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Hào - Task 1 S A
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The bar chart shows the number of men and women attending various evening
courses at an adult education centre in 2009. The proportions of the
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attendance are based on age.
There are more women than men in the drama, painting, and language classes.
In contrast, the sculpture class has more male participants than female
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participants. It can also be seen that most members are fty or older, meaning
most of them are seniors. The lowest were those whose age was less than
twenty years. In a language class, female students outnumbered male students
twice as the population had reached forty people. Next, we have drama and
painting classes. The population of male students accounted for around ten to
twenty- ve learners, which was far lower than the women’s gure, which stood
at twenty to thirty people. Finally, the most boring class is the sculpture class.
It only has ten male learners and a half-dozen female learners.