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Charlie and Lisa - Final Script Draft
Charlie and Lisa - Final Script Draft
The weather is bright and sunny, the couple are packing their
car ready for their cabin get away. CHARLIE looks over at LISA
and playfully rolls his eyes, gesturing with his hands to hurry
up. LISA is holding the phone to her ear using her shoulder as
she fumbles to lock the door behind her. The shot is framed in a
way we can see LISA’s wrists which look bruised.
LISA
(in foreign language)
Yes mum, I know! I... mum! We're leaving for the
beach hut now! I’ll call you when we get there.
(whispering)
Mum... Charlie needs this. I need this. We just need
to forget about what happened for a week and
everything will be okay again.
LISA hangs up the phone and walks towards the car, we can see
CHARLIE waiting leaned against the door with a tight, forced
smile. LISA opens the car door and gets into the backseat.
INT. CAR EVENING
CHARLIE
So! Are we excited for our lovely get away? You and
me, cocktails and a cozy little beach hut eh. Gonna be
grand, ain’t it?
LISA
(no emotion)
Mhm.
CHARLIE
(sarcastic)
Oh no! Lisa, we’re going off a cliff!
LISA
(no emotion)
Yeah.
The camera begins to zoom into CHARLIE’s face, everything around
him unfocuses and the colors desaturate once more as we hear
audio of a car wreckage and LISA screaming.
LISA
Babe?
CHARLIE
(not focused)
Sorry, what’s up?
LISA
Can we pull over for a second? My legs are tired.
CHARLIE
But we’re making good time. If we pull over now then
it’ll be dark by the time we arrive.
LISA
(internal monologue)
The doctor said we need to communicate better but, I
don’t want to upset you. Poor guy, I can’t imagine how
much you must be hurting.
LISA gathers some courage and tries an excuse to get him to pull
over.
LISA
(hesitant)
I just really need to stretch.
CHARLIE raises his eyebrow with a smug look as he keeps his eyes
on the road.
CHARLIE
(smug)
Well this is what happens when you’re on that phone
all the time.
LISA
(stern)
Charlie I want to talk about this before we get there,
or it’ll just be eating me up inside.
CHARLIE snaps back at Lisa cutting off the end of her sentence.
CHARLIE
(snappy)
There’s nothing to talk about.
The two sit in silence for a little bit, fidgeting awkwardly
before LISA speaks up.
LISA
You didn’t need to lose your temper like that.
CHARLIE
(internal monologue)
Stupid bitch on her stupid phone, with her stupid
overbearing mother and her stupid job. Why can’t she
ever talk to ME instead? She gets to be on her phone
24/7 for ‘work’ but whenever I’m on my phone she
thinks I'm cheating! I looked at Sarah once! It
was window shopping at best.
LISA hangs up her phone and sighs as she walks towards CHARLIE.
She places her phone back into her pocket and leans against the
car next to him.
LISA
(hesitant)
Sorry babe, I’m all yours now.
CHARLIE
(sarcastic)
Yeah, sure.
LISA pauses and looks out the window pausing for a few seconds
and then looking back at CHARLIE.
LISA
Listen Charlie, I’ve been thinking and I think that if
we want things to go back to normal we’re going to
need to talk about the last few months...
CHARLIE
(impatient)
What is there to talk about? Mum dies, I get sad, I
get better. Happily, ever after.
LISA looks down at her feet passively, she furrows her brow a
bit and looks up at CHARLIE.
LISA
(stern)
You know what I mean Charlie. The Sarah situation.
CHARLIE steps away from the car and looks at LISA. He looks
furious.
CHARLIE
(angry)
No no no, don’t you start this! Nothing happened
between me and Sarah I looked at her once! And you
got in front of me I didn’t mean to hit you!
LISA
(stern)
I know babe but if we don’t talk about these things
and just bottle them up, we won’t be able to be happy
together! Maybe mum was right, maybe we do need to
spend some time apart.
LISA grabs her coat out of the back seat and storms off in front
of the car. She looks back at CHARLIE as she continues to walk.
LISA
(shouting)
You and Sarah can have each other! I’m done Charlie!
CHARLIE
(shouting)
Lisa wait!
CHARLIE climbs back into the car and starts it up. We see a shot
of LISA’s back walking as the camera follows from behind. After
a few seconds we see lights appearing on her back getting larger
and larger.