Comments Action taken Evidence of the action taken
Added introduction to the
Add Introduction study before the Background Page/s 1-2 of the study Created a story line of the Elaborate and build-up whole Background of the Page/s 2-10 Background of the Study Study
Shorten and align SOP with Reconstructed SOP to align it
Page/s 11 the title with the title and shortened it
Hypothesis should cater to
Hypothesis answers SOP #2 Page/s 12 SOP #2
Provide more supporting Incorporated more related
Page/s 12-13 related literature literature to the study
Conceptual Framework Reconstructed the conceptual
Page/s 14-15 shouldn’t be IPO framework
Theoretical Framework was
Add Theoretical Framework Page/s 16-17 added
Research Design and Research Research design is
Method are supposedly two differentiated from Research Page/s 20-23 different ideas Method