Northgate High School

Senior Project Mentor/Expert Critique

Dear Mentor/Expert,

Thank you for agreeing to critique this paper for Charlie Walters . With this form, the student should
provide the most recent draft of his/her Senior Project paper. Please read the paper for content, keeping
in mind it will be revised. The English teacher will critique the paper for requirements, appropriate style,
and mechanics. You are to read to ensure that the facts and research are accurate and sufficient.

Please make comments on the margins of the draft, answer the questions on this sheet, and feel free to
add any additional comments on the back. This paper is a requirement for the student’s graduation, so
your help is appreciated.

1. Is there any misinformation or has the writer made any factual errors? yes _____ no _____
Comments:

2. Can you suggest sources for additional research for this topic, such as materials to read or watch
and persons to interview?

3. What information can you give to help the student improve the content of the paper (including
your own knowledge of the topic)?

4. I have read this paper and discussed my comments with the student. yes _____ no _____

Mentor’s name and qualifications: ____________________________________________________

Mentor’s signature: ______________________________________________________________
Phone number: _________________________________________________________________
Mentor’s Email Address: _________________________________________________________
Additional comments: