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Norberto Cardenas
Dr. Nelson
A lot of online businesses try to catch people’s attention, and blogs are often a way to
keep people engaged. The Herbal Academy, a business and online school, offers many services
such as herbal courses, an herbal library, herbal workshops, and a blog. These services are
accessible via their website, theherbalacademy.com. This business utilizes these few techniques
to keep people engaged. The target audience are people who use plants daily in life for medicinal
and health purposes. The word ‘Herb’ is another word for small plants. On August 18, 2022,
Paula Saalfeld, an herbalist that is affiliated with the Herbal Academy, uploaded an article to
theherbalacademy.com titled "How to Use Flower Petals in 5 Creative Ways." The article talks
about five ways to use flowers in the kitchen. This article is easy-to-follow and has four helpful
components that aid her in her message: a tag section and exciting word choice, casual language,
simple recipes, and bullet lists. These components make the article attractive to new viewers and
promote engagement in the content. Ultimately the article is set up the way it is to build the
Saalfeld uses a tag section (a list of topic words that appear in the text) and specific
pleasant words to entice readers and create a positive experience. The tag section is made up of
eye candy words that play an important role in the experience the viewer feels. Because of the
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attractive tag section and word choice, readers will aestheticize recreating Saalfeld’s recipes.
Eventually, readers will partake in the herbal influence. In fact, the tag section kickstarts th
aestheticization of her Saalfeld’s recipes (Saalfeld). This section highlights topics in the text:
Floral chocolate bars, flower butter, and flower petals. Words like ‘chocolate’ and ‘flower’
obviously spark readers imaginations. Saalfeld does an excellent job when she Places the tag
section at the start of the article instead of the bottom. The pleasant thoughts that readers
conceive of when they read this tag section is an attention grabber. The use of pleasant words
repeats itself throughout the article; the following is one example: "These floral preparations are
not only a way to embrace the summer season, but also make wonderful gifts," (Saalfeld par.
19). The words "wonderful" and "embrace" follow this trend of appealing words. Now, most of
the people who read this article will be left with a good first impression. Saalfeld’s use of
exciting words leave an impression on readers because they create a positive attitude; hence,
Saalfeld uses words like "my" and "you" is casual; readers feel more welcomed and more
likely to join in on her recipes if the dialogue is casual. The relaxed feel of the article doesn’t
push away readers who easily become bored. Having a friendly tone keeps audiences engaged
because of the positivity they feel. For example, "My favorite combination is . . .," sounds
friendly since the author is giving personal advice (Saalfeld par. 9). So far, the author is trying to
use the genre to grab viewers' attention and be friendly in her text to make the audience feel
positive. The next part of the text further proposes the idea that the author wants to be beginner
friendly.
Saalfeld wants to attract and keep new users engaged with her content, so she uses simple
recipes to make readers more willing to participate in herbal creation. The recipes are part of the
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instructional section of her article where she lists them; the instructional part starts after the
phrase, "Here are a few creative ideas for using edible flower blossoms" (Saalfeld par. 6). This
section gives viewers the information needed to start implanting flowers in their food and
beverage; Saalfeld wants her audience to incorporate herbs into their lifestyles with little effort.
She wants users to commit and not give up; this is evident from this line from the text, "Blossom
butter is made very easily and quickly" (Saalfeld par. 8). Here is an easy floral application
provided in the article: “blossom butter” (Saalfeld par. 11). This recipe only calls for butter,
flowers, salt, and a lemon. “Floral ice cubes”, another feasible recipe, are made by adding
flowers to ice cubes—the most straightforward recipe in human history (Saalfeld par. 14).
Saalfeld wants things to be understandable and easy to read because she doesn’t want to
lose her audience, so she uses bullet lists. Bullet lists provide followers with an easy-to-follow
step by step; making it easier for reader also make them feel like their needs are being met. The
bullet lists are in chronological order and instruct the user. If she had used a paragraph instead,
the instruction would be harder to follow while making one of the recipes. Bullet lists allow
someone to follow along as they recreate Saalfeld’s methods. Also, Saalfeld puts much detail
into the directions portion of the article to avoid confusion among her readers. For
example: "Transfer the mixed butter into a butter dish or onto a sheet of parchment paper. If
choosing the parchment paper, roll up to form a cylinder. Twist both ends tight and refrigerate
for at least one hour. The butter is ready to serve when cold and solid" (Saalfeld par. 11). In the
direction above, Saalfeld describes how to perform the step if the user uses parchment paper.
Detailed steps lead to successful attempts in recreating her recipes, so previous audiences will be
more likely to return to the text for her other floral ideas.
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After reviewing this article, it can be concluded that Saalfeld wants to create a welcoming
guide that is easy to follow to increase the value of the website. Her casual text style and
structure create a helpful guide to her floral recipes. The author also does an excellent job of
attracting new herbalists. These types of articles are very common among websites that have
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