Northgate High School

Senior Project Mentor/Expert Critique

Dear Mentor/Expert,

Timothy Lambert
Thank you for agreeing to critique this paper for _____________________ . With this form, the student
should provide the most recent draft of his/her Senior Project paper. Please read the paper for content,
keeping in mind it will be revised. The English teacher will critique the paper for requirements,
appropriate style, and mechanics. You are to read to ensure that the facts and research are accurate and
sufficient.

Please make comments on the margins of the draft, answer the questions on this sheet, and feel free to
add any additional comments on the back. This paper is a requirement for the student’s graduation, so
your help is appreciated.

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1. Is there any misinformation or has the writer made any factual errors? yes _____ no _____
Comments:

2. Can you suggest sources for additional research for this topic, such as materials to read or watch
and persons to interview?
No. Timothy cited many different sources and explored several differing points of view. This is a
revolutionary technology that we can only speculate the impact through examining past revolutionary
events in history. I think he clearly examined this point and challenged the reader to have an open
mind of the upcoming changes within society.

3. What information can you give to help the student improve the content of the paper (including
your own knowledge of the topic)?

One item of concern that I've had with AI is that the output is only as good as the input. The potential
for poisoning the data that AI models are being trained on could be used to bias or alter the effectiveness
or accuracy of the output. This has already been realized within the industry and efforts are being taken
to minimize this from occurring, but I think this will be an area that will need constant improvement.

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4. I have read this paper and discussed my comments with the student. yes _____ no _____

Nick Bowen
Mentor’s name and qualifications: ____________________________________________________
Mentor’s signature: ______________________________________________________________
925-788-4988
Phone number: _________________________________________________________________
nickebowen@gmail.com
Mentor’s Email Address: _________________________________________________________
Additional comments: