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Thái Minh Triết

Lê Ngọc Thiên Ngân
Nguyễn Huỳnh Đăng Khoa

Group’s chosen essay: Essay 3: People nowadays prefer to communicate via

internet and social media. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Requirements Personal evaluation Learning points

Task response Introduction: -Give a thesis statement and

Đăng Khoa +Fully answering the question (Choose background information.
to discuss both views) -Vary vocabulary and use accurate
+Lack background information that can synonyms.
initially confuse readers.
Body paragraph:
+Present a well-organized position with
relevant and full extended ideas.
+Give enough examples and
clarifications to support the main idea.
+Use linking words skillfully which makes
total views connect together (therefore,
thus, in other words, hence,...)
+There are some words repeated many
times (internet).
Conclusion:
-Summarize adequately the essay
main’s argument.
-Well avoid repetition.

Coherence & Structure answers in logical paragraphs Vary your linking phrases using
Cohesion synonyms
Include an introduction and conclusion
Thiên Ngân
Support main points with an explanation
and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately
and appropriately

Lexical resource Introduction: Great use of some -Use uncommon vocabs

TMT uncommon words like “myriad of -structure effectively the
demerits” wide range of vocabs arrangement of the words.
Body paragraph: a little bit too long but
the amount of vocabularies and how it is
used and arrange is brilliant
Conclusion:i like how the words is use
and a lot of uncommon words are used.

Grammatical Introduction: don’t have any mistake in -Use a wide range of structures
range and here which is both complex and simple
accuracy Body paragraph: Thiên Ngân with flexibility and accuracy.
Conclusion: -Rare minor error.
+Use complex grammars (reduced -Check your writing for any potential
relative clauses, dummy subjects) and errors.
accurate grammatical point (present
perfect).
+Use good modal verbs (should).