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Essay Outline
1. Make sure each member has a role as a writer for each paragraph of your
group essay.
2. Write down your revised thesis statement in the box below.
3. Each writer, complete the outline below in accordance to your roles and
responsibilities.
Introduction
Hook: Indonesia is struggling with poor waste management, leading to garbage piling up
in open fields and causing environmental and health hazards
Introducing the topic: Indonesia is struggling with poor waste management, leading to
garbage piling up in open fields and causing environmental and health hazards.
Body paragraph-1
Topic Sentence: Ineffective waste handling is a significant cause of poor waste
management in Indonesia.
Detail #1: Lack of proper waste collection and transportation mechanisms.
Detail #2: Insufficient budget allocation for waste management services.
Body paragraph-2
Topic Sentence: Limited waste management infrastructure is a significant challenge in
Indonesia.
Detail #1: Insufficient number of waste management facilities.
Detail #2: Inadequate landfill management practices.
Body paragraph-3
Topic Sentence: Lack of public awareness and participation is a significant challenge in
Indonesia's waste management.
Detail #1: Insufficient education and outreach programs to raise public awareness.
Detail #2: Low community participation in waste reduction and recycling efforts.
Conclusion
Summary: Poor waste management in Indonesia poses significant environmental and
health risks, and addressing the root causes requires joint efforts from all stakeholders.
Restate the thesis statement: In conclusion, ineffective waste handling, limited waste
management infrastructure, lack of public awareness, lack of technology development,
and garbage piles in open fields are the primary causes of poor waste management in
Indonesia, and addressing these issues requires the joint efforts of the government,
private sector, and the general public.
Call for action: The Indonesian government should take a lead role in developing
effective waste management policies and implementing them. The private sector can
invest in waste management technologies and infrastructure, while the general public can
adopt eco-friendly waste reduction and recycling practices. Together, we can create a
cleaner and healthier Indonesia.