İstanbul 29 Mayıs University

School of Foreign Languages

English Language Preparation Program

Writing Assignment 1 Track: 3 Level: Advanced Date: 28.02.2023

Student No/Initials: Melda VATANSEVER Class:

Topic: Do focus and engagement improve the quality of what people are doing, or would they do
just as well even if they were multi-tasking?

Write a full essay. (300-350 words / 90 min)

Writing

Write your essay. Do not forget to revise it before giving it to your instructor.

MULTI-TASKING FOR EVERYONE

 
   People believe that multi-tasking which is not a good way to study 
  
because they think when people do multi-tasking couldn't focus  
  
properly. However, over the time this belief has changed. The study says  
  
that the new generation is genuinely good at multitasking because they  
  
expose to so many images in daily life. Even if, Gen Z is used to  
  
multi-tasking, their brain system works fast.  For Gen Z focus only one  
  
thing which is so challenging. Therefore,  people particularly Gen Z just as  
  
well as good doing something more than one but other generation also can used to do that .

Multi-tasking is helpful for mental health and work-life balance. 

  
  
  
  The first benefit of multitasking is mental. First of all, in the modern  
  
world, people have to do too much work, companies and schools give  
  
them so many assignments. Thus, people feel overwhelmed and  
  
depressed, they do not have free time but multi-tasking helps  
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School of Foreign Languages
English Language Preparation Program
  
them about that problem. For example, most of the people  listening to  
  
podcasts while they doing their job which makes people happy and it  
  
motivates people. When they are enthusiastic about their job, they will be  
  
more focused on their job. All in all, they feel less guilty when 
  
they are working, they can also consume entertaining content. 
  
  
   The second benefit of multi-tasking is work and life balance. Firstly,  
  
working hours get longer in some countries consequently, people couldn't  
  
find time for their hobbies and families. Therefore, multitasking is the best  
  
option for them. If they do some multitasking practice they will be used to 
  
it and they are aware of multi-tasking how useful is. Finally, people can  
  
find time for their hobbies. The only thing they have to try a new working  
  
technique which is multitasking.  
  
  
Multi-tasking is useful for psychological and work-life balance. 
  
Gen z and millenniums have already good at multitasking and other 
  
generation also have to try this technique. For people who have a lot  
  
of work, multi-tasking is going to be helpful. 

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