi batao na, ho
sakta hai boli ho Rohini ne aur mai bhool gaya

Priyanka Ye aisa chot thha jiju jo aap sunnte toh kabhi nahi bhoolte
Amar Kaisa chot, bolo Priyanka aur tum baith bhi jao

Priyanka Baithti hoon. Waise jiju chot yahaan thha (pointing between her legs as she sits
down). Do pairo ke theek beech mei. Ligament tear ho gaya thha aur muscle
damage bhi thha. (She sits very close to Amar, her legs rubbing his as he listens
dumbfounded) .. Gyanecologist ne toh shaadi ke kuch din pehle ye bhi bola
thha ki Di kabhi normal yaunsanjog nahi kar payegi. Dard hoga, bleeding bhi ho
sakta hai aur infection bhi.

Amar is shocked as he hears this.

Amar Tum sure ho Priyanka?

Priyanka Ofcourse mai sure hoon. Mere paas wo sab medical reports ka copy bhi hai.
Subah deti hoon aapko. Lekin please di ko mat bolna.

Amar Nahi nahi bataunga, lekin mai best doctors ko dhund ke uske treatment
karwaunga. Thank you Priyanka

Amar finishes his drink in a gulp and so does Priyanka

Amar Chalo bahut ho gaya, so jao tum bhi

Priyanka (gets up with the glasses) Ek hi to baaki hai mera, khatam kar lete. Eke k last.

Amar agrees and Priyanka gets up to make another drink. She bends over a bit extra at the
counter as she makes the drinks. She is sure that Amar is watching as she speaks from there.

Priyanka Waise jiju aap dono ka sex life normal hai, hai na

She walks back and bends forward showing her cleavage as she serves Amar his glass

Amar (His eyes looking down at the floor as he speaks) Nahi Priyanka, normal bilkul
nahi hai. Aaj samajh mei aa raha hai ki Rohini har baar kuch bahana kyu kar
jaati hai.

Priyanka holds his face in her hands and makes him look at her

Priyanka Di ko bata dena chahiye thha aapko. Aapko aise banchit kaise kar sakti hai wo
ek swabhavik shareerek sambandh se. Aap uske pati ho

Amar Nahi Priyanka, use batana toh chahiye thha. (looks down, pauses, then looks
up) Lekin issliye nahi ki mai banchit hoon balki Issliye ki kabhi kabar jab
hamara shareerek sambandh huya hai toh use kitni dard huyi hogi aur ussne wo
chupaya mujhse. Mujhe bol deti to mai intezaar karta, pehle ilaaj karata.

Priyanka (Still holding his face in her hands) Awww, kitna pyaar karte hai aap di se.
Kaash mujhe koi aisa mil jai. (And leans close to his face) Aur jhoot mat boliye,
aap normal insaan hai, aapki sharer ka bhi apni zaroorate hai, hai na
Amar nods weakly and says “Lekin mai intezaar kar sakta hoon”

Priyanka leans in closer and says “Kab tak, duss saal hog aye di ka chot ko, kab tak intezaar
karenge aap”

She leans in and is about to kiss him. Suddenly there is the sound of a flush and Amar pulls his
head back and opens his eyes just as their lips touched.

Rohini’s voice “Amar ab aa jao, Priyanka ka kal college ka pehla din hai. Subah uthna hoga.”

Amar gets up and says “Ek minute mei aya”

He walks away towards his bedroom.

Priyanka sits and drinks the balance straight from the bottle …

Priyanka (to herself) Bahut burra timing Di tera … bachpan se lekar aaj tak.

She puts the bottle down and leaves

FADE OUT

ANCHOR LINK 2 (1/2 minute)

Kahani abhi abhi to shuru huyi hai, lekin itne mei hi kahaani mei kayii modh dekhne ko mile
hai. Kayii sawaal hai jinke abhi tak koi jawaab nahi.

