Nama: Mir’atul Aeni

Nim/No Urut : 105351100721/07

Topic/Judul

"The benefits of drinking lots of water for health"

Thesis

“ Two benefits of drinking lots of water for health are prevent dehydration, and maintain skin health.

Writing an introduction a logical division Essay

The benefits of water are very important for health, because the body needs fluid intake. Fluid intake in
the body makes the body Diligent (tidak tepat) sebutkan berapa maks air yg di konsumsi consumption
of water is also a healthy lifestyle. Therefore, it is important for you to always ( provide butuh object )
and drink water so that your body fluid intake is maintained properly. Body fluids will also help the
body to be optimais and avoid dehydration. In addition to preventing dehydration and consuming lots
of water can maintain healthy skin.

Body Paragraph.

Drinking lots(enough) of water is very good to prevent dehydration ( topik yg lain ) klasifikas .
Maintaining fluid intake in the body is very important to prevent the body from becoming dehydrated.
The best solution to overcome this dehydration is the consumption of(inafe) water. Dehydration
conditions (dapat diatasi )are abile To afoir by Drinking inafe water . So drinking inapa water , that are
not treated immediately can cause impaired kidney function. Drinking enough water prevents the
formation of kidney stones because it launches the process of removing metabolic waste through urine.
So drinking water is very petrified to prevent dehydration in our bodies and prevent the occurrence of
several diseases such as kidney.( Tambah contoh )

The other benefits of drinking Inafe water infact to maintain healthy skin. ( How the water ) It is
important to meet the body's fluid needs by drinking water to keep the skin and lips( tidak masuk )
hydrated.Water is one of the important intakes that can improve the condition of skin moisture.
Drinking enough water can also maintain and restore lip moisture. lack of fluids in the body the effect to
the deyned skin. If you identifai skin dry , immediately consume inafe water improve a healthy lifestyle
by increasing daily water consumption. So drinking water is very good for skin health because it makes
the skin moist so that the skin does not become dry. (Mengganti yg di komen) tambah penjelasan
supaya lengkap .