1. The title of this article is not suitable and needs to be revised.

Firstly, artificial intelligence

includes machine learning. Secondly, energy system, control and optimization are not
juxtaposed. Thirdly, the article introduces the artificial intelligence in the energy
management system, which is not an energy system, and their meanings are different.
2. The structure of the article is chaotic. First, there are two 2.1.1, which are fuel cell types
and fuel cell system characteristics. Secondly, some parts have fewer words and many
subheadings, such as the four-level headings in 2.1.2. Third, the affiliation between some
titles is wrong. For example, in 2.2, Do fuel cell vehicles include electric vehicles? Fourth,
there are two 2.2.1. The division of the content of the article can be improved.
3. As the frontier research of energy management system, the research of fuel cell and
battery co-decline is not reflected in 4.4 energy management system. It is better to
include relevant research in your review, such as ：
https://doi.org/10.1016/j.ijhydene.2022.12.135.
4. The review should reflect the current research and existing problems in a certain field,
and point out the possible research problems and development direction. However,
some references in your article are still articles before 2018, so you should try to quote
articles within 3 years to reflect the cutting-edge research.