Ye toh zahir hai ki Rohini apni chhoti behen se bahut pyaar karti hai lekin Priyanka ke
vyabhaar kuch alag hi rang dikha rahi hai, Kyun ?

Amar aur Rohini ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hai, toh phir Rohini ne apne chhot ki itni badi
sachai Amar se chupayi kyu? Aur Priyanka ghar mei aate hi ussi baat ko lekar Amar aur Rohini
mei photo kyu daal rahi hai?

Chaliye aage dekhte hai kya hota hai…

(End 12 and 1/2 mins … 2nd Break)

SCENE 04 (3 minutes)

Priyanka’s bedroom

ESSENTIAL TREATMENT : Shoot semi nudity in Silhouttes/ Shadow only

Raat ko ghar pe Priyanka aapne kamre mei kapde badal rahi hai ki usko darwaze ke bahaar ek
saaya dikhta hai.

Darwaza halka sa khula hai, kamre ki light chalu hai, bahaar verandah andhera hai. Priyanka
samajh jaati hai ki jo bhi bahaar hai wo usse dekh sakta hai, lekin Priyanka ko sirf uska saya
dikh raha hai.

Wo phir bhi aapne kapde utadte rehti hai aur tab hi Rohini kamre ki andar aati hai.

Rohini “Priyanka, darwaza bandh kar ke kapde change kiya kar”

Priyanka muskurati hai, a naughty smile as she turns towards Rohini.

Priyanka Kyu di, tujhe jiju pe shak hai kya?

Rohini (a little angry) Phir bakwaas. Achcha sunn mai kaam pe jaa rahi hoon, aaj
office mei night shift hai. Tere jiju hall mei hai, saath dinner kar lena.

Priyanka Di, ek baat bata. Jiju lakho mei kamate hai harr mahina, phir bhi tu tere call
centre mei itni mehnat karti hai, challish hazaar ke liye. Kyu?

Rohini Kyunki mai nahi bhooli ki papa bees hazaar ke kamai pe poora ghar chalate
thhe… Aur mera kaam karna mera swabhimaan hai. Theek se padhai kar, phir
tub hi kabhi lakho mei kamaigi. (A car honks outside) Chal mai late ho rahi
hoon.

Priyanka kamre ki khidki se dekhti hai ki Rohini call centre ki gaadi mei baith kar nikal gayi.
Wo darwaze se jhaank ke dekhti hai to Amar akele hall mei baithe drink kar raha hai.
Priyanka smiles and takes her phone out and types.

LIVING ROOM

Amar’s phone buzzes, he picks it up. It’s a message from Priyanka

“Akele hi drink karenge ya mere liye wine hai?”

Amar smiles and types “Aa jao, wine ready hai”

In a sec Priyanka comes down… She is wearing only a t shirt that just somehow covers her and
has a small bag in her hand. She sets the bag down on the table and walks suggestively past
Amar and puts on a show as she gets her wine bottle and pours herself a drink, all very
exaggerated and suggestive, making sure that she is putting on a show for Amar. With her
glass filled she comes and sits next to Amar and runs her finger over his face. Amar pushes
that away.

Amar Suno Priyanka, jo bhi kal huya, wo sahi nahi thha ?

Priyanka Kya hua jiju kal, kya sahi nahi thha ? Kya mujhe aapko didi ke bimaari ke bare
batana nahi chahiye thha?
Amar Nahi, wo toh tumne bahut achcha kiya, lekin wo kissss (he stammers & says it)

Priyanka (laughs) Lekin wo toh huya hi nahi jiju, shayad hone waala thha ki didi ne
awaaz de di aur aap bhag gaye. (She takes a long sip of the wine)

Amar (taking a gulp of whisky) Haan, ye achcha huya ki Rohini ne time pe awaaz de
di. Warna pata nahi kuch galat ho jaata toh.

Priyanka Achcha huya. Jiju aapko pata hai aap shayad ajeevan bhramchari reh jaoge
agar aise sochenge toh.

She takes out a fat file from the bag and hands it to Amar. Amar looks at it. It’s Rohini’s
medical reports. He opens the file and begins to read. Montage of Amar getting serious as he
reads, Priyanka refilling his glass again and again and by the time Amar shuts the file, he is
drunk and depressed.

Priyanka takes the file from him and runs her fingers up his thighs… as she leans in and kissing
his ears, she whispers ..

Priyanka Mai bhi apni di se pyaar karti hoon, chahti hoon ki uski ghar hamesha basa
rahe. Issliye jo mere Di, mere pyaare jiju ke liye nahi karr sakti, mai wo karna
chahti hoon unke liye. Do beheno ke beech jiju khush rahe ….

She leans in close to him and they kiss … MONTAGE – KEEPING youtube COMMUNITY
GUIDELINES IN MIND … Shots of her t shirt coming off and landing on the floor … Amar’s
trousers and shirt and boxers landing on top of her tee shirt … Love making shots in out focus

FADE OUT

ANCHOR LINK 3 (1 minute)

Toh Priyanka ne Rohini ka bimaari ka fayda utha kar, Amar ke saath ek abaidh sambandh
shuru kar liya.

Ek saal ho gaya thha, Amar aur Priyanka ka ye sambandh Rohini ke anjaane mei chal raha
thha lekin Amar aaj bhi Rohini se pyar karta thha aur ab toh Rohini ka ilaaj bhi shuru ho
chukka thha aur ilaaj se kaafi sudhaar ho chukka thha.
Lekin sawaal ye hai ki, Priyanka ye sab kuch se chahti kya thhi ?

Kya ye sirf ek sharer ka pyaas bujhane ka tareeqa thha ya iske peeche koi aur sharyantra
thha?

Ek din Amar aur Rohini, Delhi se do din baad ghar laut te hai. Wo khush hai, doctors ne
kaha ki rohini aagle kuch mahino mei poori tareh theek ho jayegi.

SCENE 05 (1 & 1/2 minutes)

LOCATION : Outside Audi Bungalow, Silent Hill (Exterior)

Rajshree Bungalow, Interior

Amar and Rohini enter the house, its evening and the house is dark.. They look around for
Priyanka but she is not there.
Amar calls up Priyanka as Rohini looks around the house .. She is worried

Rohini (walking around) Arre 10 baj gaye, wo itna late kahan padh hai

Amar Ek second, ring ho raha hai. Hello Priyanka, kahan ho beta, hum ghar pe hai

Priyanka Aap log kal aane waale thhe na?

Amar Late evening flight mil gaya, soche tumhei surprise denge

Priyanka (Sounds of muffled moaning coming) Mai ek dost ke ghar pe hoon, college ka
dost hai. Ek chhota sa party thha. Mai abhi aayi.

Amar Theek hai, mai aata hoon (Cuts the phone and says to Rohini) Ek dost ke ghar
pe party mei hai, Duss minute mei aa rahi hai (Suddenly realises Rohini is
standing very seriously) Kya hua Rohini?

Rohini (Holds out her hand) Tum jab phone pe thhe mai uske kamre mei gayi thhi.
Dekho kya mila

Amar takes them from her hands, its packs of condoms and birth control pills … He is shocked
and looks at Rohini.

Rohini Galti meri hai, bahut chhot de di maine usko. Papa ko kya mooh dikhaungi. Mai
use kal hi gaon waapas bhej rahi hoon. Aap use subah ke train mei baitha ke
aana. Papa wahaan receive kar lenge

Amar Lekin Rohini

Rohini Kuch mat bolna aap Amar

The doorbell rings and Amar opens it and in walks Priyanka. She goes to hug Rohini but she
backs away and holds out her hand.

Rohini Ye kya hai, Priyanka ?

