Modern Love

Joshua Leo M. Balatayo

Grade 11 Block. D
 RATING
CRITERION NEEDS ACTUAL
EXCELLENT GOOD SATISFACTORY
IMPROVEMENT SCORE

10, 9 8, 7 6, 5 4

Legibly written; Messy written

FORMAT
Very neatly written or could have shown presentation;
PRESENTATION OF Neatly written; some
word-processed; more care; may be incomplete or
THE WRITTEN format issues
correct format missing parts of the missing major
OUTPUT
output parts

The first few lines

The first few lines The first few lines
The first few lines did not get
really grabbed did not grab
grabbed attention. The audience’s
attention. The attention of the
thesis statement or attention. The thesis
introduction clearly audience. The
INTRODUCTION overview and the major statement or
presented the thesis thesis statement
points were stated, overview and the
statement or overview or overview and
however, they need major points to be
and the major points of the major points
polishing. discussed needed
the informative speech. are missing.
to be clearly stated.

The speech
The speech explained The speech was
mentioned the
The speech clearly the major points unclear and the
major points being
explained the major mentioned in the major points were
BODY said in the
points mentioned in the introduction but not mentioned
introduction but the
introduction. one/two issues needed and discussed at
explanation did not
elaboration. all.
focus on these.

There was a recap of There was a recap of There was no

There was no recap
the main points and the the main points and the recap of the main
CONCLUSION of the main points
speech ended with a speech did not have an points and no
but had a closing.
very effective closing. impressive closing. closing at all.

The speaker was The speaker was

The speaker had The speaker had
very dependent on just reading the
minimal reliance on the minimal reliance on the
the notes. Rarely notes from the
EYE CONTACT notes. The eye contact notes. The eye contact
looked at the start until the end
was excellent in all was just focused in one
audience and had and had poor eye
areas of the room. area.
little eye contact. contact.

The speaker had a The speaker’s

The speaker had a The speaker had a
well-modulated voice could hardly
well-modulated, clear, well-modulated, clear
voice but it was not be heard and was
VOCAL DELIVERY and expressive voice. and expressive voice.
expressive. There not expressive.
Pronunciation and tone Pronunciation and tone
were There were
were excellent. were good.
mispronunciations. mispronunciations

PHYSICAL The speaker looked The speaker looked The speaker had a The speaker had
DELIVERY comfortable while comfortable while very few gestures no gestures and
using the body parts as using the body parts as and these gestures facial expressions
gestures. Facial gestures. Facial were distracting.
 Facial expressions
expressions were expressions were not
needed to be at all.
natural. so effective.
improved.

Some of the Presentation aids

Presentation aids were presentation aids were were poorly
well-developed using well-developed using developed and
appropriate content, appropriate content, font contained
font size, background, size, background, and inappropriate No presentation
PRESENTATION AID
and images. Materials images. Some slides content, font size, aids were used.
were free of errors and contained errors and at background, and
the speaker used the times, the speaker had images. The slides
aids effectively. minor problems when contained major
using the aids. errors.
What is Modern Love?

But to begin with what is love actually? I've been think a lot about my speech recently

and because of this thinking , I thoughtfully thought thinking these thoughts thoughtfully

thinking my thoughts, And my thought says that love is free, love is open. You thought

love is all about a mutual understanding between a guy and a girl then you are

absolutely wrong. Love is actually more than that. Modern Love is actually A constant

that changes over time , so if change is constant ,we constantly change changing

constants constantly changing constants constantly changing. Love always wins they

say but blames love if it fails. Is it really love? No! Its just a mere feeling that you guys

always say that you've fallen for him, that you've fallen for her. If you thought that love

is  all about a guy being the paint brush and the girl being the canvas and when you

combine the 2 it turns into a masterpiece, then you are wrong. Modern love is more

than that .If I were to describe what love is I would say that love is gay. Gay is a world

we normally associate when a guys falls for another guy but in fact gay means more

than that, Gay actually means Free, it actually means Happiness. 

Ladies and gentlemen I am Joshua Balatayo and I was previously from the University of

San Carlos North Campus and my previous section before Block D was Grade 10 St

James and Saint James is in the Bible, and it is stated in the bible that it is up to us the

people to unconditionally cherish, take care, and most importantly love the things we

see as our own world or things we see as precious. Modern Love is actually simple.

And remember that simplicity is beauty  So if simplicity is beauty, then  we simply

beautifully simplicisize beauty. 

Then to conclude everything off remember that love is more than a mere feelings for

someone .Love is free, love is open and lastly Modern Love is Gay. Thank you very

much.
 SELF-ASSESSMENT

Name: __________________________________________ Grade and Block: _________

Title:________________________________________________________________________________

Recall the preparation and performance of your informative speech and rate yourself according to what is being
asked by each item on the table below. Simply encircle the value that corresponds to your self-rating.

Strongly Disagree Neutral Agree Strongly

Disagree Agree
1. I was able to manage my time well in 1 2 3 4 5
order to prepare myself for the task.
2. I was able to prepare/deliver all that is 1 2 3 4 5
required from this task (e.g. output, attire,
visual aids, props, etc.).
3. I was able to present my speech as 1 2 3 4 5
planned.
4. I was able to fully express my thoughts 1 2 3 4 5
and ideas through my speech.
5. I was able to maintain the attention of 1 2 3 4 5
my audience all throughout my speech.
6. I was able to utilize my visual aid and/or 1 2 3 4 5
props or share entertaining lines during my
speech.
7. I was able to manage nervousness and 1 2 3 4 5
carry myself well in front.
8. I was able to deliver my speech within 1 2 3 4 5
the given time limit.
9. I was able to end my speech well or with 1 2 3 4 5
a powerful statement.
10. I was able to give my best for this 1 2 3 4 5
performance task.

Add your score from each scale and divide by 10 to generate your overall self-rating: ________