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Đề bài
Should the government regulate the fast food industry in the same way that regulates the drug, alcohol, and tobacco
industries?

Bài viết (max 300 words cho Task 2, max 160 words cho
Task 1)

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Dàn bài lần 1

Should the government regulate the fast food industry in the same way that regulates the drug, alcohol, and tobacco
industries?

Intro: shouldn’t control as strictly as drug, alcohol, and tobacco

Body 1: ensure the adequate nutrient and convenience
Body 2: not harm as drug, alcohol, and tobacco  using other ways to decrease the concerns about
the obesity.

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Bài viết lần 1

In this day and age, more and more people pay attention to the fast food chain whether
being restricted or not by the authorities. While there are several benefits to the control of
convenient food, I am of the opinion that we should not restrict as strictly as drug, alcohol,
and tobacco for several reasons.

First and foremost, the convenience of unhealthy food helps people save time as well as
guarantee the supporting energy for working constant hours. Mostly, Fast food items are
made of saturated fats and carbohydrates that are so high in calories to enrich our body for
working for a long time. Hamburger, for example, is considered a prioritized option of most
people owing to the convenience. Instead of consuming hours for preparing a quality meal,
they tend to purchase hamburgers to save time and expense for eating. As a result, the
fast food industry contributes significantly to the our life

Besides, I believe that fast food items do not harm for consumers as dangerous as drug,
alcohol, and tobacco industries. In term of drug, alcohol and tobacco produces, they are
addictive substance, damage our health despite the first time using while fast food
produces just affect if we abuse combine with have a unreasonable dairy diet. Therefore, if
we keep fit and healthy with exercises and balanced diets, we may consume convenient

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food without pressure about negative influences to health and body issues. Instead of
banning or restricting the use, the authority may alter other methods to minimize the obesity
resulting from fast food, including giving recommendations for consumers about the serious
effects of abuse.
In conclusion, fast food industries should not be restricted as the same ways of the drug, alcohol,
and tobacco industries. If we know balance between dairy diet and exercise, they are an optimal
option for busiers because of a resonable price and convinient food.

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Bài mẫu

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Dàn bài lần 2

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Bài viết lần 2

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Dàn bài lần 3

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Bài viết lần 3

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Dàn bài lần 4

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Bài viết lần 4

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