Shocked expression on Priyanka’s face

FADE OUT

SCENE 06 (1 & ½ minutes)

Prologue repeated in quick montage of 30 secs and we resume from Amar looking at Priyanka.

Amar Theek hai Priyanka, mai Rohini ko samjha loonga, lekin ab se ye sab bandh.

Priyanka (Smiling innocently) Theek hai jiju, jaise aap bole. Sirf di ko samjha lijiye

The car reaches the house

Rohini is stunned to see both Amar and Priyanka come back

Rohini Ye kya Amar, aap isse lekar wapas aa gaye?

Amar Nahi hoga ye mere se Rohini. Mai iska zindagi barbad nahi kar sakta. 6 mahine
baaki hai iske M.A. khatam hone mei. Maana ki isne ek galti ki lekin uske liye
iske zindagi barbad kar dena mujhe samajh mei nahi aaya. Waise bhi issne
mujhse waada kiya hai ab se padhai khatam hone tak ye sab bandh.

Priyanka (Crying) Haan di, ek baar maaf kar do. Dobaara ye galti kabhi nahi hoga.

Rohini smiles at her and pulls her into a hug.

FADE OUT

SCENE 07 (2 minutes)

LOCATION MANISHA BEDROOM – Make a seedy look

Clock shows its 3 pm and Amar knocks on room no 303. The door opens slightly and Amar
enters. He is angry but is stunned as he sees Priyanka draped in only a towel.

Amar Ye kya Priyanka, ek hafta bhi nahi huya ki tumne waada kiya thha ki ye sab
bandh kar doge aur aaj tum mujhe phone pe blackmail karke yahaan bulane ka
kya matlab hai.
Priyanka Jiju aap gussa hote ho na toh bahut sexy lagte ho. (She laughs and then her
face hardens) Aur ye jhatke mei rishta khatam karne ka kya natak laga rakhha
hai aapne. Didi theek ho gayi hai, matlab meri zaroorat khatam. Aur mera kya
hoga? Ye saat din mai aapka aur didi ke kamre ke bahaar khade hokar aap logo
ke pyaar ki baate sunn sunn kar thak gayi hoon. (Amar looks shocked)

Aise dekhiye mat mujhe. Jab neend na aaye insaan ko ye soch soch ke ki jo
uske bahoon mei hona chahiye wo iswaqt kissi aur ke bahoon mei hai, tab
insaan aisa hi karta hai. Bahut khush hai na aap. Kabhi socha ki mera kya hoga?

Amar Priyanka, dekho tum sahi ho, galti meri hi hai. Mujhe tumhaare saath ye
sambandh banana chahiye hi nahi thha. Lekin mai haanth jor ke prarthna karta
hoon tumse, please bhool jao ye sab. Rohini ko zindagi mei pehli baar kuch
khushi mil rahi hai. Ye use mat chchin lo. Please …

Priyanka Rohini, Rohini Rohini … pakk gayi hoon mai usski khushi ka soch soch ke. Mera
kya hoga. (rushes up to Amar and tries to kiss him) Amar, mera matlab jiju,
mai aapse pyaar karti hoon. Bhool jao Rohini ko … (BACK TO CAMERA facing
Amar) she opens the towel and gestures at him suggestively) Mai aapko wo
khushi dungi jo Rohini kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti.

Amar (turns his back to her) Kapde pehen lo, ghar jaa rahe hum. (Priyanka is about
to say something and Amar shhhh’s her as he turns towards her).

Aur haan, Dhamki mat dena ki sab kuch bol dogi Rohini ko … Arre tum kya
bologi, galti meri hai, mai khud bol dunga. Jo sazaa de woh mujhe qubool hai.
Lekin mai ye galti aage aur nahi karunga.

Priyanka (Grim faced as she wears her clothes and walks upto him… She leans close to
him and whispers) Galti tumhaari nahi hai Amar, Mummy Papa ki tarah Rohini
ke bholepaan se tumhei bhi pyaar ho gaya. Lekin mai tumhaari aankhen khool
dungi. Mai use maar dungi. Tumhaare mere beech job hi ayega, mai use maar
dungi.

