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IELTS Task 2 – 內容段拓展技巧
EXAMPLE 1
Band 4 example
Video games are bad for children and affect their studies. Children can play video games for the whole day and don’t do
anything else. Moreover, children may feel they achieve more by playing video games. Therefore, their results at school will
become worse.
Band 4 例子問題
原文句子考官疑問
Children can play video games for the whole day and don’t do 為什麼小孩會全天候玩電子遊戲？電子遊戲有什麼特質才會全天
anything else. 不做其他事情？和讀書有什麼關係？
Moreover, children may feel they achieve more by playing 和什麼作對比？為什麼玩電子遊戲會有滿足感？
video games.
Therefore, their results at school will become worse. 前面兩個句子完全沒有提及過電子遊戲和讀書的關係，為什麼突
然成績就會變差？
Band 6 example
Video games can bring negative impacts to children’s academic performance. This is because children can easily get addicted
when they are indulged in the virtual world, so they would rather spend time on gaming than studying. For example, users are
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constantly given new targets and rewards when they progress to the next level. Also, children who do not perform well at school
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may treat gaming as an alternative way to gain a sense of achievement. As a result, they might spend less time studying and
their academic results may decline.
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Band 6 思考過程
元素思考過程句子進一步改善空間
主題句 Video games can bring negative impacts
to children’s academic performance.
原因為什麼小孩會少了時間唸書？因為 This is because children can easily get 可以進一步解釋為什麼電子遊戲容易
電子遊戲令人容易上癮，因此他們 addicted when they are indulged in the 令人上癮，以及為什麼小孩特別容易
virtual world, so they would rather spend
會寧願花更多時間打遊戲受影響
time on gaming than studying.
例子舉出例子增強說服力 For example, users are constantly given 遊戲提供新目標及獎勵，和電子遊戲
new targets and rewards when they 的成癮性有何直接關係？可以進一步
progress to the next level.
說明新目標及獎勵可以為玩家帶來刺
激感/緊張感等元素，才會讓人上癮
原因二 Also, children who do not perform well at 為什麼玩電子遊戲帶來的滿足感會較
school may treat gaming as an alternative 大？讀書考試成績好不是也可以帶來
way to gain a sense of achievement. 滿足感嗎？可以進一步說明背後的原
因，大致是因為遊戲帶來的是即時滿
足
最終影拉回解釋主題句 As a result, they might spend less time 可以強調小孩是因為電子遊戲才少花
響 studying and their academic results may 時間唸書，加強主題句中『電子遊
decline.
戲』及『成績退步』之間的聯繫感
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Band 7+ 思考過程
元素思考過程句子
主題句 Video games might impose detrimental impacts on
children’s academic results.
原因為什麼小孩會全天候玩電子遊戲？因為電子遊戲令人 They are highly addictive as players are constantly given
容易上癮，可以在虛擬世界提供感官刺激 sensory stimulation when they are indulged in the virtual
world.
例子剛剛提及或感官刺激，那馬上舉個有關時間限制的例 For example, players are often required to complete tasks
子去證明刺激感 within a certain time limit, where the excitement level is
amplified by the sense of urgency.
拉回主題很多人都喜歡玩電子遊戲，為什麼唯獨是小孩的成績 Children, who are usually less disciplined than adults, are in
最容易受影響？因為他們自控能力較差，大機會為了 turn tempted to sacrifice homework for a few more hours on
the computer or console.
玩遊戲而荒廢課業
原因二 progressing through the levels of a game might also grant
children a greater sense of satisfaction than scoring high in
examinations
原因二的原為什麼玩電子遊戲帶來的滿足感會較大？讀書考試成 Given instant gratification, … , which requires much more
因績好不是也可以帶來滿足感嗎？原因是遊戲帶來的是 time and effort to achieve.
即時滿足，而讀書考試則須要較長的時間
最終影響如何拉回解釋主題句？正因為上述原因（遊戲的易成 As a result, it is highly likely that they spend less time
癮性及能夠給予更即時的滿足感），小孩容易把原定 learning knowledge in the real world, and this could lead to
deterioration in academic results in the long term.
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用來學習的時間用作打遊戲，長遠而言對學業成績會
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Band 7+ example
Video games might impose detrimental impacts on children’s academic results. They are highly addictive as players are
constantly given sensory stimulation when they are indulged in the virtual world. For example, players are often required to
complete tasks within a certain time limit, where the excitement level is amplified by the sense of urgency. Children, who are
usually less disciplined than adults, are in turn tempted to sacrifice homework for a few more hours on the computer or console.
Given instant gratification, progressing through the levels of a game might also grant children a greater sense of satisfaction than
scoring high in examinations, which requires much more time and effort to achieve. As a result, it is highly likely that they spend
less time learning knowledge in the real world, and this could lead to deterioration in academic results in the long term.
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EXAMPLE 2
Band 4 example
The Internet is bad for children’s mental health. Parents cannot control what their children do. There are many dangerous sites
which contain viruses and adult content. So children will learn many violent information on those websites and affect their values.
Band 4 例子問題
Parents cannot control what their children do. 家長平常理應是可以監督小孩的行為，為什麼這裡會不能控制？
There are many dangerous sites which contain viruses and 這些網站存在那又如何？和影響小孩的心智健康有何直接關係？
adult content. 如果小孩根本是接觸不到這些網站，那有什麼值得關心的？
So children will learn many violent information on those 為什麼小孩無緣無故會受到暴力內容的影響？是否小孩有某些特
websites and affect their values. 質令他們特別容易受影響呢？價值觀又會如何受到影響？
主題句 The Internet could potentially impose detrimental impacts
on children’s mental health.
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影響小孩非常容易接觸危險網站，那又怎樣？為什麼如果 As children are still at a tender age, they may not be

