MINUTES OF ORAL FINAL DEFENSE

Thesis Tittle: Asessment of Localized Self- Learning Module in Earth

and Life Science for Senior High School
Date: June 23,2022
Candidate: CHRISMA B. EDER
Adviser: MANNY P. EVIOTA
Suggestion/ Recommendations/ Panel Member Page
Correction
Removed “Developed” in the title Dr. Mauricio Adlaon Coverpage
be consistent
Remove the word “Self- Directed” Ruth Edradan Coverpage
but Self Learning Module.
Improve the Abstract, Table of Dr. Mauricio Adlaon IV, VI
contents (Correct Format)
Pagination, follow the format, Dr. Carlos Donoso
no page in chapter
Gap in the synthesis should be
included
Remove theoretical but only
conceptual in the framework to
use.
Output in the third box will be
localized self-learning module
Science Supervisor be included
in Significance of the study
Indicate QD (Quantitative
Description) be placed in the
table besides verbal
interpretation.
Subheading be placed in the
results & Discussion based on
the statement of the problem
Lacking of insights in every
table. Every insight should have
citation
Table 3,QD and VI should be
placed together in each table
If the table is too long, cut it but put heading in
the table
In every table, number the indicator & align the
mean value properly
Make a discussion between SDO-QA team &
SLM writer why SDO QA team has “highly
acceptable” but SLM writer has “acceptable” in
learning resources has no resources in
intellectual property.
Page 38, cut the very long paragraph long
paragraph
Page 47, cannot be computed, ask statician
Page 47 (Vergara 2017) rephrase, vague, please
expound it. Relate the second sentence from
the first sentence.
In page 52, Rationale
Conclusion Improve, recommendation &
findings use SLM