REVISE SCRIPT (Computer Group Project)

Characters of the video:

Vin and Julius – (The Son, Tyson)
Ace – (The Father of Tyson, Ace)
Philip – (The Teacher of Tyson and his classmates, Sir. Raze)
Liam – (Close Friend of Tyson, Fade)
Raneem – (Friend of Fade and Tyson, Laine)
Hannah – (Friend of Fade, Tyson and Laine, Zelda)

INTRODUCTION: SIMPLE MINIMALIST VIDEO INTRO

Scene 1:
(The son and the father having conversation to each other…)

Sayings:
Ace (Father): Nice well done.
Ace (Father): Son, you know what? when you grew older in the future. I think you will be
somewhat special because of what you are drawing.
Julius (Son): Yes, po daddy, because in the future I want to be a pilot.
Ace (Father): Ahhh that’s why you are drawing airplanes
Ace (Father): But remember Tyson, when you grow older in the future life will be sometimes
miserable.
Julius (Son): Why po dad?
Ace (Father): life isn’t a game, Tyson; life is full of mistakes and failures but life can be balance
too. Give your best to everything, show it to everything and rise it up to everything. So that
you can say that life can be both ways.
Julius (Son): Ahh okay po daddy! I will try to do my best po!
Ace (Father) and the Julius (Son) – Just continue their fun and unforgettable memory to each
other.
Scene 2:
The little Tyson went from paper drawing to digital drawing (Tyson is already a teenager and
ready for his next big step in life).
(Tyson is drawing an airplane but in a digital way).

Sayings:
(Camera shot: To everyone in the class)
Philip (Sir. Raze) – Very well-done Tyson!
Tyson – Thank you sir!
----- (Sir. Raze just walk to his desk) -----
Sir. Raze: Alright everyone, I will be ending our session here and I have a big news. (Everyone
looked to the teacher for a moment).
Sir. Raze: After tomorrow session, we will be implementing a plane simulator. So be ready for
the big day rookies. (Everyone in the class was happy about the big news but Tyson was not
happy about).
Sir. Raze: So that’s all thank you for today, session dismiss.
(Camera shot: showing Tyson how nervous he is when he heard the test plane simulator)

Scene 3:
(Tyson is home, restudying everything but really conscious and nervous for the big day.)

Sayings:
(Tyson is rewriting all notes for the big day and his dad step in a bit)
Ace: Hi Tyson!
Tyson: Hi dad!
Ace: (Sit down and look to Tyson and said.) Hmm, very interesting
Tyson: yeah dad… (emotion trigger si pareh eh)
Ace: I heard that the school will be implementing a flight test simulator. Is that right?
Tyson: Yes Dad
Ace: (The father was wondering why Tyson is unhappy about it and said this) Tyson are you
alright?
Tyson: Yeah dad, I am alright
Ace: Hmm, I know you are already cooked up from all of these, I think you should take a rest or
a break.
Tyson: Uhm, I think no need, I actually needed to finish all of this today.
Ace: Ahhh sure but remember to take a rest.
Tyson: Yes, dad got it!
Ace: Alright I will go ahead now (Father stand up and Tyson called his attention)
Tyson: Uhm dad!
Ace: Yes Tyson?
Tyson: Dad I want to tell something, being a pilot is hard or just imaginary easy?
Ace: Tyson, being a pilot takes a lot of effort and a straight universal mindset. Not only a pilot
need to much effort to be one even higher degree engineers need so much time and patient to
be one and even medicals, electricals and doctors.
Tyson: Oh, so and straight point it is really hard?
Ace: I meant before it’s really hard because of the limited technology we have back then. But
now lucky for you, you have all of these stuff Infront of you and helping you but in a proper fix
point. Nowadays pilot is taught with specialize gadgets for easy training and even simple
exercise like virtual flight test. Pilots are commitment higher advance and modernize aircraft
for safe and secure flight.
Tyson: Ohh, okay dad thanks for the information!
Ace: Anytime Tyson! (ginulo buhok ni vin tbh)

(His father goes to sleep and he continue rewriting his notes for the big day).
Scene 4:
(Tyson was nervous and tapping on his desk with his head down, and his friends went to talk to
him)

Fade: Tyson! What’s wrong? You look so stressed?

Zelda: I think it’s because of the flight simulator sir told us.
Fade: Make sense… you can do this Tyson! Try to loosen up so you can focus on this big day!
Laine: Try to be positive! I’m sure it will help you with your feelings.
Tyson: Thank you guys, but I’m just really nervous and all. I’ll try my best!
Zelda: Hey we better go, but I’m sure you’ll do great alright?
Laine: We’ll be here to support you! Bye Tyson!
Tyson: Bye guys, Goodluck!

Scene 5:
(The shot is taken in a dark room while Tyson is having his virtual test flight (Flight simulator).
(And he failed because he crashes the plane and his teacher visit him in the room).

Sir. Raze: Tyson I know is been really a rough day for you.
Tyson: Yes, sir I know.
Sir. Raze: Your test did not meet the expectation Tyson, the moment you take off the plane,
suddenly everything has change. You don’t know what to do, you are freaking out and you are
riding a plane with dangerous act.
Sir. Raze: But for sure I can’t really guarantee you can graduate this year. Things can be failing
Tyson so find better move now.
Tyson: Sir Yes sir!
Scene 6:
(Tyson went home with his failing letter paper on his hand, he want to tell this to his father so
that his father knows what’s happening.)
(And his father drinking coffee or water and reading a book or newspaper)

--Tyson opens the door—

Ace: Oh, hello Tyson! (The father is excited to hear the result)
Tyson: Hello Dad!
--he sits down next to his father--
Ace: How’s flight test Tyson!
--Tyson didn’t answer but he shows sadness to his father, then after a moment he showed his
failing mark –
Tyson: Dad, I am so sorry
--His father was disappointed but he kept everything under control--
Ace: You know Tyson, things can really go down miserable. You cannot really avoid it. Life can
be sometimes hard that you are feeling like you cant fight it back but its fine.
--Tyson look to his father because he was shock that his father wasn’t angry--
Tyson: How is it fine dad?
Ace: Tyson look at this, visualize it. All around the world by the use of technology the
technology really paved the way of how people live every single day. You can’t really see to It
but that’s the reality. How much you fail to a single thing can be done by the use of technology.
You can even find cool ways about it like what you having right now. Everyone will fail Tyson
even in being a pilot you will really fail.
Ace: That’s why grab everything Tyson your era is here, by the use of technology you can
almost find different ways to prove that you can pass and be one. No matter how hard is it with
the use of technology you can do it.
Tyson: Okay dad I will do my best!
Ace: There you go! Keep grinding Tyson!
--Tyson was motivated to keep his dream and never give up--

(Simple Montage that vin is listening attentively to his teacher and keep restudying every note
he writes)
(Then a video showing he pass the test flight and his teacher came and said this)

Scene 7:
Sir. Raze: As expect Tyson, well done aviator
Tyson: (He smiled to his teacher and said) Thank you sir!

--Transition— (Tyson’s father and his friend were happy about the news – Acting only)
(The question that will be answered by everyone and will be narrated by everyone in a voice
recorder) with lively background music.

Ending Outro: (The speech of everyone about the question and the last everyone will be
bowing in a short video for the ending).

Playwrights: President and Vice President

Revise by: President