AVTC5_Unit 1_Static Pie charts

Pie charts gives information about the proportion of the

amount of people immigration and emigration in the
United Kingdom in 2007.
Overall, there are significant difference between people
immigration and emigration in this survey . In the
United Kingdom , the most amount of the main reason
for people migration is definite job accounts for three
tenths percentages.
While , people immigration with the reason formal
study the higher than people emigration. Meanwhile,
the most amount of the people emgration with no
reason stated. Besides, the reason accompany/join for
people migration is the same, contributes a minority
percentages. But the reason looking for work of the
people emigration accounts for nearly a quarter
percentages and people immigration accounts for more
than a tenth percentages.
And finally, with other reasons of the people emigration
takes up the remaining a minority percentages and
people immigration takes up the remaining more than a
tenth percentages.
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