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OUTCOME-BASED EDUCATION
ENGLISH – SHS
GRADE
ENGLISH FOR ACADEMIC AND
PROFESSIONAL PURPOSES
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I
LEARNING QUARTER
MODULE WEEK 5
QUARTER I
WEEK 5
Objectives:
In your journey through the discussions and different tasks, you are expected to:
1. formulate opinions based on facts given;
2. understand the different techniques in presenting ideas convincingly;
3. raise contrary views in an appropriate manner; and
4. write an objective review paper.
What I Know
Multiple Choice. Write the letter of the correct answer. Use a separate sheet of paper for your
answers.
1. Knowing the facts before giving opinion is important because it __________________.
A. lays stronger foundation for one’s arguments.
B. makes the article you are writing longer.
C. prevents one from giving counter arguments.
D. makes the text more academic.
2. All statements are facts, except:
A. Copernicus was a 16th century Polish scholar who argued that the Earth moves
around the sun.
B. College students would benefit greatly from participating in intramural sports.
C. The capital of Canada is Ottawa.
D. Fur Elise is one of the compositions of Ludwig van Beethoven.
What’s In
In the previous lesson, you have learned the different critical approaches that you may use
in writing a critique/ review especially when you are evaluating literary pieces. Let me ask you:
Why is it important to learn the different critical approaches when writing a review or a
critique? Explain briefly.
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What’s New
Many teenagers are pressured by their peers to consume alcohol to gain social
acceptance. However, students should refrain from drinking alcohol because it can negatively
affect their studies. A study by Lexing and Wright (2003) of 1,350 men and women aged 50 to
60 reveals that, compared to nondrinkers, those who had a daily consumption of at least 30 cc
of alcohol are 10% more likely to suffer from Alzheimer’s disease and other forms of dementia.
A study by Crompton et al. (2005) also shows a 12% increase in liver cirrhosis among those
who regularly drank alcohol, compared to non-drinkers.
The story is confusing as there are many gaps in the narrative. The audience is not told
about how the problem was resolved in the end. The motive of the crime was not explained.
One character that had been killed inexplicably came back to life in the middle.
Facts vs Opinions
⚫ Facts are verifiable statements while opinions are expressions of a person’s feelings,
attitudes, or beliefs that are neither true nor false. An opinion leaves more room for
disagreement.
⚫ You must remember that you need facts to support opinions. Hence, there is a need to
gather the facts first for you to be able to come up with a more informed opinion or an
opinion that relies on evidence instead of limited personal experience.
2. Social Distancing
Facts are from Cone Health (2020) and DiSalvo (2020).
➢ Remain out of “congregate settings” as much as possible.
➢ Avoid mass gatherings.
➢ Maintain distance of about 6 feet from others when possible.
➢ Data from the Spanish Flu pandemic suggests that strict social distancing and other
measures slowed disease spread and decreased mortality rates by as much as 50% in
cities that used them.
Review Paper
One of the most common types of papers that you will be writing is a review or a critique.
Hence, you are expected to be objective and honest in order to come up with a critical
evaluation of a work of art, place, industrial design, or any item you are asked to examine. You
are not going to simply give your opinion. You must support your views with substantial facts
and arguments in order to convince your readers of your work’s credibility and validity. You
must also provide the right description of the work being evaluated to ensure its accuracy.
Wyson (2016) defined review as a text that “allows one to pass judgment on a certain food,
film, restaurant, product, or almost anything that can be procured so that the readers of the
work would be able to make more informed decisions as consumers.” Today, reviews no
longer simply come in the form of a written text. A lot of reviews are already uploaded by video
content creators or influencers in social media.
Let’s Read!
Read the sample movie review as well as the annotations below.
TIP: Note how the writer organized the review and how he/she expounded the thesis
statement/general impression in the body of the review paper.
Make It Simple. You should have a clear, simple core message and
focus, captured in a compelling phrase or metaphor.
Reveal the Unexpected. Doing or saying something unexpected
builds interest and captures audience attention and relates back to
the core focus or a key point of the presentation.
Use Concrete Examples. Use real-life, everyday examples, stories,
or even physical objects to illustrate and demonstrate key messages.
Examples can also be found in the form of social proof like
testimonials and outside referrals.
Be Credible. Establish personal credibility or the credibility of other
experts that support the core message early in the presentation.
Touch Emotions. Give the audience the opportunity to feel what the
presenter is talking about, especially through video or first-hand
accounts of the kind of experiences being spoken about.
Tell Stories. Use the most powerful tool to communicate both ideas
and feelings, stories that go to the core of the message. This strategy
captures the hearts of the readers and hence allows them to easily
relate themselves to your points.
When writing a review, you must present both sides – positive and negative. Since a
review may tend to become subjective – as others may have different opinions towards the
same subject of review – you have to anticipate possible objections against your points or
comments. You need to address these possible objections in an appropriate manner to give
the reader an impression that you are impartial, balanced, and bias-free.
