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Nor-Essay 3 Final Draft Portfolio Edition
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Cardenas
Norberto Cardenas
Dr. Nelson
English 1301
November 2, 2022
society because of the constant possibility of the discovery of new medicines. Thus, studies on
herbs that influence the state of mind of an individual should be pursued. A particular plant,
Kava, a plant that is used recreationally to promote relaxation, is one herb that has been closely
looked at. Thompson, et al. scientific research article investigates Kava-kava on its potential to
enhance cognitive performance and harbor cheerful moods. According to the authors, kava does
elevate mood and enhance cognition. Their goal is to increase the body of information around
kava and inspire people to engage in their own exploration. The researchers present their
findings in an organized way in the article "Enhanced cognitive performance and cheerful mood
success in persuading other scientists that Kava-kava improves mood and cognition is high
because they demonstrate their credibility, people skills, and logical tests.
The organization of the article into sections that break down the clinical experiments
(e.g., Materials and methods, drug schedule, cognition tests, and others), along with the use of
psychopharmacology jargon, demonstrate the authors' expertise in the field of study of the
researched materials, as well as how they were prepared and set up in the experiments
(Thompson et al.). The introduction, materials and techniques, results, and discussion are the
four major components of the text. These sections provide readers with a simple road map that
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enables them to search the study for a particular piece of information. For example, if an
investigator wanted to know what type of people were involved in the study, the viewer could
look through the article and find the subheading “participants” and read the following: “Twenty
Kava-naive healthy volunteers (11 female, 9 male) recruited on the campus of the University of
Hertfordshire” (Thompson, et al. 244). When reviewing the previous quote, it could be
concluded that persons wanting information about the participants of the study would come to
learn that the participants are college students and had no knowledge about Kava-kava. The
headings also demonstrate organization which gives authority to the authors’. Along with the
organization of the article, the use of jargon highlights the authors’ specific knowledge about
psychopharmacology and Kava-kava. The authors’ use of jargon starts right at the
as kavapyrones (Dharmaratne et al., 2002), which mediate the local anaesthetic, sedating,
anticonvulsive, muscle-relaxant and sleep stimulating effects of the plant” (Thompson, et al.
243). The jargon used in this quote (ex, anaesthetic) would not be recognized by a normal
member of the community. Jargon in the paper builds credibility via knowledge. Structural
components and specific scientific diction establish an authoritative appeal and ultimately fulfills
the purpose of the article to persuade readers that the finding of their clinical research is
accurate.
Math is used in the study to measure Kava-kava’s effect on mood and cognition, for the
use of math to determine participants mental state is effective since mathematics is factual and
logical. Logically, the math utilized in the study adds legitimacy to the results. Equations were
used in the calculations of mental states; furthermore, the equation (t2-t1)= (t meaning test)
subtracted the scores of tests taken by participants before and after the experiment (Thompson, et
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al. 246). These scores allowed the psychopharmacologists to compare participants’ scores and
come up with results. Results were compared to the results of other research articles, and the
outcomes were similar. These other research articles that were used to compare were old and had
a sense of credibility. This type of outsourcing was logical and made the viewer believe the
The research papers showcase different charts and graphs to show how legitimate and
factual their study is. Thompson, et al. also use charts and graphs to appeal to logic. For instance,
in one graph, the authors demonstrated the difference in cheerfulness test scores from the
placebo group versus the group who ingested kava. When analyzing the graph, it is evident that
the group who took kava had higher scores than the placebo group. Observation makes viewers
make a logical decision: to accept the findings of the study more readily. Appeal to logic in the
article conserved the viewers belief that the authors’ work is legitimate.
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Fig. 1. Thompson Richard, et al. Enhanced cognitive performance and cheerful mood by
The researchers paper is talks to people and touches on their emotions. The discussion
portion brought out an emotional response in individuals and galvanized self-reflection. The first
thing that was found was the sentences that informed the reader of the aspects that the
experiments failed to accomplish. In the sentence, “The specific kavapyrones, which mediate the
beneficial effects of the whole extract on cognition, still have to be determined,” the text notes
(Thompson, et al. 248). Now, scientists whose interests lay in the research of kava may take into
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their own efforts and attempt to identify the kavapyrone that affects cognition. This appeal to
curiosity that evokes different emotions, will lead readers to engage in the writings of the
authors’. The second thing–that was overlooked–was the heading itself: discussion. The
discussion title of the papers further engaged readers. It is probable that the word ‘discussion’
might make some readers feel as if they are being addressed and cause emotions of belonging.
Final notations: the diction and sentences that excite the reader. Instead of just stating the
outcome of the results, the authors’ purposefully chose diction in some sentences to excite
readers–no doubt the researchers were also excited–and engage them with the research papers.
For example, the sentence, “The present study provides evidence that a single dose of Kava can
enhance cognitive performance in normal volunteers and can increase positive affect related to
exhilaration depending on the subjects’ disposition for cheerful mood,” is promising and causes
working people–an appeal to ethos (Thompson, et al. 249). The use of pathos in the article
through the discussion section helps the author's purpose to persuade readers.
A sense of urgency that is logical is used to attach readers to the research of the article. In
the introduction, the authors create a sense of logical urgency when they say, “In the search for
alternatives to benzodiazepines (BZDs), Kava extract is currently being considered for its
potential. . .” (Thompson, et al. 243). Then, they proceed to cite the following: “In some of the
studies, Kava extract at therapeutically effective doses even compared favourably to BZDs and
tricyclic antidepressants but without the side effects commonly seen with these drugs (Malsch
and Kieser, 2001; Volz and Kieser, 1997)” (Thompson, et al. 243). When the authors’ use this
topic of “benzodiazepine replacement” and state that kava does not have the same negative side
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effect, they are creating urgency that is logical. The strategy of urgency deployed by the authors
makes the audience more willingly to take the clinical study as legitimate.
The goal of Thompson, et al. of their findings was to persuade their readers of the validity
of kava-beneficial kava's effect on mood and cognitive function. The article's division into
sections and the authors' use of jargon succeed in making an impression on readers. Charts and
mathematics help to further establish credibility. Readers are drawn into the text by the
discussion section, which leaves them impressed. Finally, the authors' strategy of instilling a
sense of urgency in their readers is clever because it increases people's willingness to embrace
the study. The authors' claims were ultimately believed because of how well they were organized