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Norberto Cardenas
Dr. Nelson
English 1301
November 2, 2022
because of the constant possibility of the discovery of new medicines. Thus, studies on herbs that
influence the state of mind of an individual should be pursued. A particular plant, Kava, a plant
that is used recreationally to promote relaxation, is one herb that has been closely looked at.
Thompson, et al. scientific research article investigates Kava-kava on its potential to enhance
cognitive performance and harbor cheerful moods. The authors’ state that kava does produce a
cheerful mood and betters’, cognition. Their purpose is to expand the collective knowledge
around kava and galvanize others to participate in discovery too. In the “Enhanced cognitive
article, Thompson, et al. effectively display the elements of their study for the purpose of
convincing readers that their yielded results are correct; the authors’ efficacy in persuading
fellow scientists (the presumed audience) that Kava-kava enhances mood and cognition is high,
The way the article is structured: into sections that breakdown the clinical experiments
(i.e. Materials and methods, drug schedule, cognition tests, and others) and the use of
psychopharmacology jargon show that the authors’ of the research papers are experts in the field
of study of the researched materials, and they were prepared and organized in the experiments
(Thompson et al.). The following are the heading and subheadings in chronological order:
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1. Introduction
1. Participants
2. Drug schedule
4. Cognition tests
5. Statistics
3. Results
2. Correlation analysis
4. Discussion
There are four main sections in the text: introduction, materials and methods, results, and
discussion. These sections give readers an easy road map that allows them to navigate the study
for specific information. For example, if an analytical viewer wanted to know what type of
people were involved in the study, the viewer could look through the article and find the
subheading “participants” and read the following: “Twenty Kava-naive healthy volunteers (11
female, 9 male) recruited on the campus of the University of Hertfordshire” (Thompson, et al.
244). When reviewing the previous quote, it could be concluded that persons wanting
information about the participants of the study would come to learn that the participants are
college students and had no knowledge about Kava-kava. The headings also demonstrate
organization which gives authority to the authors’. Along with the organization of the article, the
use of jargon highlights the authors’ specific knowledge about psychopharmacology and Kava-
kavapyrones (Dharmaratne et al., 2002), which mediate the local anaesthetic, sedating,
al. 243).
The above quote utterly lists several terms that are not immediately without prior knowledge:
anticonvulsive, extract, kavapyrones, etc. Jargon in the paper builds credibility via knowledge.
Structural components and specific scientific diction establish an authoritative appeal–or ethos–
and ultimately fulfills the purpose of the article to persuade readers that the finding of their
Math is used in the study to measure Kava-kava’s effect on mood and cognition, for the
use of math to determine participants mental state is effective since mathematics is factual and
logical. Logically, the math utilized in the study adds legitimacy to the results. Equations were
used in the calculations of mental states; furthermore, the equation (t2-t1)= (t meaning test)
subtracted the scores of tests taken by participants before and after the experiment (Thompson, et
al. 246). These scores allowed the psychopharmacologists to compare participants’ scores and
come up with results. Results were compared to the results of other research articles, and the
outcomes were similar. Comparing other studies that yielded the same outcomes further appeals
The research papers showcase different charts and graphs to show how legitimate and
factual their study is. Thompson, et al. also use charts and graphs to appeal to logic. For instance,
in one graph, the authors demonstrated the difference in cheerfulness test scores from the
placebo group versus the group who ingested kava. When analyzing the graph, it is evident that
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the group who took kava had higher scores than the placebo group. Observation makes viewers
make a logical decision: to accept the findings of the study more readily. Appeal to logic in the
article conserved the viewers belief that the authors’ work is legitimate.
Fig. 1. Thompson Richard, et al. Enhanced cognitive performance and cheerful mood by
Pathos–or the appeal to emotion–was difficult to locate within the text; nevertheless,
through rigorous study, it was determined that the components of the discussion portion brought
out an emotional response in individuals and galvanized self-reflection. The first thing that was
found was the sentences that informed the reader of the aspects that the experiments failed to
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accomplish. In the sentence, “The specific kavapyrones, which mediate the beneficial effects of
the whole extract on cognition, still have to be determined,” the text notes undiscovered
information and, consequently, calls to the audience members' curiosity (Thompson, et al. 248).
Now, scientists whose interests lay in the research of kava may take into their own efforts and
attempt to identify the kavapyrone that affects cognition. This appeal to curiosity that evokes
different emotions, will lead readers to engage in the writings of the authors’. The second thing–
that was overlooked–was the heading itself: discussion. The discussion title of the papers further
engaged readers. It is probable that the word ‘discussion’ might make some readers feel as if
they are being addressed and cause emotions of belonging. Final notations: the diction and
sentences that excite the reader. Instead of just stating the outcome of the results, the authors’
purposefully chose diction in some sentences to excite readers–no doubt the researchers were
also excited–and engage them with the research papers. For example, the sentence,
“The present study provides evidence that a single dose of Kava can enhance cognitive
performance in normal volunteers and can increase positive affect related to exhilaration
a common value among working people–an appeal to ethos (Thompson, et al. 249). The use of
pathos in the article through the discussion section helps the author's purpose to persuade
readers.
Thompson, et al. purpose for displaying their research was to convince their readers of
the legitimacy of kava-kava’s positive effect on mood and cognitive performance. The sectioning
of article and the use of jargon accomplish the authors’ goal of impressing readers. Mathematics
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and the use of charts further create legitimacy. Finally, the discussions portion engages readers
into the text leaving them impressed. The effectiveness of the organization and use of appeals
Notes to incorporate.
Add a section about how logo and Kairos plays a role in the article because of they
mention that they are trying to find a replacement for Benzodiazepines. And they further
mention how kava has lesser negative side effects than Benzos.
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Work cited
Thompson, Richard. Willibald Ruch, et al. “Enhanced cognitive performance and cheerful mood
2004, www.interscience.wiley.com.