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The scene starts in classroom. Bile and John are booth at their desk working on their computers.

Their teacher looks at their watch and then looks up. He says “class over class ,chop chop go down
pub” .

They exit class. “What do now say’s” bile said generally. John turns his face to camera responds
“race to balcony bridge” with enthusiasm and joy in his voice. “Okay” said bile, pleased with answer
that got.

The scene cuts to the near lift. Bile calls up the lift. “Are you talking the lift” John says in
incredulously. “Yea. why” says taken a back. “I thought you would stretch you would want legs”
John said casually. Bile sighs. “You know are faster the stairs” john said. Bile snorts. “No. “I you
Johnny I can get to balcony first.” Alright John said in response.

Bill/lift guy now enters the lift

John pocks head round the corner “You know I heard sometimes it takes hours and even days for to
get lift get to the bottom, I heard one guy nothing more than bones by time he got bottom”. Bill rolls
his eyes in response. [The lift doors close].

Scene cuts to john running down the down.

John is racing down the stairs bumping into things on landing.

Scene cuts bill

close shot of Bill happily {smiling} enjoying they’re in ride the lift.

Scene cuts back to John

Scrambling off get the landing floor and quickly going down the stairs. [maybe John serval going
staircase and lands in the sequence]

Scene cuts to bill

Bill looks at watch {starting loose patience}

Cuts John reaching the balcony bridge

[Median shot ] john reaches balcony bridge and celebrates .


Cuts to bill still in the lift

Bill is getting annoyed

Cuts to john

[High shot of john wavering his hands in the air] {He general very happy in this moment.}

Cuts to bill in the lift

Bill is panicking.

Title sayings many years later [ or something saying a long time has passed.]

Cuts the lift the finally reaching its destination.

[The lift opens] Wide shot of side of lift reveal a skeleton wearing a lanyard. [ skeleton should be a
wearing coat or jacket] [Close up on the lanyard showing its bills.]

An older john come across the lift and looks inside. {out of curiosity}. He goes into the lift and looks
at the Layard and says “bill” in shock. He sadly says, “I always thought you were going go up world,
looks like you stood still.”

John leaves

The final shot is extreme close up on the lanyard .

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