Department of Development Studies

Pakistan Institute of Development Studies, PIDE

Quaid-i-Azam University Campus, P.O. Box. 1091, Islamabad, 44000, Pakistan,
Tel: +92-51-924-8086

PROPOSAL REVIEW
M.Phil

Name of Candidate: Komal Rani

Enrollment / Registration No.: 3025
Degree Program: MS Mgt
Name of Supervisor: Hassan Rasool
Reviewer: Fizzah Khalid Butt
Date of Thesis Defense/Viva:
“Review of the FPSC Recruitment and Selection
Title of Research: Practices: Policy Recommendations”

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The introduction paragraph talks Introduction paragraph is changed with

about what FPSC and what is the description of Human Resource
1.
recruitment and no link between Management activities and importance
1
these. of recruitment and selection practices
in the organization.

The scholar talks about working on
2. modern recruitment and selection
2 techniques in comparison with
traditional where as there is no
mention of any of the type.
3. The question and objectives are
1 almost same and are too ambitious
without any background
4. The methodology of Systematic
2 literature review of only 10 years
won’t justify the objectives.
5. The student has already mentioned
3 the Policy recommendations or may
be what she expects them to be
without any study mentioned or
done.
This is a systematic review of the FPSC
practices and recommendations on
these practices.
Research questions and objectives are
different.
Methodology objective is to review the
practices of FPSC based on secondary
data.
This policy aim is to ensure a clear and
fair hiring process to select the right
candidate for the organization.
Based on this study it would like to
recommend that FPSC should set their
full fledged human resource
 Department of Development Studies
Pakistan Institute of Development Studies, PIDE
Quaid-i-Azam University Campus, P.O. Box. 1091, Islamabad, 44000, Pakistan,
Tel: +92-51-924-8086

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department on the modern set up
basis.
General Comments
The concept note requires major
1. revisions before a proposal can be
built up on this.

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