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SECTIPN: __________________________
QUARTER: 1
LEARNING PACKET NO: 1
Articles on women's sports were placed on the left page and often at the bottom, which is a place
skipped by many readers.
Which two sentences below express the same idea using more formal language? Kindly check
the sentence of your choice. Explain why did you choose those sentences.
______ Articles on women's sports were placed on the left page. Often at
the bottom, which is an area often overlooked by readers.
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______ Articles on women’s sports were placed on the left page, often at
the bottom, which is an area most readers jump over.
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______ Articles on women's sports were placed on the left page, often at
the bottom, which is a less prominent position.
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Activity 2. Identify and underline the seven instances of informal language in the text
below.
These results are really quite good. The model fits very well with the data points, as indicated by
the R 2 values of 0.32 shown in Table 1 above. But the method used to obtain the best values for
a, b, and c wasn't efficient as it involved putting lots of values into an Excel spreadsheet over and
over to try and get the lowest R 2 value.
...Mikosa found similar results in her study for Womensport Australia, where she found that
journalists discussed the female athletes' "elegance" or referred to women as "blonde girl(s)"
and a journalist even wrote about one athlete's "domestic routine of cooking" (1998). With this
in mind, I was absolutely appalled to hear an Australian television commentator’s reference to
the women's Dutch hockey team when they won a bronze medal on the 29/9/2000. When the team
stood on the dais to receive their medal, the male commentator’s sole comment was "Ahh look at
the pretty little Dutch girls", without any mention whatsoever of their athleticism or sporting
ability. It was a sad moment for Australian commentating and strengthens the arguments of
Philips and Mikoza regarding the language the media uses to portray sports women and
women's sport alike.
Identify the emotive words or phrases in the list below. check the box that shows emotive words.
domestic routine
Activity 5. These are some ways of limiting the use of ‘I’ and ‘we’ in academic writing.
Match the options in the bulleted phrases below, which use ‘I’ and ‘we’ with the most
appropriate option from the list below.
Activity 6. Match the informal vocabulary in the list below with the more appropriate formal
options underneath.
English often has more than one way to express an action. The choice is usually between a
phrasal verb (often verb + preposition) and a single word. Phrasal verbs (e.g. give up, write
down) are often used in conversation; however, in academic writing single verbs are used
wherever possible.
________Look at ________Go over
________Show ________Begin
________Good ________A lot of
________ A bit ________Fix
________Make sure
Activity 7. The following eight sentences are written in an informal or subjective style. Select
an option from below to replace the bold text with formal and objective academic language.
Click the blue arrow to move to the next sentence.
______1. It’s so obvious that people were given jobs just because they were male or
female. I don’t think that is an acceptable approach and is even against the
law.
A. It is ridiculous B. I am outraged C. It appears
______2. It’s so obvious that people were given jobs just because they were male or
female. I don’t think that is an acceptable approach and is even against the law.
A. People got jobs B. I got the job C. Positions were assigned to people
______3. It’s so obvious that people were given jobs just because they were male or
female. I don’t think that is an acceptable approach and is even against the law.
A. On the basis of gender B. Just because of their looks C. Based on sex
______4. It’s so obvious that people were given jobs just because they were
male or female. I don’t think that is an acceptable approach and is
even against the law.
A. This is terrible B. I am appalled C. This raises serious concerns
______5. It's outrageous that so many women drink when they're pregnant.
A. I believe that B. It is ridiculous C. Studies have revealed
______6. It’s outrageous that so many women drink when they’re pregnant.
A. lots of B. heaps of C. many
______7. It’s outrageous that so many women drink when they’re pregnant.
A. Get tipsy B. Consume alcohol C. Have a drink
______8. It’s outrageous that so many women drink when they’re pregnant.
A. When expecting B. During pregnancy C. When preggers
ASSIGNMENT
Read or search for ways how information within a written text may be organized.
ENRICHMENT ACTIVITIES
Kindly write a reflection on the importance of considering the purpose, audience, and your own
role in writing a text. Including your experiences will surely make your text better.
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