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DE GUZMAN, PAMELA BIANCA C.

BSN 2-B-22
“Effectiveness of Eucalyptus Gobulus extract as a mosquito repellent lotion”

There are mistakes in our thesis since it was announced that there would be lockdown
and that time, it was supposed to be our thesis defense.

- For our statement of the problem, we didn’t focus on the skin type of a
participant. So, I realized that we should have focused the problem on the skin
types of a participant.
- We should put other terms in “definition of terms”.
- We should have shortened our RRL because I think there are irrelevant study
especially the “mosquito” part. The focus should be on the eucalyptus, and other
ingredients like coconut oil.
- Our theoretical framework was not even related to our research because we
put balance theory that talks about the effective ways of reducing waste.
- In chapter 3, particularly participants of the study, we should know the skin
types of a participants, and the product should be tested by the dermatologist
before testing it to the participant.
- In our result and discussions, we should indicate the reason of changing in
every product produced. Since we had no time to test our product to a participant
due to lockdown before, we didn’t put our results and discussions about our
produced product. But it said that we should also focus on the skin type first and
test it with the dermatologist. Compare the before and after result of the repellant
with time indication and how the participant’s skin reacted with the repellant.

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