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    Will Massey wrote a reflection on revising his American Dream essay for his class. In the original draft, his writing lacked skill and effort as it was missing quote integrations and synthesis. When revising, he had to fix the analysis, add missing quotes, and correct MLA formatting issues. The biggest improvement was properly synthesizing quotes together. Revising took time as there were many elements that needed changing, but it was a helpful learning experience for Will to review his past mistakes.

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    Will Massey wrote a reflection on revising his American Dream essay for his class. In the original draft, his writing lacked skill and effort as it was missing quote integrations and synthesis. When revising, he had to fix the analysis, add missing quotes, and correct MLA formatting issues. The biggest improvement was properly synthesizing quotes together. Revising took time as there were many elements that needed changing, but it was a helpful learning experience for Will to review his past mistakes.

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    Will Massey wrote a reflection on revising his American Dream essay for his class. In the original draft, his writing lacked skill and effort as it was missing quote integrations and synthesis. When revising, he had to fix the analysis, add missing quotes, and correct MLA formatting issues. The biggest improvement was properly synthesizing quotes together. Revising took time as there were many elements that needed changing, but it was a helpful learning experience for Will to review his past mistakes.

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    Massey 1

    Will Masey

    5/12/23

    A Block

    Mr. Smith

    American Dream Essay Revision Reflection

    At this time, my writing was lacking skill and effort. I didn't have any quote integrations

    and my synthesis was lacking. When I revised it, I had to fix the analysis parts of the essay, and I

    also had to add several quote integrations that I had missed. My MLA Formatting in this essay

    was also lacking. My indentations were inverted and the paragraphs were separated. The biggest

    part that I missed in this essay was synthesizing the quotes together. Revising this essay took me

    a while as there were many things that I had to change. Overall I think it was a very helpful

    experience for me, because I got to look at my past writing and review my mistakes.

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