She walks out of the room, Amar following stunned and confused.

FADE OUT (End 21 mins … 2nd Break)

SCENE 08 (1 and 1/2 minutes)

Car Parking Outside hotel

Amar and Priyanka walk outside the hotel when suddenly a flash hits them in the eye …

Priyanka is stuned to see Sid, a young man almost her age.

Priyanka Sid tu yahaan kya kar raha hai. Jiju ye Sid hai, mere college ka dost. Isko
mujhse pyaar hai.

Sid (Viciously angry) To ye hai tera pyaar jiske liye tu ne mujhe chhod diya. Arre
Ye tera jija hai. Ab dekh mai ye photo jab sab ko dikha doon phir kya hota hai
tera jije ka.

Amar (still in shock) Sid tum galat samajh rahe ho, Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai mere aur
Priyanka ke beech.

Sid (More angry) Jhoot mat bolo jiju. Ye wohi hotel hai jahaan mai Priyanka ko
lekar aata thha. Uss din jab aaplog dilli se jaldi wapaas aa gaye hum yehi thhe.
Ye per hour waala hotel hai, Yahaa ek hi cheez hota hai. Maine hi Priyanka ko
ye jageh dikhaya thha aur ye aaj yahaan, tumahaare saath….

He rushes to his bike and is about to take off when Priyanka walks upto him and whispers
something into his ears. He drives off … Priyanka walks back to the car and Amar and she
drive off. Just as they are about to take a right on the main road Priyanka stops Amar and
says “Aap office jao, mai auto lekar ghar aa jaungi”

Amar drops her and drives off…..

SCENE 09 (2 and 1/2 minutes) :

Amar’s Office cabin … SUPER Do din baad

There is a knock on the door and Amar looks upto see a Police Inspector standing there. He
stands up and waves him in. As they shake hands
Inspector “Inspector Karuna Rajput, Crime Branch … Mujhe aapse kuch sawaal poochna
thha”

Amar Ji Poochiye

Inspector (Gives him a photograph) Aap isse jaante?

Amar Ji, ye Sid hai, poora naam nahi pata, mere Saali, Priyanka ka college ka dost
hai

Inspector Hai, nahi thha. Kal sham 6 baje iss ne bike accident mei jaan gawa di. Shuru
mei laga thha ki accident hai, lekin iske blood report mei khoon mei neend ki
dawai mila huya thha. Abhi tak ye baat police dept ke bahaar humne sirf aapse
kaha hai, kissi aur ko nahi maloom. Please aapne aap tak rakhna.

(Amar is about to say something when she says) Aap pe hume shaq nahi hai,
Hume maloom hai ki kal poore dinn aap office mei thhe, humne office ka CCTV
footage dekh liya hai. Hum sirf aapse ye janna chahte hai ki iske phone mei
aapka naam, dushman number 1 karke stored kyun hai.

Amar (relieved but stammers) Shayad issliye ki uska aur mere Saali ka rishta thha aur
mai iss rishte ki khilaaf thha. Lekin ye kaise ho gaya. Wo toh bacha ladka thha.

Inspector Abhi tak hume mallom nahi, jaise kuch pata chalta hai hum aapse contact
karenge

She gets up and he does too. They shake hands and she leaves.

Amar dials a number and Priyanka’s voice comes on …

Priyanka Hello Jiju, mujhe toh laga, aap mujhse milna hi nahi chahte

Amar Priyanka, maamla serious hai, tumhe mallom hai ki Sid

Priyanka (interrupting him) Mar gaya. Haan pata hai, kisine use neend ki dawai de di thhi
aur wo neend ke haal mei bike chelate huye accident kar gaya.