Here are some points you need to consider based on the article Incorporating Objections
and Opposing Views (n.d.):
Example:
The confessional denouement(1) may feel a little
contrived(2) and its revelations may feel a little
uncomfortable, but seeing events unfold from another
perspective gives Lea and Tonyo's love story the bubbly
thrill of serendipity(3) and a surreal(4) taste of rich
bittersweet (Hawson 2017).
(1) denouement: the final part of a play, movie, or
narrative
(2) contrived: deliberately created rather than rising
naturally
(3) serendipity: the occurrence and development of
events by chance in a happy or beneficial way
(4) surreal: not seeming real; like a dream
Hawson 2017
Writing Criteria
Criterion (plural, criteria) is an accepted standard used in making decision or judgment
about something (Encarta Dictionaries). In preparing to write a movie review, it is important to
have a set of evaluation criteria. Having this would allow you to have a clear focus on the
aspects of the movie you wish to evaluate.
For a review to be credible, the writer should be able to come up with criteria. By doing so,
you will be able to present your claims in a more objective manner. Hence, your general
impression should be based on accurate observations.
The set of criteria should be supported by question/s that allow the reviewer to make a
clear and objective evaluation of the different aspects of the movie.
What’s More
Be credible.
Touch emotions.
Tell stories.
Use comparisons.
Question: Did the movie review about ‘Kita Kita’ convince you? Why or why not?
Answer briefly.
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Write the letter of the correct answer. Use a separate sheet of paper in writing your answers.
Did the writer use the right facts to support his/her opinion?
A. Yes, because the writer gave facts about the effects of alcohol on someone’s
health.
B. Yes, because if the alcohol affects one’s health, it may also affect his/her
studies.
C. No, because the facts provided may no longer be true in the present.
D. No, because the writer limited his/her topic to teenagers but gave facts about
those aged 50 to 60.
2. What technique in presenting ideas convincingly asks the writer to give the audience an
opportunity to feel what the presenter is talking about?
A. Use concrete examples C. Be credible
B. Reveal the unexpected D. Touch emotions
3. Which is the most acceptable explanation to the given technique of presenting ideas
convincingly?
“I object!”
4. People get impatient with long-winding presentations. What technique should the writer
use to prevent people from getting impatient?
A. Reveal the unexpected. C. Make it simple.
B. Use comparisons. D. Touch emotions.
5. The statement below explains this principle in raising contrary views in an appropriate
manner.
“Concede where the opposing views are better than your own.”
8. The review must provide the right description of the work being evaluated by giving its
summary and/or background details. What principle does this statement pertain to?
A. balanced C. accurate
B. evaluative D. critical
9. Bryan wrote a movie review of Paper Towns and gave a positive general impression.
However, he enumerated more suggestions for improvement than praise or positive
comments regarding the movie. What principle of writing a review did he violate?
A. The review should have a clear general impression that it communicates to its
readers.
B. The details presented in the body should adequately support the main idea of the
review.
C. The presentation of the criticisms should be presentable to the general
audience.
D. The author should maintain an objective stance towards the subject matter.
What I Can Do
You are now ready to write your review! However, to help you arrive at your general
impression about the movie/ story provided by your subject teacher, you must fill out the table
below called “I Noticed” by classifying your comments into positive and negative. After which
write your general impression.
General Impression:
TIP: Make sure your general impression is objective and shall be based on your
evaluation of the specific criteria/ aspect of the movie you chose to evaluate.
10. B 10. F
9. B 9. T
8. C 8. T
7. A 7. F
6. D 6. T
5. A 5. F
4. C 4. F
3. B 3. T
2. D 2. A
1. D 1. A
What I Have Learned What I Know
References
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Mindanews. August 8. Accessed July 20, 2020.
http://www.mindanews.com/mindaviews/2017/08/film-review-i-was-ready-to-like-kita-kit
a-but2/
Chua, Jed. 2017. “Kita Kita: Movie Review.” Reel Advice. August 10. Accessed July 20, 2020.
http://www.reeladvice.net/2017/08/kita-kita-movie-review.html
Clark, Brian. 2007. “Ten timeless persuasive writing techniques.” Copyblogger. September
26. Accessed June 17, 2018. https://copyblogger.com/persuasive-writing/.
Cone Health. 2020. “Social Distancing FAQ: How It Helps Prevent COVID-19 (Coronavirus)
and Steps We Can Take to Protect Ourselves”.” May 19. Accessed August 10, 2020.
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event-covid-19-coronavirus-/.
Digital Promise. 2015. “Persuasive Presenting.” April 17. Accessed June 17, 2018.
http://digitalpromise.org/wp-content/uploads/2016/02/mc_persuasivepresenting.pdf.
DiSalvo, David. 2020. “Can Social Distancing Really Stop Coronavirus? Look To The Spanish
Flu Pandemic For Answers, Expert Says.” Forbes. March 29. Accessed August 10,
2020.
https://www.forbes.com/sites/daviddisalvo/2020/03/29/can-social-distancing-really-stop-
coronavirus-look-to-the-spanish-flu-pandemic-for-answers-expert-says/#1269d416316d
Encarta Dictionaries, s.v. “Criteria.”
For Reel Tho. 2017. “Kita Kita (I See You) MOVIE REVIEW.” YouTube Video. YouTube.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K953xd2SdBk.