Class code: 231_71ENG710073_30

Student’s name: Phan Thi Thanh Tuyen

Peer editor’s name: Le Thuy Trieu Tien
Date: 29/09/23

WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON _6_

Unit:
Topic:

• 1st draft
 • Self-assessment (checklist)

• Peer assessment (checklist)

Content Y/N Feedback
Task Achievement
Does the report contain at least 150 words? Y
Has the author paraphrased the question in the
Y
introduction?
Has the overview presented the most noticeable
feature of the pie chart(s) (e.g. the highest Y
proportion, the main difference/similarity, etc.)?
Has the report covered the significant features (the
biggest/ smallest proportions, or differences/ Y
similarities)?
Coherence & Cohesion
Has the information been grouped into paragraphs
N
clearly?
Is the report presented in a logical order? Y
Are there at least 3 transitional expressions used
N
correctly (e.g. First, Besides, Overall, etc.)?
Lexical Resource
Has the question been paraphrased properly? N
Does the author avoid repeating vocabulary? N
Does the report contain vocabulary specific to pie
Y
charts?
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Are the sentences grammatically correct? N
Has punctuation been used correctly? N
Have the verb tenses and subject-verb agreement
N
been checked?
Timing
Was the task completed within 20 minutes? N

• Final version

The bar chart illustrates the educational status by age range in the United States in
2010.
Overall, the data university degree of 16-75 ages is more than School certificate and no
qualifications. In addition, the number of group 75+ is the most.
In terms of education levels of University degree, there has over the haft of total in education
levels. Group 24-35 was 76, and the figures for 16-24 and 35-50 were lower, at 71 and 71,
respectively. In group 50-75, the number of people who have university degrees was twice as
many as those age group 75+ had the same invention. In contrast, the No qualifications levels
in group 16-50 are the same, at 9 and the age rate in group 50-75 was 30, which was much
higher than in group 75+ is 72.
Regarding, School Certificate in group 16-24 is 20, it same with group 35-50 and 50-75.
This level in group 24-35 has 15, while group 75+ had a significantly lower just 3 in 2010.

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