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Does the report contain at least 150 words?

Has the author paraphrased the question in the

introduction?

Has the overview presented the most noticeable

feature of the pie chart(s) (e.g. the highest
proportion, the main difference/similarity, etc.)?

Has the report covered the significant features (the

biggest/ smallest proportions, or differences/
similarities)?

Coherence & Cohesion

Has the information been grouped into paragraphs

clearly?

Is the report presented in a logical order?

Are there at least 3 transitional expressions used

correctly (e.g. First, Besides, Overall, etc.)?

Lexical Resource

Has the question been paraphrased properly?

Does the author avoid repeating vocabulary?

Does the report contain vocabulary specific to pie

charts?

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Are the sentences grammatically correct?

Has punctuation been used correctly?

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where
relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts demonstrate the main causes that people came to and from the UK in 2007. Overall, there
is a significant difference between immigration and emigration. The percentage of ‘no reason stated’ in
emigration is very large, while the percentage of no reason stated in immigration is the smallest.

The proportion of formal study was a large majority, at over a quarter of peoplewhile the formal study in
the figure for emigration was just 4 %. In terms of the definite job, it were similar, at 30% for immigration
and 29% for emigration. In contrast, the total percentage of looking for work, no reason stated and other
of the emigration is greater than the immigration.

Regarding the remaining categories, the percentage of looking for work in emigration is almost twice the
immigration’s job search rate. The proportion of the accompany/join in both aspects is relatively stable,
they are almost the same rate.