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DEAR SIR/MADAM,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO INFORM YOU ABOUT MYSELF AND MY ENROLLED COURSE
DETAILS.I AM ARVIND NAIDU AND HAVE ENROLLED FOR MASTERS IN AEROSPACE
ENGINEERING COURSE YEAR 2022-2026 BATCH., I AM IN THE FIRST YEAR AND A FULL-TIME
STUDENT, AND WANT TO AVAIL ONE WEEK TIME OFF DUE TO SOME EMERGENCIES BACK
HOME.
LET ME EXPLAIN IN DETAIL, I AM FROM A SMALL TOWN IN THE OUTSKIRTS OF OUR CITY
LIMITS, AND BACK HOME MY FAMILY ARE FACING SOME ELECTRICITY AND WATER ISSUES,
AND TO SORT OUT THE ABOVE MENTIONED PROBLEMS MY PRESENCE IS REQUIRED AT
HOME, AS MY PARENTS ARE GETTING OLD THEY WILL NOT BE ABLE TO VISIT CITY
COUNCIL OFFICE FOR THESE ISSUES.
I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU AND LET ME KNOW IF ANY ADDITIONAL
INFORMATION IS REQUIRED. THANKING YOU FOR YOUR CONSIDERATION.
YOURS FAITHFULLY,
ARVIND NAIDU
GT TASK 1 Test 3
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Paragraph 1: I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO INFORM YOU ABOUT MYSELF AND MY
ENROLLED COURSE DETAILS.I AM ARVIND NAIDU AND HAVE ENROLLED
FOR MASTERS IN AEROSPACE ENGINEERING COURSE YEAR 2022-2026
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