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My art symbolizes a dove or bird, which tends to have different color palettes, which
represent the color palettes of the Polytechnic University of the Philippines. Maroon,
yellow, and white are associated with the symbolism of my art. The maroon color tends
to have depth and passion. The color yellow represents optimism, energy, friendship,
and joy. Lastly, the white one represents purity and peacefulness. These traits
represent our self-striving goals; having the depth of compassion; optimism; confidence
and hopefulness for our success; having the energy to continue; friendship, which helps
us to achieve our goals when we are down with different circumstances in our life; and
joy, which represents finishing our tasks in life. We tend to have purity and peace in our
lives when we strive for our goals and visualize ourselves becoming professional
information technology professionals in a way that we can pursue them. Even when the
darkest storm comes, we may rest, but we will continue to fly high to reach our dreams,
goals, and destination, which will be the fruit of our hardship and our success in life.

My art depicts a dove or bird with various color palettes that represent the color palettes
of the Polytechnic University of the Philippines. My art's symbolism is associated with
the colors maroon, yellow, and white. The color maroon is associated with depth and
passion. Yellow is associated with optimism, energy, friendship, and joy. Finally, white
represents purity and tranquility. These characteristics represent our self-striving goals;
compassion; optimism; confidence and hopefulness for our success; having the energy
to continue; friendship, which helps us achieve our goals when we are challenged by
various circumstances in our lives; and joy, which represents completing our tasks in
life. When we strive for our goals and visualize ourselves as professional information
technology professionals, we tend to have more purity and peace in our lives. Even
when the darkest storm comes, we will rest, but we will continue to fly high in order to
reach our dreams, goals, and destination, which will be the fruit of our challenges and
difficulties in life.

Correct:

My art depicts a dove or bird with various color palettes that represent the color palettes of the
Polytechnic University of the Philippines. My art's symbolism is associated with the colors
maroon, yellow, and white. The color maroon is associated with depth and passion. Yellow is
associated with optimism, energy, friendship, and joy. Finally, white represents purity and
tranquility. Thus, being compassionate and optimistic helps us grow together and have
confidence and hopefulness for our success, and have the energy to continue; our friendship
helps us achieve our goals when we are challenged by various circumstances in our lives; joy
and happiness from finishing our tasks and hardships result in purity and tranquility in our lives
as we work tirelessly and patiently. As we visualize ourselves as professionals in information
technology in the future, we might feel tired even when the darkest storm comes. Despite that,
we continue to fly high to achieve our dreams and goals, and those hardships we endure as we
continue to strive will be the fruit of our success.