Northgate High School

Senior Project Mentor/ Expert Critique

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1. Comments:
Is there any misinformation or has the writer made any factual errors? y e s _ n o ~

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3. What information om you give to help the student improve the content of the paper (induding
your own ktlowledge of the topic)?

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