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In the middle of the 17th century, a considerable movement had undergone, and it is
the most tremendous and valuable shift in the development of modern human history. The
motion was so-called the great “Industrial Revolution.” An industrial revolution is a process
that moved the textile industry's production from hand-made craft to factory-made products
by machines. It’s evident that the industrial revolution promoted the breakthrough of the
economy; however, every progress and advance has an immense impact on social life and,
sometimes its influences are negative. There's a skeleton in every closet. The industrial
revolution literally had several adverse effects that damaged the society of old times, which
The first negative effect of the industrial revolution on the community was that it
generated a large amount of water and air pollution. Since the trend has changed from
artificial to industrial, the usage of coal has just started, with the growth of the demand for
raw materials which required many apparatus to operate simultaneously; in order to generate
new machines, tons and tons of coal had been consumed. As a result, factories constantly
release substances such as smoke, chemicals, and dust which pollute the environment and
cause serious side effects on humans. In December 1952, a severe air pollution event called
the “Great Smog of 1952” affected the entirety of London. On this day, more than 4000
people died from the smoke and the toxic substances in the air. The major cause of this
disaster was the excessive abuse of coal during the industrial revolution. Although London
has been surrounded by fog for many years, this one was the thickest fog ever; the visibility
was suddenly diminished to only a few meters, and some passersby described it as “Like you
were blind.”
Next, the industrial revolution had a deleterious effect that produced a lot of
unfairness in society which suffered a large number of people to industrialization. Before the
industrial revolution, men worked on farms, and women mostly stayed in the house and
produced food and clothes for their families. Nevertheless, when the industrial revolution
began, everything changed. First of all, with the factory rapidly being built, increasingly, men
were changing working places to factories. After these workers moved to the factories, they
worked about 16 hours a day, six days a week, and there was no time for them to have a
vacation or even a holiday. Furthermore, the working environment there can be described as
extremely horrific and unbelievable, laborers were forced to work in a narrow space with
poor ventilation and toxic substances in the air. Moreover, the cruel fact is that they got paid
for only about 10 shillings of chicken feed per week, which is not enough to cover their living
expenses, not to mention the quality. Besides, there are no regulations to fix this very unjust
environment, which made those rich people dominate the entire market. As a shareholder, to
reduce the cost as much as possible, they forced women and children to work in factories
because they are cheaper than men and easy to control. Generally, women earned half of the
men’s wages while children got a tenth of the men's salary. In sum, from the whole
perspective, the secret sticking point behind the success of the industrial revolution was based
However, some people believe that those who lived during the industrial revolution
period were happy because those people were enjoying lives in a city with lots of new
technology and abundant working opportunities. In fact, the revolution did actually make life
more convenient; yet, the thing they don’t know is, people who lived along with the industrial
revolution spent more than half of their days trading for the satisfaction of money. Thus,
while it is true that incomes were higher during industrialization than agricultural
development, everything was sacrificed to exchange for their health, whether it was physical
or mental. According to the research by Harvard Business Review, throughout the industrial
revolution in Britain, neuroticism was 33% higher and conscientiousness was 26% lower, and
life satisfaction was 29% lower in these areas compared to the rest of the country which
After all, the industrial revolution has brought humans from hand-made industry to
industrial automation industry, and the fact that it actually has a huge impact on the world
nowadays. Without the industrial revolution, the world now couldn’t have become so
prosperous and advanced. Of course, in the process, many things happened that make society
feel dissatisfied today. Some people insist that the revolution doesn’t deserve such a big offer,
and that’s depending on personal opinion because there’s no free lunch in the world;
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