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Trước khi làm bài học viên đọc kĩ hướng dẫn & trả lời các câu hỏi sau đây:
1. Target Writing: 6.0-6.5
2. Thời gian sẽ thi IELTS: 06/2022
3. Yếu điểm trong Writing:
4. Đã đọc kĩ cách học Writing với IELTS TUTOR?
https://www.ieltstutor.me/blog/huong-dan-cach-hoc-ielts-writing-hieu-qua
5. Đã đọc kĩ cách lập dàn bài?
https://www.ieltstutor.me/blog/lap-dan-y-ielts-writing-task-one-task-two
6. Đã đọc kĩ về phân bố thời gian IELTS WRITING?
https://www.ieltstutor.me/blog/phan-bo-thoi-gian-ielts-writing
7. Trong 4 tiêu chí chấm thi IELTS WRITING, có gặp khó khăn ở tiêu chí nào không?
https://www.ieltstutor.me/blog/4-tieu-chi-cham-ielts-writing
8. Trong quá trình làm bài học viên có câu hỏi còn thắc mắc không? (nêu cụ thể để giáo viên hướng dẫn nhé)
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Đề bài
The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local
environmental problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more
threatening issues such as global warming.To what extent do you agree?

Bài viết (max 300 words cho Task 2, max 160 words cho
Task 1)

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Dàn bài lần 1

Totally disagree
Body 1:
- Local environment problems directly affect resident while global issues are only observed in a long period.
- Many local problems exist, such as air pollution, water pollution
- These problems cause diseases, decline people’s expectancy
- Residents who pay taxes should be protected by their government, instead of concerning global problems
- For example, air pollution cause lung cancer patients, water pollution affect to food and drink.
Body 2:
- Solving local problems helps prevent global issues.
- Resource which is used to reduce deforestation -> reduce greenhouse gas -> lessen global warming

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Bài viết lần 1

In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on whether or not the government should
decrease cost for local environment problems and instead rise funding into urgent and threatening issues like global
warming. From my perspective, I totally disagree with that opinion for the following reasons.

Firstly, it is clear that local environment problems directly affect resident’s life while global issues are just observed in a
long period. In fact, many environment troubles such as air pollution or water pollution still exist in almost country, which
damage human health day by day. That is main reason for the rising of diseases and a decline in people’s lifespan. For
instance, air pollution which is caused by the emissions of transporting vehicles and industrial activities is a vital part that
leads to a lot of lung diseases, especially lung cancer. On the other hand, global issues like global warming even need a
couple of centuries to truly create a negative effect on human. Therefore, funding into regional environment is definitely
necessary and pressing to protect residents who has paid a variety of environment taxes for a better life.

Secondly, local environment trouble is the source of global problem such as global warming or climate change, so
improving local environment is also a solution for global issues. To be more specific, local activities like deforestation
certainly is the main cause leading to greenhouse gas which will finally contribute to the rising of global warming. In these
cases, investing the amounts of money to afforestation is not only improves the quality of regional environment but also
protects the ultimate consequence which is global warming.

In conclusion, by the reasons mentioned above, the government should remain funding for local environment problems,
instead of increasing cost into other global issues such as global warming.

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Bài mẫu

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Dàn bài lần 2

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