是成人上這些網站就沒有問題？因為小孩心智發展未 capable of differentiating right from wrong.
成熟，很多時候未能分辨是非對錯
影響的影響 / 正是因為未能分辨是非對錯，因此小孩特別容易受到 They are in turn more susceptible to inappropriate concepts
最終推論不當內容而影響價值觀，從而影響心智健康 and values conveyed by information on the Internet.
Band 7+ example
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EXAMPLE 3
Band 4 example
Extreme sports are very dangerous and involve high risks. People may die when they play extreme sports. Many examples in the
past have already proven the danger. In those accidents, even if people don’t die, they may get hurt and the consequences can
be very serious.
Band 4 例子問題
People may die when they play extreme sports. 【完整版課程收錄】
Many examples in the past have already proven the danger. 【完整版課程收錄】
In those accidents, even if people don’t die, they may get hurt 【完整版課程收錄】
and the consequences can be very serious.
主題句【完整版課程收錄】
原因列出極限運動的某些元素，令它比起一般運動高風 To allow people to experience a sense of excitement,

險，例如是高速、高空及在野外人煙稀少的地方進行 extreme sports often involve dangerous elements like high
speed and unusual height, and take place at remote places
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最終推論總結由於極限運動的本質及特別元素，令受傷機率特 Due to the risky elements involved to create the sense of
別高，甚至導致生命危險 excitement, as well as the lack of medical care, extreme
sports tend to have a much higher injury rate than ordinary
sports, and could sometimes be life-threatening.
Band 7+ example
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EXAMPLE 4
Band 4 example
Playing sports helps people improve their health. People nowadays are already very unhealthy, so they need to do more exercise
to compensate for that. There are many benefits of playing sports and can significantly improve our health. Also, people are very
stressed these days, so they need to exercise to reduce their stress level.
Band 4 例子問題
People nowadays are already very unhealthy, so they need to 【完整版課程收錄】
do more exercise to compensate for that.
There are many benefits of playing sports and can significantly 【完整版課程收錄】
improve our health.
Also, people are very stressed these days, so they need to 【完整版課程收錄】
exercise to reduce their stress level.
Band 7+思考過程
主題句 Playing sports helps people improve their health.
背景【完整版課程收錄】 People living in the modern world lead a sedentary lifestyle,
where many people sit at the office desk from dawn to day.
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背景影響有空暇時間都不運動的結果是什麼？就是肥胖問題及
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心血管疾病的風險提高 ubiquitous due to the lack of exercise.

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對比+舉例
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影響的原因【完整版課程收錄】【完整版課程收錄】
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Band 7+ example
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