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He drowsed and was aware of silence
heaped Round him, unshaken as the Simile: Shows how the steadfast walls were
steadfast walls; Aqueous like floating rays of unshaken.
amber light, Soaring and quivering in the Imagery: Visual imagery is used to paint a
wings of sleep. Silence and safety; and his picture in the reader's head of what it is like
mortal shore Lipped by the inward, moonless sleeping on bed during war.
waves of death.
Someone was holding water to his mouth. He Imagery: used to describe the dark red light
swallowed, unresisting; moaned and dropped which is a light that bloomed through the
Through crimson gloom to darkness; and darkness that he was experiencing.
forgot The opiate throb and ache that was his
wound. Water—calm, sliding green above the Tactile Imagery: Used to exemplify his pain
weir; Water—a sky-lit alley for his boat, through his injury.
Bird-voiced, and bordered with reflected
flowers And shaken hues of summer: drifting listing/punctuation : Used to show his
down, He dipped contented oars, and sighed, sequence of movements.
and slept.
Night, with a gust of wind, was in the ward, Imagery: Shows the impact that wind had in
Blowing the curtain to a gummering curve. the ward .
Night. He was blind; he could not see the metaphor: His inability to project his
stars Glinting among the wraiths of wandering perception beyond his current situation made
cloud; Queer blots of colour, purple, scarlet, him remain in the darkness and oblivious to
green, Flickered and faded in his drowning any potential beauty.
eyes. Personification: Shows how he was struggling
to see and his eyesight is slowly disappearing
into the suffocation.
He stirred, shifting his body; then the pain Metaphor : Comparing his pain with a porling
Leaped like a prowling beast, and gripped beast, used to show how his pain is getting
and tore His groping dreams with grinding worse and is coming out of nowhere.
claws and fangs. But someone was beside
him; soon he lay Shuddering because that Imagery: How he doesn’t care anymore and
evil thing had passed. And death, who'd is ready to die.
stepped toward him, paused and stared.
Metaphor: Compares his dreams with
grinding claws and fangs.Making it seem he
will never for ful his dreams.
Light many lamps and gather round his bed. High modality: Used to persuade the reader
Lend him your eyes, warm blood, and will to to be sorry for the soldier.
live. Speak to him; rouse him; you may save
him yet. He's young; he hated war; how
should he die When cruel old campaigners Imagery: Used to show who he was in the
win safe through? past before the war started.
Rhetorical question : Makes the reader think
why he should die fighting but the cruel ol
campaigners stay safe.
But death replied: “I choose him.” So he went, Personification: Giving death a human
And there was silence in the summer night; characteristic of speech, showing how death
Silence and safety; and the veils of sleep. has the ability to choose people.
Then, far away, the thudding of the guns.
Imagery: Imagery is used to show the readers
how quiet the night was.