Amar shocked (Insp. dialogue of only him being told of the sleeping medicine comes to him)

Amar Priyanka, tumhei kaise maloom, neend ki dawaii ke bare

Priyanka (laughs and speaks evilly) Saala bol raha thha ki Di ko bol dega hum dono ke
bare. Jo huwa achcha huya. Maine kaha thha na jiju, jo bhi aapke mere beech
ayega, Marr jayega.

SCENE 010 (1 and 1/2 minutes)

Amar ek job interview ke liye Delhi jaa raha hai. He kisses Rohini bye and ignores Priyanka.
Late night, 3 am, Priyanka wakes up. She opens her almirah and takes out a knife and a bottle
of whisky. She begins to drink, neat. Once the whole bottle is over – she takes a photo of the
2 sisters together and begins to cut Rohini’s photo part into pieces. She is crying as she does
this.

All she keeps muttering is, Tujhe buss harr baar 2 nd aana thha, Amar ke mamle mei tu 1 st aa
gayi. Issliye tujhe marna padega.

She slowly gets up and walks to rohini’s room. She is fast asleep and Priyanka raises the knife
high. Suddenly a hand holds her hand and the lights come on in the room. Amar and Inspector
Karuna are there.

SCENE 011 (1 and 1/2 minutes)

CUT to Police Station

Amar says after Rohini’s chilling threat when he realized that she had killed Sid, he went to
inspector Salim and a plan was hatched.

When Priyanka was at college and Rohini was at work, Amar got CCTV cameras installed in all
the rooms and gave mobile access to himself and the Inspector.

Then Amar made up the story about going to delhi and they all waited hidden inside the
house. Once Priyanka took the knife out, they silently entered and caught her in the act.

Priyanka confesses to luring Sid to the jungle behind the college and killing him with a cold
drink spiked with poison.

END … 28 minutes …

AFTER FINAL SHARP EDITING TOTAL STORY WILL BE BETWEEN 24 – 27 MINUTES.

Aagle din Amar kaam pe hai ki usse boss aapne kamre mei bulata hai.

Amar jab kamre mei aata hai toh wahaan Inspector Salim ko dekh kar chaunk jaata hai.

Boss kehte hai ki Siddhart Tiwari ko jaante ho aap.

Amar kehta hai, haan, ek do baar mila hoon.

Inspector kehte hai ki aaj dupahar 2 baje uski laash mili hai college ke peeche jungle mei.
Kissi ne usse poison dekar maar diya thha kuch hi deir pehle.

Body fresh thhi. Unko Sid ke bag mei ek diary mila hai aur uss diary mei usne Amar ka naam
likh rakha thha – uske saath usne likha thha dushman number 1.

Amar baukhla jaata hai aur kehta hai ki Sid ka uska Saali Priyanka ke saath chakkar thha aur
Amar aur uski patni Rohini dono iske khilaaf thhe. Shayaad issliye Sid ne aisa likha hoga.

Boss kehta hai ki unhone Inspector ko confirm kiya hai ki subah 9 baje se Amar office mei hai
toh wo ye kaam karr nahi sakta.

Tabhi Inspector ka phone bajta hai aur wo Amar se poochte hai ki kal aapka Sid se Hotel
Paradise ke bahar koi jhadap huya thha kya. Amar nod karta hai haan.

Inspector kehta hai, humara investigation jaari rahega .. agar zaroorat padi toh appko police
station aana padega.

BREAK 03 – minutes

SEGMENT 4

ANCHOR LINK 3 – 1 minutes

This segment begins with Amar asking Priyanka to abort. He tries to convince her that the kid
could be Sid’s.

Priyanka says no, I always used birth control and protection with Sid, not with you.

Amar says what do I do with Rohini

Priyanka says “Kill her”.

Amar says impossible.

Priyanka says, then I will her.

Amar is stunned. He asks “Did u kill Sid” ..

Priyanka smiles and says “I will kill anyone who comes between you and me.”

3 dinn baad – Late evening

ANCHOR LINK 4 – minutes

END