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Lesson Objective: Students will be able to differentiate the meaning and role of the words paraphrase and summary,
and identify their characteristics and structure in writing. By the end of the lesson, students will be able to paraphrase
and summarize a paragraph by completing two exercises of paraphrasing and summarizing.
Materials and Resources-What materials and resources will you need to conduct this lesson? What will students need?
The teacher will provide:
● A computer with access to the Internet
● Powerpoint slide
● Zoom link
● Google JamBoard
Students will need:
● A computer/laptop with access to the Internet
● Writing utensils: pen or a pencil
● Notebook or paper to take notes
motivation amongst your students? objective of this class: students 3. Students will get to know the
will be able to differentiate the agenda of this class, and they
meaning and role of the words: will ask the teacher for more
paraphrase and summary, and explanations if they have any
identify their characteristics and questions.
structure in writing. And by the 4. Students will listen to the
end of class, they must complete instruction for the ice breaker
two tasks: paraphrasing and activity. If there is anything
summarizing. they do not understand they can
3. The teacher will show the feel free to ask the teacher.
agenda to the students: 5. The students will listen to the
Agenda: teacher’s sharing first, and they
● Icebreaker will know the rules of this ice
● Vocabulary breaker. If they have any
● Summary Practice questions, they can raise their
● Paraphrase Practice hands and ask the teacher
4. The teacher will ask each immediately. Then they will
student to write a description of think and write down their
a person in the class, either a descriptions of a person in the
classmate or a teacher, on paper, class for 2 minutes.
notebooks, or documents. The 6. One student will read out
teacher will require students to his/her description and the
include no critical information others will need to guess who is
such as name, age, or nationality being described. The first
in their text. They can describe student who answers correctly
characteristics of other people will receive a point.
such as their dress, hairstyle, 7. At the end of the game, the
and personality. The description student with the highest score
should contain three short will receive a prize from the
sentences, each describing one teacher.
feature.
5. The teacher will read a prepared
text describing another teacher
in the class as a model to help
students understand how to do
this activity. Then she will let
students think and write down
their descriptions for 2 minutes.
6. The teacher will ask each
student to read their descriptions
and invite others to guess the
name of the person being
described. The first student who
answers with the correct name
will receive a point.
7. At the end of the game, the
teacher will prepare a prize for
the student with the highest
points, and give it to that student
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Paraphrase The main idea presented The main idea presented The main idea presented Incomplete or incorrect
in the original paragraph in the original paragraph in the original paragraph information.
is included. All key is included. Almost all is not fully included.
details are effectively the key details are Key details may be
included. The included. The missing. The
paraphrased paragraph paraphrased paragraph paraphrased paragraph
uses original words to uses original words, may not be written
present the thought in a phrases, and sentences. using original words.
new way instead of Most of the sentences Some phrases and
copied phrases and show correct grammar sentences may be
sentences. All of the and structure. copied. Only some
sentences are sentences show correct
grammatically correct grammar and structure.
and show good sentence
structure and correct
spelling.
5 points 4-3 points 2-1 points 0 point
Summary All information is Almost all of the key Some information is Incomplete or incorrect
correct, represents what pieces of information correct. It is difficult to information.
the original contained, are correct. The understand the meaning
and is clear to information is clearly of what is written. Flow
understand. There is a written and and continuity are
connection between all understandable. Some lacking. Some of the
ideas presented. All of connections between sentences are in the
the sentences are in the ideas/sentences are students’ words, but
students’ words and evident. Most of the some are exactly as
grammatically correct sentences are in the written in the original
and show good sentence student’s words and text. Only some
structure and correct show correct grammar sentences show correct
spelling. and structure. grammar and structure.
5 points 4-3 points 2-1 points 0 point
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In order to be able to complete the third and final mini-lesson before the end of the spring
semester, our mentor arranged for us to teach through Zoom during the last week. The advantage of the
online classes was that I was able to include some other online platforms in the lesson plan since most of
the students did not bring their laptops or iPads with them when they participated in the offline classes. I
ultimately chose GJ as the platform for conducting classroom activities because it is easy to use and
allows everyone to see other people's responses instantly, which makes it easy for students to observe.
The reason I chose vocabulary and writing as the topic for this mini-lesson is that most students will be
starting their credit courses after the spring semester (non-credit courses), so I wanted to help them learn
some academic writing methods and techniques through this course. Because most of my students'
English proficiency is at the beginner and intermediate levels, my lesson plan was centered around two
words: paraphrase and summary which are very important parts of academic writing. In addition, I
added “reword” and “main idea” to the vocabulary section to help students understand and distinguish
the meanings of “paraphrase” and “summary”. The process of learning vocabulary and writing can be a
bit boring for these beginners, so I chose an activity in the icebreaker section that was not too related to
the course topic: describing a classmate or teacher in three sentences. It was a successful activity
because the students got to know each other very well after a semester of study and were very willing to
Through the practice and assessment sessions in the course, each student gave their paraphrases
and summaries, and I gave feedback on each response. Overall, their performance met my expect
ations and they gained a basic understanding of the concepts of paraphrasing and summarizing. The only
thing I was a little concerned about was that the class I was teaching was not the class we had previously
observed, so this was my first meeting with the students. I could tell that they were very active in the
original teacher's class, but slightly shy during my teaching, so we did not have enough effective
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interaction. Fortunately, this did not have a very negative impact on the course as a whole, and they were
very engaging in their writing. I am very grateful to my mentor for supporting my practicum and finding
a way to get all the mini-lessons done before the end of the spring semester. This experience made me
realize that in my future career I will certainly inevitably be teaching in classes that I am not familiar
with, so I need to be more prepared and design more interesting activities to engage the students.
Demonstrates mastery in all elements of Demonstrates proficiency in most Demonstrates development in some Missing or
lesson planning: consideration of context, elements of lesson planning: elements of lesson planning: off-topic
application of best practices, scaffolding consideration of context, application of consideration of context, application of
Lesson and support, checks for understanding, best practices, scaffolding, checks for best practices, scaffolding, checks for
Plan materials development, assessment, and understanding, materials development, understanding, materials development,
engagement. assessment, and engagement. assessment, and engagement.
Demonstrates deep engagement in the Demonstrates engagement in the Demonstrates developing engagement in Incomplete,
reflective process through insightful and reflective process through thoughtful the reflective process. Responses are missing or
specific responses to reflection prompts. responses to reflection prompts. Adheres vague and/or are significantly under or off-topic.
Reflection
Adheres to page limit. to page limit. over the page limit.
Demonstrates graduate level mastery of Demonstrates graduate level application Exhibits numerous errors in English Exhibits egregious
English academic writing conventions, of English academic writing conventions, academic writing and/or APA format. errors in English
grammar, style, word choice, etc. Free grammar, style, word choice, etc. Few academic writing
Writing
from errors. APA format used with errors. APA format correctly used. & APA.
precision.
2 points 1.5-1 points 1 point 0 points